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3/20/2016, 7:47 pm


So after a year in the making of this video i was finally able to complete it and upload it. Now i started this when i first began maple animations and clearly since then i have grown in my animation skill. But along side that fact i decided not to go back and refine certain parts because it will show my growth over said time.

I am really happy to have had this finished as i feel it's a gateway into greater things for this series. Enjoy

P.S. I know there are some errors. But since i did this when i first started i feel like they should be left in.
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3/20/2016, 9:41 pm
Bro, holy shit. That was fucking amazing. That's gotta be one of the best animations I've seen in a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong while.

Like, holy fucking shit. I feel motivated to do some shit lol

Alright, let's review this shit.

THE REVIEW

Animation

First off, the animation in this was fucking amazing. Shit was seriously on point. Your skewing was great and made sense and you didn't overuse it so great job there.
Sometimes I thought the way the characters landed on the concrete was too soft though. Like at 3:44, when the Sonic FC with the wings hit the ground it seemed like a pretty soft
landing. This was cuz that character bounced when they hit the ground and the sound you used there sounded pretty soft. Other than stuff like that though, I seriously cannot see
any flaws in your animation style. One thing that you did that I REALLY liked was that you gived characters personality using their features. Going back to the Sonic FC bat thing,
whenever they got up they kinda flapped their wings. Small stuff like that is really nice to see. On to the graphics.

Graphics

So starting off the graphics you were using weren't all that great. They were good, but not great. But like you said, your skill improved over time so it's not something I can really
count off for there especially considering that I know how ugly some of the stock MapleStory graphics are. Later on when the fighting actually started the graphics looked a lot better.

Most of your special effects looked pretty good, but some important ones also looked pretty low-res. For example,
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You can see where there is a hard edge on the inside of the effect and it sorta looks bad.

Choreography

This is where your animation shined, IMO. You had some VERY nice things going on here that really helped the flow of your animation. For example, your camera work was very good.
I liked how tried to keep the camera moving most of the time. That's a really good thing to do to keep your viewers focused on the animation. Your use of emote faces was pretty good
at showing emotional and physical reactions between characteres. Also, "6 foot 7 foot" was a pretty good song to use for this. I felt it really added to the chaoticness of the fighting
which was great. I also liked how you synced the animation with the song. Great shit.

Sound

Sound effect usage seemed pretty good here. Nothing really to say here except that some of the uses seemed a bit strange. Like when characters fell on the concrete ground and it
sounded like they fell on a bunch of cotton.

So yeah, animation was fucking great. I would rate this as a 9/10 animation. Sound usage was iffy at times and some of the effects looked a bit low quality but other than that this
is an almost perfect animation. Great job!

edit: what the fuck happened to my post lmfao

edit2: ahh when a post gets thanked, the post background color changed. I fixed it now.
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3/21/2016, 7:08 am
@Rapidfir3Pho3nix wrote:Like, holy fucking shit. I feel motivated to do some shit lol.

yea you really should

anyways this vid was tight man.

the text went by too fast though.

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3/21/2016, 7:46 pm
Sadly, school has started again so it's hard to find the time :/
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3/22/2016, 1:25 pm
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That was fantastic! Rapid pointed out everything that I had a problem with. But again, fantastic job! My own personal problem was the song you chose for the fight. I was enjoying the fight, but the hiphop/rap you chose for the fight was distracting as I was trying to listen to the song but also watch the fight. This is part of the reason that instrumental songs are chosen for fights, due to the fact that it's hard to watch a fight when lyrics are mixed up between sound effects and such.

I also have a bit of a distaste for rap/hip-hop.

BUT NONETHELESS. Your animation was spot on and I had a good laugh at the bits of comedy. I'm looking forward to the next episode!

~SXR123

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3/23/2016, 8:14 pm
@SXR123 wrote:but the hiphop/rap you chose for the fight was distracting as I was trying to listen to the song but also watch the fight. This is part of the reason that instrumental songs are chosen for fights, due to the fact that it's hard to watch a fight when lyrics are mixed up between sound effects and such.

That's actually a really good point I never considered. Lol

ya still a fuckboi tho
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