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1/23/2013, 6:18 am
Sonic v Luigi: http://www.fileize.com/view/02096921-315/
Tell me what you guys think It's just the beginning but I know there are key issues I'm gonna fix that as soon as possible thick c:

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1/23/2013, 6:40 am
some sounds are missing in some places and i think your overall aanimation could have some more "life" into it.
but overall i guess it's ok.

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1/23/2013, 8:01 am
Dammit tal what did I tell you about pointing out the PAINFULLY OBVIOUS?!

besides, this animation wasn't even ten seconds long. you CAN'T criticize an animation that hasn't even passed 10 seconds.

Don't post animations you just start. DO SOMETHING with it before showing it to us. Until you at least get passsed 30 seconds or so, just wait to post alright?

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1/23/2013, 2:08 pm
But It's in the wip section not like I posted it into the completed section but if that's a rule I'll follow it:/
Edit: I didn't just start this either I've been working on issues

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1/23/2013, 2:24 pm
@SXR123 wrote:Dammit tal what did I tell you about pointing out the PAINFULLY OBVIOUS?!

besides, this animation wasn't even ten seconds long. you CAN'T criticize an animation that hasn't even passed 10 seconds.

Don't post animations you just start. DO SOMETHING with it before showing it to us. Until you at least get passsed 30 seconds or so, just wait to post alright?

plz let me transalate this:

"Dammit tal what did I tell you about pointing out the STUFF THAT IT'S NOT TERRIBLE TO SAY?!

besides, this animation wasn't even ten seconds long. you CAN'T criticize an animation that hasn't even passed 10 seconds.BECAUSE NOTHING HAPPENS IN TEN SECONDS!

Don't post animations cause i hate everything. DO SOMETHING with it before showing it to us. Until you at least get passsed 30 seconds or so, just wait to post alright?"

i love the last part, cause most of us don't even make it to 30 seconds long.
btw i think you can point out a lot of stuff in ten seconds.

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1/23/2013, 2:27 pm
Makes more sense now^Thanks c:

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1/23/2013, 3:30 pm
Let me translate what tal said:

"I'm tal, I think i'm hilarious, i'm going to act as if your post was unreadable and 'translate' it so everyone can understand it.

Translate joke are hilarious."

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1/23/2013, 3:33 pm
Now now let's all remain calm this is just a place for discussion and criticism on my work not each other c:

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1/23/2013, 3:37 pm
Well like I said before, don't just start an animation animate five or six seconds and post it in the WIP section, because it's too short for us to give you any kind of help

Luigi falls

walks over to flower

sonic comes

luigi fires

sonic jumps

end.

Besides the OBVIOUS missing sound effects, there's not much we can say.

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1/23/2013, 3:42 pm
yeah but obviously was i said was totally not important and will probably ruin your animations forever.

luigi falls - not possible to make a mistake here

walks over to flower - HOW CAN SOMEONE MISTAKE HERE?

sonic comes - let's make him walk not aligned...nope..that's ok..

like seriously even in 10 seconds...even in 1 second there could be a mistake. if this one didn't has it doesn't mean he shouldn't upload it..maybe he thought he did something wrong.
AND ALMOST EVERYONE UPLOAD HERE THINGS THAT ARE LESS THEN 30 SECONDS...
WHY ARE THEY DIFFERENT YOU RACIST!

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1/23/2013, 3:46 pm
Lmao It's cool tal I'm used to criticism now

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1/23/2013, 3:50 pm
Tal even if there is still a mistake to be made, that doesn't mean you shouldn't give people something to watch.

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1/23/2013, 3:56 pm
SXR what the hell. I understand what you're saying if an animation is 3 seconds long and there's no progress in this but there is obviously progress in this animation even if it's by a small amount. Also, constructive criticism isn't always pointing out flaws it's pointing out what was done right as well. For example:

Flame, I liked the way that you animated your characters and the scenery looks good as well. But Sonic's spinball looked off. I think that if you applied the blur to sonic's spinball in an seperate image editor and imported that image then you may have forgotten to set the quality of the Bitmap file to Lossless PNG/GIF. But this is looking great so keep up the great work!

See, SXR?
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1/23/2013, 4:00 pm
Thanks rapid I'm gonna fix the spin ball I just over blurred it radial style Plus I don't really know how to do radials Plus I'm just now adding sounds so I started going from back to front so there are sounds missing and this animation is approximately 15-17.5 seconds long just to Stop you guys from saying it isn't even ten anymore:3

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1/24/2013, 2:21 am
@Rapidfir3Pho3nix wrote:SXR what the hell. I understand what you're saying if an animation is 3 seconds long and there's no progress in this but there is obviously progress in this animation even if it's by a small amount. Also, constructive criticism isn't always pointing out flaws it's pointing out what was done right as well. For example:

Flame, I liked the way that you animated your characters and the scenery looks good as well. But Sonic's spinball looked off. I think that if you applied the blur to sonic's spinball in an seperate image editor and imported that image then you may have forgotten to set the quality of the Bitmap file to Lossless PNG/GIF. But this is looking great so keep up the great work!

See, SXR?

it's hard for him cause everytime i say i critic he must say it's bad even though he knows i am right.

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