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8/15/2012, 7:02 pm
Hello there the famous spritas B) I have divided to give the sprite animation universe another go and to my surprise I'm interested again so I put together a little scuffle and I mean little to see if I could be as good as you guys this is my first video ever so try to be considerable that my skills always have room for improvement tell mewhat you guys think also I'm very new here as you can tell: here is the video link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yvKOSbaw-Pg (Edit- if you would like to point out areas to improve in or just give pointers feel free)

EDIT-2: I have decided that I'm gonna make a way better round 2.

Features:
Motion tweens and easing.
Blur.
Fluid animation with better alignment.
More effects and better soundfx


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8/15/2012, 7:05 pm
Needs re creation lol!
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8/15/2012, 7:07 pm
I know but bear with me I'm just starting so I have to get adjusted in no time I will have many battles better than this
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8/15/2012, 7:56 pm
Ok bro, if you need any help talk to me on skype, my name is wael_alzahrani !!
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8/15/2012, 7:58 pm
@WaelAlzFlash wrote:Ok bro, if you need any help talk to me on skype, my name is wael_alzahrani !!
thanks I will maybe if I don't find out myself
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8/15/2012, 9:41 pm
I'll let Leo or Face get to this one.

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8/15/2012, 9:44 pm
@D3Anims wrote:I'll let Leo or Face get to this one.
I'm sorry am I breaking a rule or something if so I apologize for it
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8/15/2012, 9:46 pm
No you arent, he is being a smart ass, anyway, ill tell you what you need to fix without anyone telling you to do anything
It needs re-creation, basically watch some sprite animation tutorial!
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8/15/2012, 9:52 pm
Oh lol thanks I try but I go into my own zone and forget it's there for my learning but I am great at making sprite sheets I am currently making my own captain basilisx sprites coming along great just have to add claws Cool

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8/15/2012, 9:59 pm
how is D3 being a smartass lmfao

Okay I'll try to keep it short
first
Sprites are badly aligned and also they're squashed/stretched. The sounds are interrupting each other, make sure that they are on stream and that there's enough frames to play them until the next one. If there's less frames than what you would need, create a new layer.

This was pretty choppy. There was no easing and things were generally stiff.
And that ground...yeah I don't think I need to explain it.

That's pretty much the stuff you gotta work on.
I can't really tell you how do you get better at this stuff, but it all comes down to practice.

Happy animating~
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8/15/2012, 10:01 pm
It should be longer, it's very difficult to give proper criticism on this. Is this made with flash? Looks like a paint animation. Need to learn the basics again? Here's the link to Eric's vids:

https://www.thespritas.com/t184-how-to-sprite-animate-with-flash

Good luck
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8/15/2012, 10:03 pm
FlamethePheonix wrote:
@D3Anims wrote:I'll let Leo or Face get to this one.
I'm sorry am I breaking a rule or something if so I apologize for it
they're the guys that handle reviews and advice giving, its sorta their thing, you did nothing wrong really.


@WaelAlzFlash wrote:No you arent, he is being a smart ass, anyway, ill tell you what you need to fix without anyone telling you to do anything
It needs re-creation, basically watch some sprite animation tutorial!
Dude calm down. Dont drag your probs with Face to me. They're the guys that do reviews mostly and help people out, get over it, sheesh man

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8/15/2012, 10:10 pm
Thanks though you guys a harsh critics opinion is what I need ifureadthisdie is the actual admin I thought he was just a regular member again thanks also yes it was made in flash and I am a beginner. But I'm a quick learner though That's just one of my gifts from above

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8/15/2012, 10:26 pm
no im not dragging face thing here, to tell you the truth i dont give a shit, but the way i read your comment was kinda appauling, anyway sorry for misunderstanding ^^, less off topic ness!
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8/15/2012, 11:15 pm
OwO oook

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8/15/2012, 11:38 pm
Dear lord....*facepalm* i just gave a nice juicy rant about this earlier. But this is a prime example of what NOT to do....

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8/16/2012, 12:23 am
@THE2ndNarutox wrote:Dear lord....*facepalm* i just gave a nice juicy rant about this earlier. But this is a prime example of what NOT to do....
Wow.. that was so helpful. I thank god that you are on the site :O
Everything on it was mentioned by Leo, but he just mentioned the flaws superficially, you just need to watch and actually learn from ifureadthisdie's tutorials , if you do so, animate and show us again.
Very Happy

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8/16/2012, 1:01 am
@GEARichard wrote:
@THE2ndNarutox wrote:Dear lord....*facepalm* i just gave a nice juicy rant about this earlier. But this is a prime example of what NOT to do....
Wow.. that was so helpful. I thank god that you are on the site :O
Very Happy

Anything to help Razz Im just doin what comes naturally!

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8/16/2012, 7:40 am
Fine print "first animation ever" no one ever reads the fine print

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8/16/2012, 7:59 am
FlamethePheonix wrote:Fine print "first animation ever" no one ever reads the fine print

No excuses, we will hassle your ass till we see improvement, its how we better the animators here

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8/16/2012, 8:02 am
Well that seems I...will kill you fair enough Very Happy

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8/16/2012, 8:03 am
FlamethePheonix wrote:Well that seems I...will kill you fair enough Very Happy

Good. Now...
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8/16/2012, 8:22 am
This guy

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9/10/2012, 2:05 pm
Yeah it is compared to the progress I have made now but it's a alright start though thnx

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9/11/2012, 2:46 pm
It great for your first try. you need better alignment.
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