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11/24/2013, 9:41 pm
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11/24/2013, 9:43 pm
^ lmao
her left forearm is tapering in a weird way :S
the shading could also have been left out i think - since it's so little and kind of muddy and i guess you're better off just focusing on line first imo

otherwise its alright i guess. did you use ref?
ɹǝɐןןıʌ wrote:I've already been torn a new asshole with critique
where did u go, 4chan's /ic?
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11/24/2013, 9:50 pm
yeah, reference.

and yeah, 4chan.

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11/24/2013, 9:51 pm
something about her entire arm/chest region seems off to me but i can't describe exactly what

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11/24/2013, 9:58 pm
ɹǝɐןןıʌ wrote:yeah, reference.

and yeah, 4chan.
when you use reference, maybe try looking for angles more, something like this
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it helps with accuracy

also omfg eeech 4chan
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11/24/2013, 10:00 pm
@Leo wrote:also omfg eeech 4chan
Thanks leo, you're a pal...and I can't tell if that's a good or bad reaction but I'ma guess that it's bad....they're aggressive but they give good info.
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11/24/2013, 10:06 pm
ɹǝɐןןıʌ wrote:I can't tell if that's a good or bad reaction but I'ma guess that it's bad....they're aggressive but they give good info.
yeah it's a bad reaction
idk sometimes they actually do give out good info, but it's mostly regurgitated advice and i don't need 400+ posts telling me i should study loomis. otherwise it's ok for some different opinions i guess. and i don't actually care about all the insulting and what not, usually i just filter out all of that anyway.

also, can you show me the thread in a pm or something? just curious, it's fine if you don't wanna show

and you're making me wanna study more, haven't done that in months
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11/24/2013, 10:12 pm
@Leo wrote:
ɹǝɐןןıʌ wrote:I can't tell if that's a good or bad reaction but I'ma guess that it's bad....they're aggressive but they give good info.
yeah it's a bad reaction
idk sometimes they actually do give out good info, but it's mostly regurgitated advice and i don't need 400+ posts telling me i should study loomis. otherwise it's ok for some different opinions i guess. and i don't actually care about all the insulting and what not, usually i just filter out all of that anyway.

also, can you show me the thread in a pm or something? just curious, it's fine if you don't wanna show

and you're making me wanna study more, haven't done that in months
I would, but the thread i posted in 404'd, so the crit that I did get is gone.

I posted again in another thread just recently, so maybe if I get some more crit, i'll share.

Also...
yes, study more.. and post results.
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11/24/2013, 10:58 pm
Here's the ref if anyone wants to give it a go.
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11/24/2013, 11:02 pm
i found the thread actually : p
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11/24/2013, 11:04 pm
@Leo wrote:i found the thread actually : p
Good, now draw every reference you see and post all results, since im off of school this week, ima try to do just that.
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11/24/2013, 11:08 pm
i'll try to draw some of them, but post them? nah
i usually delete studies like this. if i saved the studies/copies i do i'd have 2 times the amount of drawings i have on my HD right now (currently at 390+)
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11/26/2013, 8:04 am
Did this last night...it's not like it needs to be, but I was tired and not too focused, so yeah

I've managed to "acquire" I Ultra Came  tvpaint, so now i can do more stuff with it, expect much more animation from me in the future.
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11/26/2013, 9:25 am
yes good lets be tvpaint friends
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11/26/2013, 11:11 am
what in the fak is this TVPaint that everyone is suddenly talking about

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11/26/2013, 11:13 am
it's an animation program, but instead of being vector (like flash, toon boom), it's raster-based.
here
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11/26/2013, 11:59 am
Yah granny desu, it's perfect for drawn animation.

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2/16/2014, 3:09 pm
Yo, im like, trying my ass off. So much shit that ima need to add. This is gon' drive me crazy.
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2/16/2014, 4:10 pm
nice eye!

little heavy on the eye liner tho :3 but srsly good job.

all I can say is that her eye brow seems to be a little too high.

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2/16/2014, 4:19 pm
dem bags
i didn't give you permission to draw my eye

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2/16/2014, 4:59 pm
^ lmao gran

& sxr, it's referenced, her eyebrow is really that high and her eyeliner is really that heavy lol & thanks, ur a pal
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3/23/2014, 1:21 am
I really wanted to finish this until I saw too many errors so I just stopped 'cause I'm not gon' waste my time polishing a turd.
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3/23/2014, 1:41 am
it wasn't bad (wasn't good either) but yeah i can see the errors. must be pretty hard to draw from a perspective like that

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3/23/2014, 2:02 am
@Granadico wrote:it wasn't bad (wasn't good either) but yeah i can see the errors. must be pretty hard to draw from a perspective like that
Actually for me at least, I find that to be a really easy perspective to be drawing in. Might just be me though.
The drawing though really wasn't that bad though, the outline of the face and the eyes were the only main issues I see.
Your shading is pretty well done and that hair looks great
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3/23/2014, 2:21 am
@Knux wrote:
@Granadico wrote:it wasn't bad (wasn't good either) but yeah i can see the errors. must be pretty hard to draw from a perspective like that
Actually for me at least, I find that to be a really easy perspective to be drawing in. Might just be me though.
The drawing though really wasn't that bad though, the outline of the face and the eyes were the only main issues I see.
Your shading is pretty well done and that hair looks great

Yeah, this is the perspective I find easiest to draw, I should expand. And thanks for the feedback yall, means a lot.
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