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7/25/2012, 8:31 pm
Just going to put all of my unfinished works (Everything I've made) In one post, if I can.

I'm not going to upload EVERYTHING I've made until I rework them to be less annoying. Some of my animations don't even have play buttons.
Also note, these don't all end properly. If you want to stop hearing the music/sounds from one of them, just right-click the .swf and uncheck play.

I'll be uploading these in the order they were created.

This was my first animation using Vcam... Went a lil' nuts with it.


This was a failed attempt at a storyline I've been molling around, I might pick up on it at some point. Also my first attempt giving voices to the characters.


This is my most recent project. I overused blur on it, a lot.


That's all for now. Looking out for some actual feedback, it'd be appreciated.
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7/25/2012, 8:46 pm
First one
"What the fuck?" O.o

Second one
Hey that was decent

Third one
"what the fuck? Dem DBZ sounds o.O

That's all the feedback you get from me

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7/25/2012, 9:54 pm
@Crash wrote:First one
"What the fuck?" O.o

Second one
Hey that was decent

Third one
"what the fuck? Dem DBZ sounds o.O

That's all the feedback you get from me

Not too sure what to make of "What the fuck?"
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7/25/2012, 10:09 pm
At some cinematics of the movie, is kinda hard to understand what's going on. The camera just shakes a lot, and you keep rotating it. Also I thought I was watching DBZ x_o
The second one was more under control, and cool voices btw.
And the third one, was overall like the other ones. I liked the BG.
And that was a Black Mage from FF?

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7/25/2012, 11:29 pm
@GEARichard wrote:At some cinematics of the movie, is kinda hard to understand what's going on. The camera just shakes a lot, and you keep rotating it. Also I thought I was watching DBZ x_o
The second one was more under control, and cool voices btw.
And the third one, was overall like the other ones. I liked the BG.
And that was a Black Mage from FF?

The first one I was just dicking around with Vcam, which explains the shakiness.
The Voices in the second one were ripped from various characters of Smash Bros Brawl (Ike and Starfox)
The Mage from the third one is just my lazy ass recolor of the character "Si Mirror" in kirby superstart ultra.
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7/25/2012, 11:36 pm
all of these were great.

just replace those DBZ sounds and you've got some quality animations here.

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7/25/2012, 11:53 pm
@SXR123 wrote:all of these were great.

just replace those DBZ sounds and you've got some quality animations here.

What does everyone have against DBZ sounds?
And I'm not arguing, I'm actually curious. I don't see what's wrong with using them.
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7/26/2012, 12:01 am
Nothing wrong with using them, it's just that they're overused. We've been here for a long ass time and we're sick of it lol. We would like to here something different other than just those
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7/26/2012, 12:05 am
@NS01 wrote:Nothing wrong with using them, it's just that they're overused. We've been here for a long ass time and we're sick of it lol. We would like to here something different other than just those
^-^

Yeah I figured it would have something to do with Sprite Veterans and whatnot... I'm probably going to be using a lot more sounds from SSBB in the long run.
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8/4/2012, 6:17 am
these weren't half bad actually, I think the first one was the better of the 3 because of the pacing, and if you slow down, well not slow down but like add more detail to the fighting and not shake the camera up as much, you could have some good stuff going.

All it needs is some polishing and well, it'll look pretty good if you ask me. Anyway, looking forward to seeing some more stuff from you. Good job, hope this helps

P.S. (Why don't you go introduce yourself in the introduction section?)
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8/4/2012, 8:13 am
the dbz sounds...just ruin your animations...it sounds like a clusterfuck of crash sounds..
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8/4/2012, 12:55 pm
Then i must be the only one here who actually enjoyed the vcam movement of the first one then. I gotta say though i digged the 2nd one alot.

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8/4/2012, 5:49 pm
I have to say, these are good. They kinda remind me in a way of LGDVegetto's work except that they're more dynamic. I think it's the sounds mostly that give me that impression, 'cuz sounds are being interrupted by the one that follows them.

Only thing though, it kinda seems that you're overdoing all the movement and stuff. Yeah, it's pretty cool when there's non-stop movement on screen but there must be a limit. It's hard to animate those sequences with the v-cam moving around because you cannot really let the eye of the viewer wander around the screen. You wanna make sure that he is actually looking at the focus of your animation, in this case the fight.

That's what I think anyway.
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8/7/2012, 5:32 pm
the first and last one you kinda oded on the dbz sounds the second tho, remove some of the dbz hit sounds with some brawl or street fighter hit sounds and I liked where you were going for the second one to if you pick it up again Ill be watching it
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