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FORMED ENEMIES EPISODE 4 By Alvc57 Empty FORMED ENEMIES EPISODE 4 By Alvc57

1/26/2016, 6:41 pm
A new flash animation, I´ve completed, please show your interest by comments, tips, etc. I don´t judge tips or bad replies. Hope you like it. If it is, give me thumbs up!!!







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FORMED ENEMIES EPISODE 4 By Alvc57 Empty Re: FORMED ENEMIES EPISODE 4 By Alvc57

3/11/2016, 12:13 pm
Wow you actually made a "28" minute animation, I dont think there are many animators who make such long animations. Atleast not here so great job!

The show itself looks like it's heavily inspired by Super Mario Bros Z and that is good and all but it would be better if you made something more original. An idea is that you change what makes it look like super mario bros z for example the beginning when you explain what's going on before the animation starts. study

The animation looks simplistic and I would recommend to use 30 fps. If you are using 30 fps try to use skewing and easing. This applies to both the characters and camera.

Overall its a great episode and look forward to see more from you! :)


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