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10/7/2012, 4:37 pm
OK so I am still working on this and be assured the final version will be a lot better than this but I really am trying my hardest to put all my effort into this and I'll keep making changes as needed so here it is.
http://www.fileize.com/view/5a53402e-7e8/


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10/7/2012, 5:20 pm
Post your previews in the same topic as your battle.

You got the wrong SWF man, when you upload to fileize, always copy the first link to show previews, unless you want your animations to take up the entire damn page

As for the animation, it's way to stiff, you gotta skew and ease more.

Get the original file, and I'll give you the review

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10/7/2012, 5:55 pm
OK I see what you mean about wrong swf

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10/7/2012, 11:21 pm
Didn't really enjoy it too much, What you should do is move things at different speeds, Don't just have sonic running in the center of the screen with a scrolling background cause that personally bores me, Maybe have sonic slowly tweening to one side of the screen so it atleast looks like he isn't just stuck there. Know what i mean? haha sorry i'm not good at critting stuff.

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10/8/2012, 5:30 am
No it sounds great I'll do it thnx

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10/8/2012, 1:58 pm
Looks very good nice job. Very Happy But your Sonic Running animation needs better alignment and at the end the 2 characters get crushed horizontly. nuff said.
BTW you should have put this on your battle topic.
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10/8/2012, 2:02 pm
I am going to have some one lock this I soon OK so running alignment got it thanks 1337

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10/9/2012, 9:39 am
Dat V Cam when it zooms it looks fugly...

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