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6/13/2013, 8:10 pm


This is a test I was working on for a promo on the series I have decided to work on. Dragon Ball AF. And the story will not be similar to BlazeJecar's and The Original Artwork Manga series. Xicor will still be in it but his back story is different.

That is what will happen in my series. So I leave you with this test. Not my best work cause I kinda rushed it but if you think it's okay? All right then.

[Please right click and select Low Quality if your computer is slow.]

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6/13/2013, 8:11 pm
And if people if it is not loading.
Go here: http://megaswf.com/s/2587406

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6/13/2013, 8:22 pm
If this is an effects test then they look fine.

There wasn't much animation though. It was also very loud.

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6/13/2013, 8:29 pm
@SXR123 wrote:If this is an effects test then they look fine.

There wasn't much animation though. It was also very loud.

Thanks for the point out.
It looked more like an effects test.

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6/13/2013, 8:31 pm
Like I said, if it's an effects test you did fine but there's little to no actual animation besides goku moving up and down and changing forms.

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6/13/2013, 9:31 pm
1. Try not to double post. You could have just edited your first post and added the link to that.
2. I urge you to NOT go through with this. I can understand sentiment in wanting to make a series for DBAF, but this is an idea that has already been beaten to death quite a bit. Try to be the person to make something new. This is only my opinion so take it with a grain of salt (i.e. you don't have to listen to what I said if you don't want to).
3. That said, if you're still gonna do this then by all means go ahead. There wasn't a lot of animation to critique on, but the effects were nice so you have that part down. Also I REALLY liked what you did with the preloader, it was pretty nice.
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6/13/2013, 10:29 pm
I personally found the pre-loader annoying. Mostly because it was incredibly loud.

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6/13/2013, 10:37 pm
My volume is really low because I'm wearing headphones.
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6/16/2013, 3:34 pm
I guess you can handle the basics man. Alignment and basic movement.
However, like SXR said, that was an effect test more than anything, because you haven't do much with the sprites themselves, just a few change of poses. And so, the effects are used bad IMO. Because, they're just in there, not with a solid purpose. You should use an effect, thinking of what is it, and why is there. Trying to look as you want it, weak, powerful, exaggerated, barely noticeable. It really seems like, you got lots of new effects, and you just wanted to use them as quick as possible, in any animation. When using an effect, search for the most suitable one, even if you have 12398908 effects, search the most you can, to choose the one that suits the most. Hope this helps out a bit.

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