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on 7/29/2016, 5:15 pm

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on 7/29/2016, 8:16 pm
It's.. a bit short to comment on.

But something I can say, if you want to do those close up camera shots, you should study them a little bit more. They are included to enhance the suspense and make the the characters the center of the action. You should slow down the pace on those, and add a little bit of camera panning.

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on 7/30/2016, 7:46 pm
drawing looked pretty nice. lol but yeah it's too short to say a whole lot. but yeah +1 to what patt said.
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