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on 1/12/2013, 7:20 pm
Been a while since I"ve been here.
Decided to see if I could still animate. Whipped this up in about an hour.
Don't know if I'll finish it or not.
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/28578305f924d7110ae6d13abe0b04b5
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on 1/12/2013, 7:57 pm
that was pretty good

also welcome back

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on 1/13/2013, 8:18 am
who are you?

also, that looked good but the chidori shouldn't be a sprite

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on 1/13/2013, 12:16 pm
well, you still can animate
it was too short for me to say anything else tho
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on 1/13/2013, 12:21 pm
Basically what Leo said, but, to go in detail...

Very cliche start, I feel like everyone loves using Sasuke's little, "hmph" and his dash, before doing something awesome, and of course, you played directly into it. Also, Ichigo didn't really show much of a defense, and the camera barely moved as well, it should have at least shook when Sasuke dashed, or maybe refocused itself.

Also, big, easy thing to do, add some shaking to the camera when Sasuke is charging his blue thingy. At least then it would look more powerful. Also, you shouldn't keep the 'light reflection' on Sasuke stationary, as the charging blast isn't. Keep the light and shadow on Sasuke arbitrary to show that the charging blast is impulsively moving between sizes and power. With the shakes, and maybe some dirt effects below it, it would look at least somewhat powerful.

I don't really know if there's anything else to say, I'm not really sure what the standard is these days, so that's all I have to offer.

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on 1/13/2013, 12:22 pm
@Patt wrote:stuff

HOLY SHIT WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN
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on 1/13/2013, 12:32 pm
Easy there buckaroo, don't wanna go off topic. ; )

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on 1/13/2013, 3:15 pm
he's been reviewing...didn't you red his post.

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