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10/15/2013, 11:05 pm
the hand that's on our left is wonky.
face is cool but i think that the mouth could be moved further up. idk.

also, is her head supposed to be turning away from us? i feel it's kind of what you wanted to do (i am probably wrong), but idk :s
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10/15/2013, 11:11 pm
@Leo wrote:the hand that's on our left is wonky.
face is cool but i think that the mouth could be moved further up. idk.

also, is her head supposed to be turning away from us? i feel it's kind of what you wanted to do (i am probably wrong), but idk :s
When i sketch I just put in the basic shapes so i know what should be going, not an excuse for the hideous hand though lmao.
The mouth, i don't know whether i should move it up or not, it seems ok where it is, but we'll see when I get further in.
As for the face as a whole, yes it doesn't read too well. Her head is cocked away from us but shes looking in the other direction; i think if I make her looking at us and leave the face cocked to the side it should look better, we'll see.
thanks for the input bb
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10/15/2013, 11:30 pm
no problem, im always here 4 u
also, if you're trying to make her head go away, do something more like this
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10/15/2013, 11:43 pm
Figured it out.  Her head wasn't back far enough; there were some conflicts going on with the neck and back areas.  Also shes looking down, and it makes a bit more sense now, with some minor changes.
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Also heres an outline of what her body is doing if you're interested in that.  Used it to fix the head issue lol.
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(after looking at this for a bit longer now i see theres an issue with the shoulder to our left...)
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10/16/2013, 12:09 am
yeah, that does make more sense.
keep it up!
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10/16/2013, 4:25 pm
Slowly working my way down... its starting to come together now.  Dealing with a lot of folds in one place though lol  Hopefully they'll turn out right and won't give me too many issues.
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10/16/2013, 5:50 pm
I feel like her breasts are too far apart. Like, her right breast is just directly under here shoulder, which is kinda weird.

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10/17/2013, 9:34 pm
Fixed.
And yes I'm taking my sweet time on this, want it to look really good when I'm done.
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10/17/2013, 11:39 pm
SHE'S GONNA KILL MMEEEEEE

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10/17/2013, 11:49 pm
yeah, now that i think of it, it seems like she's about to throw a fireball at us
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10/18/2013, 12:51 pm
...I'm strangely turned on by her
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10/18/2013, 6:13 pm
The shading contrasts the eyes, making her look psychotic. That turns me on.

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10/21/2013, 8:38 pm
Thanks for the positive reviews C:
Taking a break from zoey and messing with an older sketch of gaige
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10/21/2013, 8:58 pm
not that sure about that nose. and the thumb is missing a joint.

otherwise it's p cool
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10/21/2013, 9:39 pm
Maybe he didn't want the thumb to have a joint.

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10/21/2013, 9:50 pm
hey, at least i'm trying to give some feedback here.
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10/21/2013, 10:09 pm
In most cases (unless deformed) shouldn't the thumb cross over the ring finger or pinky when making the peace sign?

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10/21/2013, 10:22 pm
yeah, there's that too. it's usually over the ring finger, although i'm pretty sure most people can reach their pinky as well.
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10/27/2013, 6:41 pm
Finishing up my iron man suit
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10/27/2013, 7:14 pm
@Knux wrote:Finishing up my iron man suit
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just finished this bitch
LOL , lmao ,YAAAAAAAAAAAAY affraid confused Sleep bom king lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! afro afro afro 

This is cool!!!!!!! U should keep up that art man

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10/27/2013, 9:02 pm
was expecting a drawing
wasn't disappointed anyway

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10/27/2013, 9:12 pm
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10/27/2013, 9:17 pm
Oh, you can have a drawing too c:
This is a WIP sketch. This one actually WILL get finished though. and soon.
(and thank you guys)
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10/27/2013, 9:33 pm
actually looks kinda cute (curse my heart)

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10/27/2013, 10:01 pm
gosh the girl is SO CUTE AAAAAAAAAA
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