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10/8/2013, 10:25 am
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d4c25b78185b11e8f03ffce44b3362de
This is the test I made,I would upload it normally to Youtube or something but,my computer has some issues.And I have a Shadow vs Vegeta sprite test it's not that good but i'm just starting to animate.
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d033d7382658ce61048846c82b8eed02
Shadow and Vegeta was made first by the way.
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10/8/2013, 10:52 am
Alright, well. That was something.

Ok so, here's a little advice. You used waaayyy too many sound clips. Make your transformations short and sweet. When I was watching goku transform, I didn't know if the video was over and there was a problem or if he was still transforming. Make sure there's some variety in your sound clips as well, I heard a lot of the same ones when goku was transforming. the transformation video was also too long.

Try using a V-cam as well, in both animations there was no V-cam. So not only was it hard to tell what the characters were talking about, we couldn't see what they were doing either. For sprite videos, V-Cams are essential.

When I watched the shadow vs vegeta video, the text was moving too fast for me to read, make sure they're slowed down enough so we can tell what they're saying.

Lastly, your sprites were misaligned, make sure they're lined up better with each other.

I think you did a good job with these, you just gotta keep practicing. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

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10/8/2013, 3:29 pm
well I think that it was quiet descent but shadow vs vegeta the combo was repeating over and over but thats your first animation so it's fine

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10/8/2013, 3:33 pm
Not bad for a test, but you need to work on your aligning,
''your sprites were misaligned, make sure they're lined up better with each other''
What Sxr said^
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10/8/2013, 4:14 pm
Btw, to help with aligning your sprites turn on the Onion Skin which is under your timeline where all the frames are.
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10/9/2013, 9:09 am
Yeah,I noticed when Vegeta was kinda moving around the place,and I tried using V-Cam but Flash glitched a bit and I can't really get the V-Cam how I want it it,and the Flash text is meh,but I'll practice some more on it. sunny 
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