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on 6/11/2013, 7:31 pm
Heyo! RnR here with some of my work from dA! Some it relates to this series I'm working called Level Down. In a nutshell it's a series about how 3 programmers get sent inside of a video games they're making, and how they have to fight their way out of it without getting killed.

Are some of the characters that'll be in the series if I ever get it off of the ground.:

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I'm always open to some critique, so be afraid to leave some.

Oh and if you're interested about the series, I'd be happy to go into greater detail.


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on 6/11/2013, 8:19 pm
oh god these are so terrible you should just quit life.

loljk man these are really good. The only one that bugs me is the girl, she looks like she has kankles and the face kinda bothers me a little. Other then that, these are pretty good!

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on 6/11/2013, 8:25 pm
@SXR123 wrote:oh god these are so terrible you should just quit life.

loljk man these are really good. The only one that bugs me is the girl, she looks like she has kankles and the face kinda bothers me a little. Other then that, these are pretty good!

Yeah they do look off. I looked up some refs, but they all cut off at the thighs. I'm gonna rework her design a bit and think of this as a bit of a rough draft.

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on 6/12/2013, 12:57 am
wow, dude these look really cool and i really like your art style

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on 6/13/2013, 11:41 am
these look like giant mundane shits

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on 6/13/2013, 12:17 pm
Sieghart wrote:these look like giant mundane shits
Love u too Joey!

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on 6/13/2013, 5:46 pm
you are just the worst creature imaginable

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on 8/14/2013, 6:25 pm
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Decided to draw Mario...yay!

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on 8/14/2013, 8:19 pm
just a suggestion.
try to avoid doing compositions like this where you have the character touching the borders of the image. it feels weird, almost if he was trapped in a box. instead of doing that, try cropping it more (avoiding to crop at the joints, like the knees, elbows, waist, etc.) or just giving him more space.
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on 8/14/2013, 8:30 pm
@Leo wrote:just a suggestion.
try to avoid doing compositions like this where you have the character touching the borders of the image. it feels weird, almost if he was trapped in a box. instead of doing that, try cropping it more (avoiding to crop at the joints, like the knees, elbows, waist, etc.) or just giving him more space.
Interesting suggestion, I purposely cropped pic to save space. I feel it looks to have huge white background if there's just one character in it. But hell, I'll take you up on that suggestion for future pieces.

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on 8/14/2013, 10:41 pm
the trojan and mario artwork are awesome I really like them Very Happy
your style is awesome too
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on 8/14/2013, 11:29 pm
@RnR wrote:I purposely cropped pic to save space.
yeah i assumed that was the reason why. it's not that much of a big deal tho
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on 10/8/2013, 9:36 pm
Hey, I finally decided to draw something.

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Got around to tweeking one of the drawings of RnR Red: http://rocknrumble.deviantart.com/art/Ronnie-RnR-Red-390715967

Yeah I think it looks better.

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on 10/8/2013, 9:59 pm
i think that the major flaw here is that it's very flat. the nose, for example, looks like it's pasted on there, it doesn't really go around the face. also, on the glove...things, you have their cross sections flat which is kind of weird since you got it right with the shirt.

so i would suggest you go focus on form/perspective more, although that's really up to you. this is really just a suggestion anyway.
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on 10/8/2013, 10:09 pm
@Leo wrote: i would suggest you go focus on form/perspective more, although that's really up to you. this is really just a suggestion anyway.


you have their cross sections flat which is kind of weird since you got it right with the shirt.
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Hmm, explain what you mean when you say "cross sections", as for focusing on form, any chance you could give some tips or site that explain form and help me improve?

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on 10/8/2013, 10:48 pm
if you think of a cylinder like millions of stacked disks, the disks are the cross sections. in a box, it would be the planes of it. i don't think i can explain any better than that.
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as for any links, well, there's these videos (you'll have to dig around the channel for the perspective stuff, but if you don't know where to look, just tell me) and there's this post, although his whole blog is great for drawing in general. there's also perspective books and what not, however i can't remember any good ones right now.
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on 10/8/2013, 11:09 pm
@Leo wrote:if you think of a cylinder like millions of stacked disks, the disks are the cross sections. in a box, it would be the planes of it. i don't think i can explain any better than that.
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as for any links, well, there's these videos (you'll have to dig around the channel for the perspective stuff, but if you don't know where to look, just tell me) and there's this post, although his whole blog is great for drawing in general. there's also perspective books and what not, however i can't remember any good ones right now.
Ah yes, thanks man. I'll be sure to take look at those.


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on 12/17/2013, 4:18 pm
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on 12/17/2013, 4:49 pm
I like it, I feel like the hands are too bony drawn for a robot but if its a person inside a suit then yea I get it.

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on 12/17/2013, 4:55 pm
the lighting and the fire look really good

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on 12/17/2013, 5:10 pm
one arm is longer then the other....

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on 12/17/2013, 5:16 pm
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Something new.

I gotta say man, I'm loving the way you color these. Even if it isn't realistic, it's still so cool to look at.

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on 12/17/2013, 5:33 pm
@Face wrote:one arm is longer then the other....

Saw it post inking, raged, said "awwwww fuck it", went to coloring. Will be avoided next piece.

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on 12/17/2013, 5:34 pm
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Something new.

I gotta say man, I'm loving the way you color these. Even if it isn't realistic, it's still so cool to look at.

Thanks man, next I'll try to make the coloring and shading a bit more believable.

@Granadico wrote:the lighting and the fire look really good
Good to know that someone like the lighting. I thought it was good in the beginning of the process, then it descended into crap.

@Similuo wrote:I like it, I feel like the hands are too bony drawn for a robot but if its a person inside a suit then yea I get it.
They do seem a bit bony in hindsight. It will be corrected in the next piece. Thanks for the comment.

@Face wrote:one arm is longer then the other....
Saw it post inking, raged, said "awwwww fuck it", went to coloring. Will be avoided next piece.


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on 12/17/2013, 5:36 pm
Multi-quote to avoid the double post Very Happy

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