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1/11/2014, 5:46 pm
This was my part for 5h0ck's collab. I guess it's abandoned now though, so I'll put a link to it here for you all to see. I already know the pacing is a bit slow as well as other problems, but go ahead and CnC anyway! :)

Here's the link: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/491465f40ad2b5600f89cbf46d5d1ac3
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1/11/2014, 6:13 pm
yeah it's mostly the slow pacing that kinda ruins it. otherwise it's quite nice
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1/11/2014, 10:38 pm
I like how Zero isn't even dodging while that guy right next to him just keeps shooting and barely missing.

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1/11/2014, 11:27 pm
I took a liking to your sprite animating. From the pose transitions, to the head chopping. It's got a touch of finesse to it. As Leo said, though, the pacing was slow. There was a couple of parts where the slowness was very unnecessary. It didn't line up nicely or makes sense with the other parts that have decent pacing. Also, I laughed at the free fall part. It's like someone's shooting at you five feet away and supposedly misses while you're moving with little to no effort. It was okay, but could have been executed dramatically better.

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1/12/2014, 9:01 pm
@Leo wrote:yeah it's mostly the slow pacing that kinda ruins it. otherwise it's quite nice

Yeah, I agree although it's really mediocre at best.

@Mr Lange wrote:I like how Zero isn't even dodging while that guy right next to him just keeps shooting and barely missing.
The free fall part? Yeah, I should have sped that part up to get the feel I was really going for, but I was lazy and hadn't really animated in a while. Additionally, this was right before winter break started and I knew I wouldn't have a lot of time during winter break so I just left it like this, so I guess this is technically unfinished, but I felt it was at least good enough to show in the collab so I sent it to 5h0ck.

@Ping wrote:I took a liking to your sprite animating. From the pose transitions, to the head chopping. It's got a touch of finesse to it. As Leo said, though, the pacing was slow. There was a couple of parts where the slowness was very unnecessary. It didn't line up nicely or makes sense with the other parts that have decent pacing. Also, I laughed at the free fall part. It's like someone's shooting at you five feet away and supposedly misses while you're moving with little to no effort. It was okay, but could have been executed dramatically better.

Totally agree. I was planning a much more faster paced animation, but I lacked the time to do it. Of that whole level I don't think I even used 5% of what I had prepped to use. The beginning was going to be sorta the same up until Zero chases the purple robot down the shaft. Right there I was going to have the purple bot flying through different corridors and a pit fall trap before Zero finally catching up to him and destroying many other little bots along the way. Then Phantom (one of the characters from the Mega Man Zero franchise) was going to show up all ninja like (because he's a ninja) and him and Zero were gonna have an epic, fast-paced battle since they're both pretty quick. Then of course Zero defeats him and takes the data disk thing. But yeah, no time unfortunately lol
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1/12/2014, 9:12 pm
I mean it was well animated, like the mechanics and everything.

However, some of the things that happened were a bit, odd. As Lange said, that free falling scene was just..questionable. Zero isn't really making any attempt to dodge anything, while I know you have some excuses, that excuse really doesn't cover it. Also, the robots that Zero were fighting against had to have been lagging, because they had zero reaction time to when Zero came up to kill them. You gotta put more life into this, the robots don't really make it difficult for Zero to just barge in and do what he wants.

This also seemed like you were unable to reach the time limit you had, and you just slowed things down so you could reach it. Things should have been more fast paced, this is a base infiltration! He should be sprinting, dodging bullets, hiding behind corners, anything like that. Yet, he just walks through casually, and apparently way down after this jump, there's a what appears to be harddrive just waiting for him to take.

Just need to make it seem, a little more logical.

Overall, the animation itself though, like I said, was okay. It's just, things that happened, questionable.
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1/12/2014, 10:07 pm
@Rapidfir3Pho3nix wrote:

Totally agree. I was planning a much more faster paced animation, but I lacked the time to do it. Of that whole level I don't think I even used 5% of what I had prepped to use. The beginning was going to be sorta the same up until Zero chases the purple robot down the shaft. Right there I was going to have the purple bot flying through different corridors and a pit fall trap before Zero finally catching up to him and destroying many other little bots along the way. Then Phantom (one of the characters from the Mega Man Zero franchise) was going to show up all ninja like (because he's a ninja) and him and Zero were gonna have an epic, fast-paced battle since they're both pretty quick. Then of course Zero defeats him and takes the data disk thing. But yeah, no time unfortunately lol
I can tell that your heart, blood, sweat and tears weren't all into this. From what you just told me, it seemed like that free fall was more of an improvisation. You could have well executed all those ideas, but it's just you didn't have the strength or endurance to put in that work. I agree, you may have not had the time, or the time to prioritize those ideas, but just to me, the animation could have been efficient. You just made it sufficient. But no biggie. It was a decent animation. Now, you can have the time to make something better.

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1/12/2014, 10:18 pm
all things considered, you could probably remake this how you originally envisioned it. and with no collab deadline you pretty much have unlimited time.

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1/12/2014, 10:42 pm
@5h0ck wrote:all things considered, you could probably remake this how you originally envisioned it. and with no collab deadline you pretty much have unlimited time.

I may actually do that. Lol
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1/12/2014, 11:28 pm
@Rapidfir3Pho3nix wrote:
@5h0ck wrote:all things considered, you could probably remake this how you originally envisioned it. and with no collab deadline you pretty much have unlimited time.

I may actually do that. Lol
I would love if you did, I feel something to this.
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1/13/2014, 6:33 am
Who knows the collab may rise again. That way if you actually redo it and put in everyone's suggestions and such you'll be ahead of the game with an awesome part.

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1/13/2014, 10:34 am
@Rapidfir3Pho3nix wrote:
@5h0ck wrote:all things considered, you could probably remake this how you originally envisioned it. and with no collab deadline you pretty much have unlimited time.

I may actually do that. Lol
Then, you could animate what should have happened. What else should have happened

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1/13/2014, 12:07 pm
@Similuo wrote:Who knows the collab may rise again.

If it does it'll be because someone else decides to start it up and organize(wich I'll have no problems with if someone does take the idea)

I have 2 other collab ideas though i'll probably wait untill i'm fairly confident people will actually participate when they say they will. that being said more than half of them joined another collab days after mine started...so i guess they stretched their plate too thin. and then real life hit too...idk......fuq

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1/13/2014, 7:05 pm
Whoa, I wanted to make a part for this collab...since he's remaking this, I'll make one, he can fix this, you got one, and we only need like 5-7 parts.
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1/13/2014, 8:30 pm
if your serious then open the thread back up and tell the people on that list(first page) to get off their asses.

on second though wait, i'll do my part for langes callab first since i said i would.....so open it back up afterwards....maybe...if i'm still up for it....

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1/13/2014, 10:26 pm
I'm down for it. I'm actively animating right now, so I can definitely come through.

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1/14/2014, 7:57 am
Ah shiet, this is sounding good. We should keep in mind that some of us are in college though lol but I think I can still work on this every so often. Maybe like once every few days or so.
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1/14/2014, 1:03 pm
Gotta admit I kinda feel bad about not doing anything for that collab also, so...

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1/14/2014, 2:00 pm
@xKAreloadedx wrote:Gotta admit I kinda feel bad about not doing anything for that collab also, so...
C'mon and join us Wink

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1/14/2014, 8:16 pm
hmmm, if it opens back up. I'll do it

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1/14/2014, 9:23 pm
Good! It sounds like we've got a couple of more people. I'd say after the current collaborations are over, we should reopen this.

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1/15/2014, 6:54 pm
I'm also in college but a couple frames here and there shouldn't hurt. Like I said, it doesn't have to be a huge collab with like 10+ people, 5 or so is fine, better than nothing.
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1/15/2014, 11:34 pm
i wonder how many of them actually started though.

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1/15/2014, 11:37 pm
I actually started the collab and was well on my way through it. But I moved residences and lost my old computer (took no files with me >_<). So I mean if it does get started up again you can count of my entry.

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1/16/2014, 12:19 am
^^
ANOTHER SPRITAN! This collab can be redeemed!

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