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5/1/2016, 4:41 am



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5/9/2016, 12:47 pm
NO! Bad Nickson. BAD!

1- No bg, at the very least makeshift a damn bootleg cyber training stage with the line tool and gradient fill

2- The animation is not smooth at all its simply: event -> stop -> repeat.

3- The two characters almost seemingly take turns performing actions, learn to animate things simulatiously

4- SCREEN YOUR FX, that dark outline is a huge no

5- Using a giant clip at the end is lazy, like this overall animation. Take your time, constantly look it over, and put effort in.

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5/12/2016, 11:59 am
I mean... my biggest problem with this animation was that it is 32 seconds long, but there are only 2 real action sequences. That one punch, then the one charged blast. The rest is filler.

I suggest you avoid posting content like this, as this can drive some of us nuts. If this is a test, I would also avoid posting it on Youtube, because you can make test animations to practice new techniques, that does not mean the whole world needs to see it.
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5/12/2016, 5:21 pm
well, I wouldn't say its a bad thing for the world to see your test. the more available the animation is the more likely fellow animators can give their own critique an stuff. though I suppose this could also draw haters to the vid who give no useful info as well, its like a 50/50 thing in the end.

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5/16/2016, 6:39 am
I see I'll do better next time thanks 8 )
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