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9/20/2013, 12:25 am
@SXR123 wrote:but she doesn't cry about how weak she is.

stop insulting Amy.
...Amy is an oblivious Sakura

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9/20/2013, 12:29 am
I actually like archie amy more than I like game amy.

She's less flirty and is actually kinda cool.

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9/20/2013, 12:36 am
And thus, D3 was lost...

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9/20/2013, 12:40 am
YES. BECAUSE I R COOL.

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9/20/2013, 12:47 am
Archie Amy >(infinity> video game Amy.

Well actually all the Archie Sonic universe is better than the Sonic video game universe. ESPECIALLY KNUCKLES OMG, I freaking hate how Knuckles is portrayed like a babbling idiot in the video games. It really gives the Echidna race a bad reputation considering Knuckles IS the GUARDIAN of the MASTER EMERALD. Archie Knuckles is pure badassery. Also, I'm still trying to figure out why the hell Scourge hasn't been introduced into the games yet. Like, I know he is originated from the Archie comics but there is some REALLY good content with the Scourge arc of the series...
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9/20/2013, 1:03 am
well anyway, I did kind of deviate the topic a little, so yeah. let's try and get back on track XD

but I totally agree with you though

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9/21/2013, 4:39 pm
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@Crazyfilms5000 wrote:Regardless of whether or not this is an old script, and since I've told you I've been waiting to see you do this for a while and pull it off correctly, and since your clearly planning on doing a sequel I will review this with the good ol' Spritan charm.

I'll do the animation first.

Animation: 7.8/10

It was good at some parts and lazy at others. The best fights were Goku and Sonic vs Broly (Full Power SSJ) -Round 1-, Goku (SSJ1) vs LSSJ Broly -Round 2-, Sonic and Goku vs Eggman -Round 1- and Sonic vs The Drill Bot. The way though's scenes were animated really showed how devastating Broly's power was, specially when he first when LSSJ. All the fights with Mecha Sonic were not done bad, but they were boring honestly and not to mention choppy and stiff a lot of the time. Gravity was almost non-existent in Vegeta vs Mecha Sonic (the building falling), and none of the punches seemed to carry any weight from either of them. Gravity is just not here a lot of the time. Sonic was smooth a lot of the time though, his tricks might have seem out of place, but most of them were done well.

Sound: 8/10

It was good. You loose points for Goku's voice and the softness of some of the clips. Goku's voice was lazy and he did not fully punctuate a lot of his words properly. He sounded like a corny surfer dude from a bad movie a lot of the time.

Effects: 4/10

Horrible. Shitty Capcom hit sparks we have seen 1,000,000 times, over used beams, nothing new or intersting at all in this department. Since when have you ever seen Broly EVER use a beam? You lost most of your points there because Broly NEVER uses beams, and besides that they were the wrong color too. Why was one of his beams raindow colored? The only time that was accepted was with Hyper Shadic. I'm sad Exorz stooped this low here. He's effects are usually on point.

Choreography: 7/10

It wasn't the worst. I especially liked that kick gave Goku gave Eggman when he was buying Sonic time. But a lot of the sequences were overused basic sprite fight filler material was have seen 1,000,000 times, so 7 is the because I can give you.

Overall: 7/10

Now story..the big thing I've been worried about since you introduced this. I told you to do it right. You did it decently enough I suppose.

Dialogue: 8/10

Don't care too much because the script is old. I'll be easy on you here. I won't go in depth here because being as old as you are now you should see all the problems yourself.

Plot: 9/10

It was enjoyable actually. It wasn't completely boring. I laughed, I was engaged a few times (mostly the Eggman fights with Sonic and the LSSJ Broly debut) and I can't really complain to much. It was just about as corny as the source material for the respective character so yeah not bad, not too outline, surprisingly good story.

Personality: 9.2/10

All the personalities were correct in my opinion, with the exception of Broly because of his motivation for getting the Dragonballs, but I suppose that's the influence of the being that summoned him? Broly wouldn't use anything but his own power to try to beat Goku, his pride would not allow him to do anything else, plus he's too dumb anyway to plan something like that on his own. Actually Broly doesn't even seem mad around Goku like he is suppose to. Knuckles was too silly. Other than at everyone was on point, and you did a good job not making Shadow exactly like Vegeta. That's something people will mistake is that Vegeta and Shadow have the same personality, which is true is a few areas, but they are not exactly alike.

The Cores: 9000/10

That was fucking hilarious. Holy shit they should have been reoccurring characters, they were good and you introduced them in a way that wasn't super random so in the sequel you should defiantly bring them back and give them a bigger spot light and more scenes.

Power Levels: 5/10

Broly was too strong, Mecha Sonic was too strong, Vegeta was too weak, Goku's fluctuated depending on who he was fighting, Gogeta should have been able to easily defeat Broly, and even with the master emeralds power (which is impossible to absorb by any mere mortal being I may add), Gogeta would have still had a slight edge over him and he would not have gotten tired too quickly. Luckly you made it clear the Sonic characters were not on par with the DBZ characters and mainly just made them support so that was good. I want to do a whole rant on this but I don't have time.

Movie Overall: 7.8/10

I liked it. Wasn't completely let down, and for a very touchy crossover like this, it wasn't as bad as it could have been. Good work. Well executed for the most part. I hope the sequel is infinitely better though.
Hmmm... -looks at the script again- PFHAH! -rips it apart-
Clearly this idiot has no idea how to write a story, an actual fluent story! WELL IF YOULL EXCUSE ME IM GONNA SHOW WHAT THIS WAS ALL ABOUT IN A NUTSHELL. LETS SEE! OH! HOW ABOUT BROLY WHOS THE EVIL MASTERMIND THE WHOLE TIME, AND HE TURNS INTO THIS EVIL GIANT MONSTER, AND MAKES ALL THE SCARY FACES FLALBDGDFDKF BHFFLAFLSALDSLADL BLFLALLAFAHFHAFJG AND THEN THEN, ALL THE LITTLE KIDS SCREAM AT SONIC DADDY DADDY THERES A SCARY MONSTER ON THE LOOSE, AND THEN HE MAKES ALL THE SCARY FACES, AND HES LIKE LIKE RARHHAHRHARHARHAHRAH, AND THE KIDS ARE LIKE SAVE US SAVE US HES GONNA KILL US EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE ALREADY DEAD AAH! ... MY god so many complex issues! ALRIGHT AND THEN WERE GONNA SEE SONIC LITERALLY, LITERALLY DEFEAT HIM WITH THE POWER OF LOVE! ITS SO INSPIRING! ITS SO INGENIOUS!
HES THE ADULT, HES THE ADULT HE WRITES ADULT THINGS DRYRUUAHRGARUHRHA MECHA ACTING LIKE A COMPLETE CLOWN BRLEAREAYR SO ADULT, RGEUJAHFNAFE BRURUAHGAHGHAURHARF -points at sxr- THATS STUPID, HES STUPID, STUPID PSYCHOLOGICAL -chews up the script- HES THE WORLDS MISTAKE i BET GOD MIXED UP THE WORST NUT CASE IN A SANITARIUM WITH A ZOMBIE FROM CASTLEVANIA AND HE POPPED OUT FROM THE DUCK SHELLS AND AND BLEHAEFJEAFKEAFJE SO ADULT! AND HES ALL LIKE YES IM THE ADULT LOVE ME, DONT LOVE JESUS CUZ IM A FUCKING ATHEIST, LOVE ME! I WRITE ADULT THINGS YOURE DUMB YOURE DUMB HE SAYS AND THEN AND THEN WE ARE ALL STUPID AND HE ALL HATES US BUT TRUTH IS HES JUST A MISUNDERSTOOD BLACK KOOK WHO LIVES IN A COFFEE CAN AND AND, THIS IS THE REAL STUFF THIS IS THE REAL SCARY STUFF BROLY SO SCARY SCAAARYYYYYY GRAB YOUR WIVES HES STUPID HE DOESNT KNOW WHAT HES DOING SOME CARROT CRYING MADE HIM LIKET HIS AND HES SO STUPID SO MOTHERFUCKING STUPID, EVERYONE ELSE IS A DOODOO HEAD IN THE MAGICAL WORLD OF DUCKY SXR, WE ARE ALL A BUNCH OF COOKS, WE CAN SHOW PROOF AND WE CAN SHOW EVEN MORE PROOF BUT WHAT DO WE KNOW WE ONLY SHOW THAT WERE EVEN MORE STUPID YES I FINALLY GET IT I UNDERSTAND AJAJDAJAJAJAJAJAJ, AHAJJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA SXR IS A MANIAC HE RAPED A GRIL ON THE WAY HOME ONCE AND SUBWAY GOT HIM BACK IN CHRISTMAS YOU REMEMBER RIGHT? EVEN THAT WAS A BETTER LOVE STORY THAN HIS MOVIE! JAJAJAJAJA, AJAAJAJAJAJAJAJA
DONT LOVE US LOVE SXR CUZ HES THE CREATOR OF THEM OVIE I MEAN WHAT DO I KNOW, I ONLY ANIMATED IT, LOVE HIM! -throws paper at him- THATS RIGHT LOVE HIM! AHAHAHAHAJAJAJAJAJJA HES THE GENIUS THE GROUND BREAKING GENIUS....

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Wow i almost lost my fucking mind for a second. NICE JOB YOU SCREWED DUCK YOU MADE ME INSANE AND NOW ILL HAVE TO KILL YOU ALL!
Back to the movie!
Really dude? -_-


There are some issues with the animation itself but no point in really criticizing. It took me 4 days to watch this lol.


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9/21/2013, 4:40 pm
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9/21/2013, 4:44 pm
I'm not saying Amy is weak, heck, her hammer could smash Mecha Sonic if given enough force. I'm just saying she was so useless in this movie.

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9/21/2013, 5:01 pm
yeah I know, like I said, she and tails were for comedic relief.

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9/21/2013, 5:04 pm
@YoshiSonic wrote:I'm not saying Amy is weak, heck, her hammer could smash Mecha Sonic if given enough force. I'm just saying she was so useless in this movie.
damn YS you are so fricking Smart O:

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9/21/2013, 6:54 pm
@SXR123 wrote:yeah I know, like I said, she and tails were for comedic relief.

I feel you.

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9/21/2013, 11:03 pm
y is this not aotw doe

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9/24/2013, 5:39 pm
OH OH! About the movie!

SXR, if this was meant to be between Cell/Buu saga:
- Goku was in Other World, training, DEAD.
- Broly came back in Broly`s return its not like he magically can revive all the time.

Dipshit.
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9/24/2013, 5:56 pm
exorz15 wrote:OH OH! About the movie!

SXR, if this was meant to be between Cell/Buu saga:
- Goku was in Other World, training, DEAD.
- Broly came back in Broly`s return its not like he magically can revive all the time.

Dipshit.
Idk why, but I laughed way harder at this than I should have. I need to take a break from the Internet for a while.
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10/3/2013, 10:57 am
I need to watch this movie ASAP, but my internet connection isn't cooperating. ;w;
I still feel like a complete jackass for not completing the scene.

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10/3/2013, 12:58 pm
exorz15 wrote:OH OH! About the movie!

SXR, if this was meant to be between Cell/Buu saga:
- Goku was in Other World, training, DEAD.
- Broly came back in Broly`s return its not like he magically can revive all the time.

Dipshit.
look at how much I care.

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10/3/2013, 2:16 pm
I just now noticed this was out.

it was good, really worth the wait.....now make a yt channel for the spritas and upload it there }:3

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10/3/2013, 5:31 pm
@Rapidfir3Pho3nix wrote:Archie Amy >(infinity> video game Amy.

Well actually all the Archie Sonic universe is better than the Sonic video game universe. ESPECIALLY KNUCKLES OMG, I freaking hate how Knuckles is portrayed like a babbling idiot in the video games. It really gives the Echidna race a bad reputation considering Knuckles IS the GUARDIAN of the MASTER EMERALD. Archie Knuckles is pure badassery. Also, I'm still trying to figure out why the hell Scourge hasn't been introduced into the games yet. Like, I know he is originated from the Archie comics but there is some REALLY good content with the Scourge arc of the series...
Since it's after 1998, I can let this slide, but really they're about the same, Archie just has more characters and details and tends to wildly stray from anything that would ever be depicted in the games.
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