- 『Joshl92』Spritan
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Sasuke Combo
1/12/2013, 7:20 pm
Been a while since I"ve been here.
Decided to see if I could still animate. Whipped this up in about an hour.
Don't know if I'll finish it or not.
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/28578305f924d7110ae6d13abe0b04b5
Decided to see if I could still animate. Whipped this up in about an hour.
Don't know if I'll finish it or not.
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/28578305f924d7110ae6d13abe0b04b5
Re: Sasuke Combo
1/12/2013, 7:57 pm
that was pretty good
also welcome back
also welcome back

- SaulSpritan
- Age : 24
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Registration date : 2012-02-04
Re: Sasuke Combo
1/13/2013, 8:18 am
who are you?
also, that looked good but the chidori shouldn't be a sprite
also, that looked good but the chidori shouldn't be a sprite


- LeoModerator
- Age : 23
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Registration date : 2009-05-23
Location : Brazil
Re: Sasuke Combo
1/13/2013, 12:16 pm
well, you still can animate
it was too short for me to say anything else tho
it was too short for me to say anything else tho
- PattAdministrator
- Age : 25
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Registration date : 2009-03-28
Re: Sasuke Combo
1/13/2013, 12:21 pm
Basically what Leo said, but, to go in detail...
Very cliche start, I feel like everyone loves using Sasuke's little, "hmph" and his dash, before doing something awesome, and of course, you played directly into it. Also, Ichigo didn't really show much of a defense, and the camera barely moved as well, it should have at least shook when Sasuke dashed, or maybe refocused itself.
Also, big, easy thing to do, add some shaking to the camera when Sasuke is charging his blue thingy. At least then it would look more powerful. Also, you shouldn't keep the 'light reflection' on Sasuke stationary, as the charging blast isn't. Keep the light and shadow on Sasuke arbitrary to show that the charging blast is impulsively moving between sizes and power. With the shakes, and maybe some dirt effects below it, it would look at least somewhat powerful.
I don't really know if there's anything else to say, I'm not really sure what the standard is these days, so that's all I have to offer.
Very cliche start, I feel like everyone loves using Sasuke's little, "hmph" and his dash, before doing something awesome, and of course, you played directly into it. Also, Ichigo didn't really show much of a defense, and the camera barely moved as well, it should have at least shook when Sasuke dashed, or maybe refocused itself.
Also, big, easy thing to do, add some shaking to the camera when Sasuke is charging his blue thingy. At least then it would look more powerful. Also, you shouldn't keep the 'light reflection' on Sasuke stationary, as the charging blast isn't. Keep the light and shadow on Sasuke arbitrary to show that the charging blast is impulsively moving between sizes and power. With the shakes, and maybe some dirt effects below it, it would look at least somewhat powerful.
I don't really know if there's anything else to say, I'm not really sure what the standard is these days, so that's all I have to offer.
- LeoModerator
- Age : 23
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Registration date : 2009-05-23
Location : Brazil
Re: Sasuke Combo
1/13/2013, 12:22 pm
@Patt wrote:stuff
HOLY SHIT WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN
- PattAdministrator
- Age : 25
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Registration date : 2009-03-28
Re: Sasuke Combo
1/13/2013, 12:32 pm
Easy there buckaroo, don't wanna go off topic. ; )
Re: Sasuke Combo
1/13/2013, 3:15 pm
he's been reviewing...didn't you red his post.

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