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7/22/2013, 11:30 am
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/1674109625a6277befcd92858a35c044

It's not a Super intro or something it's only a short animation to present my animations
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7/22/2013, 4:06 pm
Shouldn't this go into completed animations?

No. It is not good. You want opinions right?

- Don't use Dragon Ball Z sounds. They're getting old.
- That is the suckiest font to use in an into.
- Why did Metal Sonic explode?
- It wasn't very creative.
- Ease your movements.
- Be more creative: You could have Sonic running in. Shadow kicks him from behind. Then Metal Sonic kicks him. Then your name knocks out Metal Sonic. It's a better transition than putting your text behind an explosion.
- Pick a better font from here: http://www.dafont.com/ and install it into your Windows > Font directory.
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7/22/2013, 6:17 pm
@NS01 wrote:Shouldn't this go into completed animations?

No. It is not good. You want opinions right?

- Don't use Dragon Ball Z sounds. They're getting old.
- That is the suckiest font to use in an into.
- Why did Metal Sonic explode?
- It wasn't very creative.
- Ease your movements.
- Be more creative: You could have Sonic running in. Shadow kicks him from behind. Then Metal Sonic kicks him. Then your name knocks out Metal Sonic. It's a better transition than putting your text behind an explosion.
- Pick a better font from here: http://www.dafont.com/ and install it into your Windows > Font directory.


O.O


Well that was... Incredible?


I don't have words to explain that. Well I know is Shit but DBZ efects : zoom , strongkick , meleeflash , teleport , land.


no DBZ effects : explosion.


In that part you are right

-Suckiest Font? Well you just see when someone use the default letters :/

-Ease your movements : how the hell i do that?

-Be More creative : well i will try

-Pick a Better Font : well i will try too

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7/22/2013, 6:29 pm
When someone gives you criticism, just make sure you don't retaliate. for example, instead of saying "how the hell do I do that?" just ask, "How do I do that?"

also, this SHOULD be moved so i'mma do that now.

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7/22/2013, 6:41 pm
If you can't take criticism and expect people to sugar-coat your work, then you do not belong here. I gave you pointers to improve, it'd be wise to listen. Get different sound effects. The explosion sound was nice.

I'd expect a little more aesthetics in your name, it's your name, man. Make it bigger and better. The default letters suck for an intro.  

Easing your motion tweens is simple. It makes your sprite's movements smoother and realistic. The blur emphasizes Sonic's speed. The easing for when Sonic is slowing down.

Without ease:



With ease and blur:





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7/22/2013, 6:44 pm
are those the sonic unleashed sprites for the phone?

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7/22/2013, 6:45 pm
Yeah man ouo

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7/23/2013, 5:17 am
@SXR123 wrote:When someone gives you criticism, just make sure you don't retaliate
wow looks like I've been doing it wrong all these years

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7/23/2013, 1:54 pm
Why this post is moved to complete animations? I was only asking if it was good i wasn't saying that this intro is completed

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7/23/2013, 1:58 pm
@NS01 wrote:If you can't take criticism and expect people to sugar-coat your work, then you do not belong here. I gave you pointers to improve, it'd be wise to listen. Get different sound effects. The explosion sound was nice.

I'd expect a little more aesthetics in your name, it's your name, man. Make it bigger and better. The default letters suck for an intro.

Easing your motion tweens is simple. It makes your sprite's movements smoother and realistic. The blur emphasizes Sonic's speed. The easing for when Sonic is slowing down.

Of course I can take criticism I was asking so it's good to recieve criticisim

I already know how to do that effect but I don't doed A flash animation yet , these of newgrounds are of my friends , (they are not good like people from thespritas.)

And the Font , well that's real I'm searching fonts of writing

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