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3/1/2013, 1:42 pm
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/612276
Here is the intro of our sprite series: Sonic Battle XC.
A long series which will consist of long epic battles, this is in fact the following of Nazo Unleashed and Sonic X it's why we plan to bring back Cosmo in this series for fans.
Please be indulgent, I started in the sprite movie there's not very long , i am a beginner of sprites animations.

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3/1/2013, 2:35 pm
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Hey, let me give you some advice.

Don't post intro's to newgrounds.

Newgrounds isn't a popular place for sprites, in fact they mostly hate sprites. Post intro's and stuff like that to youtube and then upload the actual episode to newgrounds.

The only thing I remember is that sonic was running backwards btw.

That is all.

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3/1/2013, 3:35 pm
I got shivers from this lol
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3/1/2013, 3:44 pm
Don't be a dick dude, give him some criticism.

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3/1/2013, 6:42 pm
I liked it pretty well done IMO Nice job Very Happy

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3/1/2013, 8:55 pm
Nah, I got good chills. I liked what it was trying to do. Lol

He just has to learn a little bit more about applying physics and fluidity into the animation and his stuff will start getting better.
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3/2/2013, 6:03 am
@SXR123 : thanks for you advice, , I saw the intro to Alvin Earthworm for his series, so I thought I could publish an intro.

@SpritingRulez101 : Thanks Very Happy

@Rapidfir3Pho3nix : I'm pretty proud of the result even though I am personally quite disappointed on some problems of my animation and I know I can do better!


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3/2/2013, 6:13 am
well yeah first of all newgrounds hates us a lot...so try avoiding post things that aren't really really good over there...

as for basic criticism, your aligning and loops in the symbols aren't made correctly, some loops end where they shouldn't, characters are sometimes missed aligned...

and in the loader some of the sprites have white spaces in them..

that is all.

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3/2/2013, 9:46 am
I don't want to sound like a prick, but alvins intro was animated very well, and it was uploaded at a time when sprites weren't completely hated.

Five years later and we're probably one of the most hated communities, then again I could be wrong about that one.

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3/2/2013, 4:45 pm
Well...I was expecting some great stuff, seeing as it's an intro, and you uploaded it to Newgrounds...

I'm sorry man, but if you're going to use a great song like this, you should really try hard on the intro man. Like, you have to do the song a lot of justice. You also should have tried to do a more "anime" like intro, because that's the vibes the song is giving off. There are tons, and I mean tons of strategies that anime openings use, that you could have tried to incorporate yourself. I mean, that's what would have been great.

Also, you showed a lot, and I mean a lot of characters. Your opening should only show a couple of main characters, and maybe like two or three supporting characters. Nothing more. You also showed a couple of villains, but they weren't presented the right way, as villains. They were basically shown the exact same way as the other characters.

Typically, openings would show a villain with a dark screen, to show that they're evil. The way you did it, well, you just didn't really present it well.

A lot of the thing I don't see done right are just animator's and audience's preference, but I mean like...the animation itself wasn't that high quality either. Openings are usually, like, most of the time, seriously animated much better than the actual series. That is because it is the first thing that goes to the audience. The opener is the audience's first impression of what will be to come.

Honestly, after watching that intro, I don't think I would stick around for much after that.

But, series' aren't just about the fights, or the animation, it's heavy on the storyline. This opener did throw in some spoiler for the storyline, but not much at all. After an opener, the audience should be asking, 'why did he do that?' 'I wonder who that is?' 'Who is that?!' These are all, major, MAJOR pieces that come into an opener.

And I'm afraid you missed nearly all of them.

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3/3/2013, 3:28 am
Yes Patt I understand. And you're quite right. Maybe if people are not convinced, then I should create a new opening.
Thank you very much for your opinion, it helps me that I could do later.

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