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8/4/2010, 12:37 pm


My first actual sprite video with flash. If you see any problems I missed other than its to short tell me. Enjoy :)


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8/4/2010, 12:43 pm
Not really a 'problem', but you shouldn't have used those sprites, they don't look too good.

Also, most of this video is filler. You had a lot of the talking take up a lot of the animation time which sets this back by a lot. And the actual animation repeated a lot. The only 'real' fighting was when Gohan was rapidly kicking Frieza and when They were teleporting and missing each other. Also, you ran your credits for a lot longer than necessary... There was no need for your credits to be there for one whole minute, 30 seconds would have been more appropriate, but I'm guessing you hand it so long because you wanted it to fit the length of the song.

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8/4/2010, 1:00 pm
Yeah thats mainly way I played the credits so long. I wil watch out for that other stuff to in my next animation, this was really just a test though.
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8/4/2010, 1:15 pm
The Gohan sprites don't really fit in with the other sprites at all. The Aura still going after Gohan stop isn't at all realistic according to the actual DBZ series you maybe could of could a ki blast or a ki push that would cause freeza to move away like he did. Other then that it was pretty good for a first.

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8/4/2010, 1:32 pm
I guess it was ok for your first flash animation Very Happy
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8/4/2010, 2:29 pm
@Crazyfilms5000 wrote:Yeah thats mainly way I played the credits so long. I wil watch out for that other stuff to in my next animation, this was really just a test though.
That's all you have to say...wow...

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8/4/2010, 2:34 pm
your avatar needs work, personally i don't like recolours.
Anyways, your animation wasn't really very good, What happened to Gohan when he first attacked? He randomly disappeard, you could have at least made him Alpha out or something, and the wind sound effect needs to be changed. The sprites aren't well chosen, but hey, its not actually that bad considering its your first, better than my first animation. XD
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8/4/2010, 3:50 pm
Those sprites are really bad dude, use another ones for your next animation

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8/4/2010, 4:15 pm
Well do you have any suggestions, ive been looking for better Mysic Gohan sprites for my series.
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8/4/2010, 4:45 pm
@Crazyfilms5000 wrote:Well do you have any suggestions, ive been looking for better Mysic Gohan sprites for my series.
Sprites from Super Sonic Warriors. (SSW)

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8/4/2010, 5:05 pm
There is a JUS custom Gohan somewhere... google it

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8/4/2010, 5:22 pm
@garbageuploader wrote:There is a JUS custom Gohan somewhere... google it
I think it was by Ike, I have too seen it. But I can't remember where I saw it :)

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8/4/2010, 5:37 pm
Uh...I guess its okay for a first attempt. But the sprites are crap, and as Patt said, most of the animation is just filler. Meaning that most of the time, its just playing the same crap for like, five seconds. So overall extremely boring, no offense. But its your first, so keep practicing.

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8/4/2010, 5:39 pm
In your other topic, I have already linked you to three of the sprites you wanted... :\

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9/9/2010, 2:17 pm
Please gimme the site for Mystic Gohan Very Happy
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12/3/2010, 8:48 pm
@Peter95240 wrote:your avatar needs work, personally i don't like recolours.
Anyways, your animation wasn't really very good, What happened to Gohan when he first attacked? He randomly disappeard, you could have at least made him Alpha out or something, and the wind sound effect needs to be changed. The sprites aren't well chosen, but hey, its not actually that bad considering its your first, better than my first animation. XD
2/10

well i changed my avatar, and it only took some months lol! whate just do you mean he randomly dissapears, he stopped and i made his aura keep going :bounce:
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12/3/2010, 8:52 pm
Keep it up. Although you may want to speed things up.

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12/3/2010, 8:53 pm
Pingboy wrote:Keep it up. Although you may want to speed things up.

what you mean :?:
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12/3/2010, 9:06 pm
@Crazyfilms5000 wrote:
Pingboy wrote:Keep it up. Although you may want to speed things up.

what you mean :?:

Shorten tweens, things got boring fast.

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That's what you meant, right?

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12/3/2010, 9:07 pm
when gohan dashes in the beginning he should have released that blast 5 seconds ago.

it was ok dnt worry about it

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12/3/2010, 9:11 pm
Pingboy wrote:when gohan dashes in the beginning he should have released that blast 5 seconds ago.

it was ok dnt worry about it

oohhh, alright cool Cool
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12/3/2010, 9:11 pm
Timmy4080 wrote:
@Crazyfilms5000 wrote:
Pingboy wrote:Keep it up. Although you may want to speed things up.

what you mean :?:

Shorten tweens, things got boring fast.

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That's what you meant, right?

you mean when gohan dashes?
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12/3/2010, 10:24 pm
@Crazyfilms5000 wrote:
you mean when gohan dashes?

Hahahaha
yes, it does.

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12/3/2010, 10:55 pm
mystic gohan was hideous. use ssw or lsw sprites

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12/3/2010, 11:54 pm
@D3Anims wrote:mystic gohan was hideous. use ssw or lsw sprites
sekond dat wat da hell rong wit u boi?

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