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4/10/2014, 11:27 am
Ok so I got Alot to say About these but I'm At work now so I'm just gonna Reserve this Spot for my critique..


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4/10/2014, 3:43 pm
Lookin' forward to it.
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4/11/2014, 4:34 am
Oh man, the audio at the end of that first one scared me, thought my computer was going to bluescreen or something.
Gotta say though, while the animation itself wasn't exactly incredible, the fighting choreography was pretty decent. You still have a ways to go learning and experience wise with flash, but it looks like you really did put effort into these. In the third video where kirby shows up, the 3 of them fighting all at the same time was pretty impressive.
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4/11/2014, 5:48 am
I don't know what happened with the audio with the first. I'd have to mute the whole animation to make it work and I didn't want to get that. >_> Thanks though!
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4/11/2014, 12:16 pm
Wow, like the choreography and the fighting. Pretty decent, just work more on your execution and the physics. Nice job!
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4/11/2014, 3:04 pm
Thank you ^_^
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4/12/2014, 1:03 pm
Ok

1st 1: too slow, up them fps you chars are gliding not jumping And falling that looks bad, Learn/improve on your framework, do some FBF (frame by frame) work, polish up on your tweening some are too long A few are too short. All this comes from experience. your cam work, Its 70% good but there are time where you messed up And didn't go back And fix it (you know where they are Like at 0:55).Pay better Attention to your Animation It needs to look like two chars Are interacting with one Another not two sprites being tween by each other And sounds put in.this is what I see Through out THIS ENTIRE ANIMATION. take your time. you need to illustrate impacts and interactions in your fight scenes.

the 2nd Animation: ok this one they are moving A bit better you are on the right track but you still got A long way to go they are still floating like there's zero gravity your bg are too jpegged like at 1:41 you need to look into getting better quality ones. And them effects, I think effects is A matter of preference, but make sure the quality is good. these are not.Same goes for the 1st Animation. How you used the was good but how they looked was bad.

Also I'm Assuming you are using Flash to Animate And fireworks to import/edit/clean your sprites.If not the we need to know what you are working with to better help you.

3rd Animation:
.....After watching it,just refer to the Above posts And use it towards this one. I will say this like the others said the choreography is good,lots of potential...you just need more experience and more Attention to the details of your work.



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4/12/2014, 1:06 pm
Yes I am using flash and fireworks if there is something better please tell me.
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4/12/2014, 11:42 pm
@SmackaDerp wrote:Yes I am using flash and fireworks if there is something better please tell me.

Paint and windows movie maker from what I hear.
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4/12/2014, 11:56 pm
Thanks but don't forget Windows Live Movie Maker
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4/13/2014, 12:06 am
@AlexTGS wrote:
@SmackaDerp wrote:Yes I am using flash and fireworks if there is something better please tell me.

Paint and windows movie maker from what I hear.

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say that again?

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4/13/2014, 3:49 am
he meant paint.NET, not paint, they're both pretty complex programs, but paint.NET work can uploaded to the internet and work with flash, that's where the NET comes from.
Paint works in a way that works better with After effects and some 3D programs like Dreamweaver and Zbrush.

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4/13/2014, 7:06 am
Tal I know for a fact he legitimately meant Paint and movie maker. I'm sure it was a joke. Paint.Net is pretty hard to confuse for regular old Paint.

I know about paint.net so I'm pretty sure he meant the former and not what you're thinking of.

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4/13/2014, 9:46 am
Lol it was a joke. Brings me back to the old days haha. I actually hate windows live movie maker more then the original.
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4/13/2014, 12:24 pm
Same here lol Razz
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4/13/2014, 12:57 pm
@Tal wrote:he meant paint.NET, not paint, they're both pretty complex programs, but paint.NET work can uploaded to the internet and work with flash, that's where the NET comes from.
Paint works in a way that works better with After effects and some 3D programs like Dreamweaver and Zbrush.

Yeah cause i was totally being serious.

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4/13/2014, 1:06 pm
Here's a tip for comedy.

Make it short. Either that, or totally obvious. caps lock helps

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4/13/2014, 3:21 pm
@SXR123 wrote:Here's a tip for comedy.

Make it short. Either that, or totally obvious. caps lock helps

Short, obvious and caps lock?

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4/14/2014, 3:39 pm
Out of curiosity who are you inspired by?

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4/14/2014, 3:49 pm
Various amounts of people. Wayyyy back when I used to do animations (2008) that were crappy beyond belief. They were inspired by smbz. I once was at a drought and came back to animating around 2012. My inspirations were sonicxrulez, destructionseries and most of all Mr. Lange.
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4/14/2014, 5:43 pm
@SmackaDerp wrote:sonicxrulez

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I...I never thought I'd see this day... I PROMISED MYSELF I WOULDN'T CRY...

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4/14/2014, 5:44 pm
xD I was hype when you commented on my Zatch vs Kido some time back
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4/14/2014, 6:41 pm
@SXR123 wrote:
@SmackaDerp wrote:sonicxrulez

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I...I never thought I'd see this day... I PROMISED MYSELF I WOULDN'T CRY...


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