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on 8/4/2013, 1:20 am
Hey guys! Just wanted to post this small test with akuma, i want to do a few of them before i actually commit to a full animated battle. which I really look forward to because I have so many good ideas! can you guys give me some advice on my animation and what I can do to Improve, if not its okay ill try to improve. [flash(500,500)][/flash]


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on 8/4/2013, 1:22 am
I like dat ashobakboookeen. Nice job.

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on 8/4/2013, 1:46 am
I noticed his spinning hurricane kick was a little off. It was very noticeable that the middle half of his body was motion blurred. Speed up the hurricane or blur it less. Other than that I really liked how you put motion blur to proper use ouo

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on 8/4/2013, 3:22 am
Yeah, the spinning hurricane kick was off. To add to what NS said, one of his legs are misplaced... O.o
Other than that, this was sexy. ;3

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on 8/4/2013, 4:37 am
Looks really good. To solve the hurricane kick issue, blend the edges between the blurred and normal versions. Also, the blurred section is offset a ways to the left, which is very noticeable. Needs to be realigned.

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on 8/4/2013, 10:55 am
pretty cool indeed.
also the rotating v-cam reminds me of when dd raged at everyone who did that
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on 8/4/2013, 11:35 am
I think for the first couple of hits the camera motion lags behind the kicking and punching motion. That kinda slows down the movements unless that's what you were going for.

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on 8/4/2013, 1:55 pm
omg bdbs giving criqitue omgwtfbbq
u should feel honored

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on 8/4/2013, 7:53 pm
sexy man I frking love it, although some of the blurring seems a bit off yah know, and other things "people" said...

and Lange Critiquing Shocked 

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on 8/5/2013, 8:44 am
awesome! thanks for all the tips guys! I'll be sure to fix the blurring and alignment issues for my next flashes. thanks again all of you!
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on 8/5/2013, 11:31 am
I can't ... hold ... WHY THE F*CK IS SO AWESOME! oh yeah the hurricane kick :/ it was extrange.


OTHER THAN THAT IS AWESOME

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on 8/5/2013, 6:48 pm
Sieghart wrote:omg bdbs giving criqitue omgwtfbbq
u should feel honored

The sarcasm is strong with this one. Serious 

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on 8/5/2013, 8:09 pm
@Goku wrote:
Sieghart wrote:omg bdbs giving criqitue omgwtfbbq
u should feel honored

The sarcasm is strong with this one. Serious 
you have no idea

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on 8/7/2013, 4:31 pm
The motion blur effect was used quite well here, and the animation itself is very nice. Just make the improvements to the spinning kick that Lange suggested, and you're good.

I look forward to seeing more from you.
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on 8/7/2013, 5:02 pm
@Goku wrote:
Sieghart wrote:omg bdbs giving criqitue omgwtfbbq
u should feel honored

The sarcasm is strong with this one. Serious 

Nice Serious fail :)

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on 8/7/2013, 5:11 pm
woah, this is insanely epic Very Happy

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on 8/7/2013, 6:17 pm
Your vcam movement really added a lot more to this animation, I hope your going to continue and make longer ones, this was pretty good.

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on 8/7/2013, 6:25 pm
ok, I'ma just say it... Am I the only one with vcam issues? :/ Cuz from what I've read, this probably should not have any vcam issues lol. I can only see the top left part of his body, though from what I CAN see, it looks good.

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on 8/7/2013, 6:31 pm
@xKAreloadedx wrote:ok, I'ma just say it... Am I the only one with vcam issues? :/ Cuz from what I've read, this probably should not have any vcam issues lol. I can only see the top left part of his body, though from what I CAN see, it looks good.

Maybe an error of charging the post?

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