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Spritan
Spritan
Age : 21
Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2012-09-16

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10/27/2012, 5:27 pm
basically...........idk man just watch it Serious http://www.fileize.com/view/e14bc675-bbb/ (sorry about the intoduction just in a weird phase i guesse)
**********UPDATE**********
http://filz.us/5w6

aligned the text n the blue box and the cursor to my characters text(cousin messed with the vcam and deleted it of the library and i had to redo the whole vcam thing so........thats a thing)


Last edited by XxXyamiXxX on 11/4/2012, 2:38 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : *UPDATE*)

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InfernoTPX
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Spritan
Spritan
Age : 24
Number of posts : 306
Registration date : 2012-07-18
Location : Venus

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10/27/2012, 6:49 pm
Could use some work but it's an OK job for first time

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My first maple animation [update] Air-gear-o
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Spritan
Spritan
Age : 24
Number of posts : 1166
Registration date : 2011-07-21
Location : Power Girl's Breasts

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10/27/2012, 7:58 pm
Hmm, well for a first animation, it's alright, but I'll point out a few things.

First, the quality it Jpegy. I don't know what's causing that, either your V cam it unaligned or your bitmaps aren't set to lossless but it's very ugly to watch.

Second, the text was not aligned properly with the floating cursor. Even small details like that can make an animation unappealing.

Lastly, the fight itself was kinda smooth and wasn't half bad compared to most first animations fight scenes, but it seemed rushed and I couldn't take in all of what was going on. You gotta be more clear with exactly what's happening, slow mo's are are good, and also easing out dashes.

Once you finish it, I'll give ya the CJ review Wink

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My first maple animation [update] Ala_Rubra
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Spritan
Spritan
Age : 21
Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2012-09-16

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10/28/2012, 1:56 am
but it's very ugly to watch. very ugly to watch.very ugly
im not finishing this Sad (jk). ill work on that.

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Bradders98
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Spritan
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Age : 22
Number of posts : 244
Registration date : 2012-08-16
Location : Cyberspace, perfecting Dodge's revamp

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10/28/2012, 6:07 am
I want this character. He looks like a boss.

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Spritan
Spritan
Age : 21
Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2012-09-16

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10/28/2012, 8:58 am
@Bradders98 wrote:I want this character. He looks like a boss.
Pft looks like. Man, he is a boss, jk.i just made him look like a boss(dark element user,but nit frequent)

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Spritan
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Age : 25
Number of posts : 103
Registration date : 2011-11-08

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10/28/2012, 10:24 am
Damn man, if this is your first, then congrats, you have to fix a few things and your already a skilled animator. o:
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Spritan
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Age : 21
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Registration date : 2012-09-16

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10/28/2012, 11:08 am
LOL... Fanks.This is my second flash animation just my first maple animation. I do know that thers stuffs i haz to fix but thats what learnings about, making mistakes then learning from them
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Spritan
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Age : 24
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Location : Venus

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10/28/2012, 11:38 am
True true XxXyamiXxX very true it's an extreme learning experience

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Spritan
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Age : 21
Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2012-09-16

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10/28/2012, 12:07 pm
Pheonix, its just yami, just yami

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Spritan
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Age : 24
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Registration date : 2012-07-18
Location : Venus

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10/28/2012, 12:12 pm
Well then you will address me as Flame

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My first maple animation [update] Air-gear-o
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Spritan
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Age : 21
Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2012-09-16

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11/4/2012, 2:42 pm
UPDATED. So.......i have fixed a couple of thing like alignment and tracing the bitmap.

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Spritan
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Age : 28
Number of posts : 175
Registration date : 2012-05-26

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11/4/2012, 7:21 pm
Its better than my first animation .

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Spritan
Spritan
Age : 21
Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2012-09-16

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11/5/2012, 9:41 am
Very Happy my first is bettar than yours, not saying i'm better than you, just feel better.

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