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- MQartsSpritan
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MQarts's not so amazing art
11/30/2013, 11:05 am
Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
11/30/2013, 2:06 pm
it is strange but at the same time it fits that characters facial design....making look natural...thats how i see it anyways

Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
11/30/2013, 5:53 pm
why did you switch users? I coulda just changed your name or something

We can learn from the past
But those days are gone
We can hope for the future
But there may not be one
-Mike Portnoy "A Change of Seasons"
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
12/14/2013, 4:32 am
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
12/30/2013, 12:28 am
Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
12/30/2013, 12:44 am
that bird look good as hell.
zelda looks good too but her earing kinda looks like a tag
zelda looks good too but her earing kinda looks like a tag

- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
12/30/2013, 1:25 am
thanks ill fix the earring
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
1/9/2014, 1:56 am
- PingSpritan
- Age : 24
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
1/9/2014, 2:07 am
These are good. By, good, I mean above average. Your shapes and forms are their, and you have a good understanding of shadows and light sourcing, but they can all be sharper.
Other than that, this is legit :3!!!!
Other than that, this is legit :3!!!!

@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
1/9/2014, 3:33 am
thanks ping ill keep on learning more to get better
- PingSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
1/9/2014, 12:01 pm
Mos def, I can't wait to see more from you :3

@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
1/25/2014, 11:39 am
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
1/29/2014, 2:47 am
- LeoModerator
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
1/29/2014, 2:53 am
oh that first one is pretty nice though. it's mostly the legs that bother me.
as for the lion ones, well its eyes don't really blend nicely with the rest of the face. its too harsh, if you get what i mean.
also the little piece of land he was on top of was lacking, and it didn't really fit perspective-wise.
keep up the good work!
as for the lion ones, well its eyes don't really blend nicely with the rest of the face. its too harsh, if you get what i mean.
also the little piece of land he was on top of was lacking, and it didn't really fit perspective-wise.
keep up the good work!
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
1/29/2014, 6:37 am
thanks for the critique leo, I need to practice more I guess
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/3/2014, 5:21 am
Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/3/2014, 7:04 am
Looks pretty good! My only complaint is that his hands look... feminine...

ADOPT A CHAO!!
(figuratively speaking of course)
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/3/2014, 7:37 am
hmm guess you're right
gotta look at hands more
gotta look at hands more
- PingSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/3/2014, 5:26 pm
It's good stuff here. I could definitely learn from you bro!

@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/3/2014, 8:48 pm
i think it cuz he actually put nails on hands (which most cartoon artists don't really do), then he made them sharpish/round instead of squareish/flat, and to top it off its lightly pink (which is the natural color of nails, but looks really gay when drawn).

We can learn from the past
But those days are gone
We can hope for the future
But there may not be one
-Mike Portnoy "A Change of Seasons"
- MQartsSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/3/2014, 10:09 pm
Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/3/2014, 10:19 pm
the shading is nice, though not sure why teh smoke coming out of his mouth isn't shaded

We can learn from the past
But those days are gone
We can hope for the future
But there may not be one
-Mike Portnoy "A Change of Seasons"
- PingSpritan
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Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/3/2014, 11:29 pm
More detail with the surface of things (shading, lighting detail) and the texture of skin or detail of it would solve most of his flaws.

@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
- MQartsSpritan
- Age : 27
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Registration date : 2013-11-30
Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/4/2014, 12:03 am
- PingSpritan
- Age : 24
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Registration date : 2010-09-15
Location : Madison Wisconsin
Re: MQarts's not so amazing art
2/4/2014, 12:16 am
Looks okay!

@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
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