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4/26/2014, 7:11 pm
Well here's another animation made by me and hopefully its way better than my first
Thnx SilveBlaze for telling me how bad it was now ill do better
Enjoy and critisize to ur hearts content...and yes ik the ending sound effects laged a bit so dont tell me about it...and when he's on the wind panel he dosent have his sword on his back Serious 


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4/26/2014, 8:31 pm
I don't know if I've ever watched this.

but uh. it's ok I guess.

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4/26/2014, 9:21 pm
@SXR123 wrote:I don't know if I've ever watched this.

but uh. it's ok I guess.

Hey you critisize ill need to no wats wrong with it O and i meant the guy who yold me how bad it was not u srry
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4/27/2014, 12:02 am
The animation was funny to me for a couple seconds but it got a bit repetitive. The background is a bit dull and i feel it blends to much with your foreground.
I liked your detail, as he was smashed in the ground pebbles were building up behind him from it. In my opinion using more camera work would help to spice it up and make it a bit more interesting. I also suggest you learn to make effects cause it makes animations WAY cooler when you draw things yourself. Everyone has seen just about every sprite background and foreground out there, if you draw things yourself it makes it just that much more new and refreshing and also gives the spriting community more respect Wink
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4/27/2014, 7:19 am
Woah... never really thought bout the backgrounds and camera  movement and drawing things... ok next time ill make a better animation than this 1 probably with a lil more details,background,drawn things,and movement!
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