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Devastation Act #1 Atreyu vs. Rush Empty Devastation Act #1 Atreyu vs. Rush

6/30/2013, 5:30 pm
Okay guy's don't hold back I really want to get better and that means part practice and part advice right now so feel free to be as brutal as possible when it comes to the critique.

Any helpful advice will do just tell me what you think. "Braces Self" You\'re too kind 

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Devastation Act #1 Atreyu vs. Rush Empty Re: Devastation Act #1 Atreyu vs. Rush

6/30/2013, 8:16 pm
I've certainly seen worse flashes - but I've seen better too. :V The effects and voices are a little overdone, but you get bonus points for a few things I haven't seen too often. Like a character actively seeking to destroy the emerdoods instead of just

ERMAGAWD POAWAR

Not sure if I agree with that explanation at the end there, especially when the fight boiled down to what could be equated to a close-range beam struggle, But s'alright.

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