Sonic Vs Gamma

http://www.fileize.com/view/a29cfc77-c4a/
CNC is appreciated
Making this took me 2 months. 1 month of animating and 1 month of laziness .
Hope you guys enjoy this.

Congratulations on making your first completed animation, I wish i knew what that felt like~

Anyways, I enjoyed it.
The only comment I have is on the ground, just making a black circle was simply lazy.
You could try experimenting with some gradients/masking a darkened version of the background and putting a oval shaped hole over that
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Thanks joey i appreciate your critic

This was nice. The only problems I had were the hit sparks and the length of the video. The hit sparks weren't that bad so its not that much of a problem, just make them smaller next time. As for the shortness of the video this wouldn't normally be a problem for me about it became a problem because of the dialogue. Sonic was talking about how Gamma improved and yet he brutally destroyed him not 5 seconds after saying that. Its not that much of a big deal, but if your going to imply the opponent as a threat, make him have a decent run.

Other than those 2 small problems, nice little Sonic fight you got here.

7.8/10

Same point crazyfilms here pointed out. You can look anywhere you want for terrain destruction sprites. It also would have been awesome if instead of sonic just knocking off a piece of gamma with a perfectly straight cut you had separated the body from the legs and arms. It would have looked way more realistic - although we do this to sort of escape reality - .
The sparks were a little too big but the animation was smooth and the camera wasn't too shaky - hell, it hardly had any shake to it - In short: i really liked it, but these little details could have made it really cool. Also it was short.

LOL gamma got owned

Nice work on completing it xD

I'll be that good someday

^we all start somewhere. bet you're not as bad as my sister xD.

Wow I'm impressesd 1337, you have definitely improved since last time I saw you. You should edit those sound sfx bro, that static almost killed my ears.

Everyone has said what needed to be said, nice work

@Cooljoshua567 wrote:Wow I'm impressesd 1337, you have definitely improved since last time I saw you. You should edit those sound sfx bro, that static almost killed my ears.

Everyone has said what needed to be said, nice work

your critic is late...
but nice work on the animation tondro

@mask236 wrote:

@Cooljoshua567 wrote:Wow I'm impressesd 1337, you have definitely improved since last time I saw you. You should edit those sound sfx bro, that static almost killed my ears.

Everyone has said what needed to be said, nice work

your critic is late...
but nice work on the animation tondro

Just by a week...it's the end of the world -.-

nice, i never expected you to get that good. you improved a lot.

Sorry to bump but how do you zoom without altering the camera?

@YoshiSonic wrote:Sorry to bump but how do you zoom without altering the camera?

Well when zooming the camera you make the vcam smaller (naturally) by doing so you hold shift when making it smaller so that the vcam stays proportional.

And thanks everyone for your critics i really appreciate it also i'm working on something atm so expect something better than sonic vs gamma