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1/5/2013, 4:37 am
i am making the opening of my sprite series with a friend : SONIC BATTLE XC.
there are still many problems in my video but I think not as much as in my previous video.
I personally have to correct the alignment of the deplacement of Sonic and the battle between Shadow and Mecha Sonic in the beginning.
So What do you think?
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/7324e975aa6c914f3e81617a3b4b6cc9


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1/5/2013, 5:01 am
What you did right:

you improved the alignment, and the graphics don't look bad at all.

what you did wrong:

the sounds weren't completley synched with the animation and were a bit overused..it created a massive amount of high noises.
the overbattle seemed a little random and happenned a little fast, and it was kinda hard to follow what was happening.
when you tried doing to slow-mo part when mecha sonic and shadow stop, you should've made them move some more a bit, cause it seemed like the movie froze.
and last thing, the bg was sometimes cut and i could see the white canvas.

these are all small things, what you should really work on is the sounds and the directing of the battle.

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1/5/2013, 9:18 am
thanks for the review dude, infact most of the time there are problems with the soundtracks, I'll see if I can fix it but I do not promise anything because I already try to fix it several times and i had problems.

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