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- YoshiSonicSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 1302
Registration date : 2010-11-05
Location : Earth
First Completed Animation
7/23/2012, 4:50 pm
You're all big meanies
Haven t made one of these babies since last year since my internet got cut off at home but i found a way to bring flash to my home and work on it there so I did, I forgot all those important steps I know how to skew a little and high def the sprites. But really this look bad at the first 2 secs but I decided to complete it and see how to make it better by bringing it here. and get my old tips back from the spritas. Its short but it is my first completed animation. I know that isnt a excuse but after it looked bad I got lazy.
Its at 30 fps, I did 2 frames for each pose lossness png to make it high def, V cam, other things and so on.
Oh and I have a question while in this animation I skimmed through the time line and found I could only go so far to about 17.4 secs does it continue when you animate that far or something else?
I skewed a few times dont know if they are right but you can see one of the skews clearly
NEED CRITIQUES!
Ok here it is(Its bad):
http://www.fileize.com/view/48cca5bc-84a/

Haven t made one of these babies since last year since my internet got cut off at home but i found a way to bring flash to my home and work on it there so I did, I forgot all those important steps I know how to skew a little and high def the sprites. But really this look bad at the first 2 secs but I decided to complete it and see how to make it better by bringing it here. and get my old tips back from the spritas. Its short but it is my first completed animation. I know that isnt a excuse but after it looked bad I got lazy.
Its at 30 fps, I did 2 frames for each pose lossness png to make it high def, V cam, other things and so on.
Oh and I have a question while in this animation I skimmed through the time line and found I could only go so far to about 17.4 secs does it continue when you animate that far or something else?
I skewed a few times dont know if they are right but you can see one of the skews clearly
NEED CRITIQUES!
Ok here it is(Its bad):
http://www.fileize.com/view/48cca5bc-84a/



- Luigiman364Spritan
- Age : 26
Number of posts : 3097
Registration date : 2010-12-13
Location : Massachusetts
Re: First Completed Animation
7/23/2012, 5:48 pm
Theres so much to Cnc...I cant asdfasdf :I
well u should restart the basic skewing tutorials
well u should restart the basic skewing tutorials
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- YoshiSonicSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 1302
Registration date : 2010-11-05
Location : Earth
Re: First Completed Animation
7/23/2012, 6:39 pm
@Luigiman364 wrote:Theres so much to Cnc...I cant asdfasdf :I
well u should restart the basic skewing tutorials
What?


- WaelAlzFlashSpritan
- Age : 23
Number of posts : 381
Registration date : 2012-02-13
Re: First Completed Animation
7/23/2012, 7:22 pm
basically, i hope this is old, otherwise, it is hard to believe its in 30fps, there is no smoothness, maybe you should animate something different from sonic first!
- SᗡNSpritan
- Age : 29
Number of posts : 1846
Registration date : 2011-07-19
Re: First Completed Animation
7/23/2012, 7:50 pm
LOLAASDDSFASFFAS! So much lolz in one animation.



Re: First Completed Animation
7/23/2012, 9:28 pm
@WaelAlzFlash wrote:basically, i hope this is old, otherwise, it is hard to believe its in 30fps, there is no smoothness, maybe you should animate something different from sonic first!
yeah no.
secondly. I'm not gonna touch this with a fifteen foot pole. or any pole for that matter. in otherwords, i'm not touching it.

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- ChronoSpritan
- Age : 28
Number of posts : 106
Registration date : 2012-06-18
Location : Xalax
Re: First Completed Animation
7/23/2012, 11:34 pm
I regret pressing the rewind button. ;__;
Music in stream plez.
Music in stream plez.
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- YoshiSonicSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 1302
Registration date : 2010-11-05
Location : Earth
Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 10:31 am
What kind of critiques are these ? Don't understand any of you. I already said it was bad tell me ways to make it better! WAYS
This is my first completed animation and i haven't animated for a year. Gosh. Give me things that will help. If only Ping was here he would actual support my reasons and give me ways to get better...
What is a stream anyway?
@Wael this isn't sonic its kirby
.
This is my first completed animation and i haven't animated for a year. Gosh. Give me things that will help. If only Ping was here he would actual support my reasons and give me ways to get better...
What is a stream anyway?
@Wael this isn't sonic its kirby
.


Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 11:22 am
i'll critique it for you bro. heavily. maybe. it'll definately be a critique though. give me five minutes.
critique- don't have a fire pillar going down as kirby's intro if he's not gonna be in one of his fire abilities. also, while he was spinning down, you should have that faster because it looks slow and awkward that way. again, kirby can't shoot fire from his mouth in normal mode. also, have the camera snap away before he opens his mouth again when you have it as a symbol. you could also have followed the fireball to the enemy, made it look less awkward. i don't know how to fix this, but when kirby fell on the birdy thingy it was too fast and i was confused about it for a second. when the squeaker pulls out a bomb and throws it, you should slow that symbol down, and add some comedy up in this shizz. when he fell the squeaker could've been all shocked and jumped back some before he threw it. the last mouse was too fast in general, just slow him down a bit. set le music to stream instead of event. when you click on the song, look down in properties where it says sync and switch it.
critique- don't have a fire pillar going down as kirby's intro if he's not gonna be in one of his fire abilities. also, while he was spinning down, you should have that faster because it looks slow and awkward that way. again, kirby can't shoot fire from his mouth in normal mode. also, have the camera snap away before he opens his mouth again when you have it as a symbol. you could also have followed the fireball to the enemy, made it look less awkward. i don't know how to fix this, but when kirby fell on the birdy thingy it was too fast and i was confused about it for a second. when the squeaker pulls out a bomb and throws it, you should slow that symbol down, and add some comedy up in this shizz. when he fell the squeaker could've been all shocked and jumped back some before he threw it. the last mouse was too fast in general, just slow him down a bit. set le music to stream instead of event. when you click on the song, look down in properties where it says sync and switch it.
- YoshiSonicSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 1302
Registration date : 2010-11-05
Location : Earth
Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 11:44 am
@Leaf wrote:i'll critique it for you bro. heavily. maybe. it'll definately be a critique though. give me five minutes.
critique- don't have a fire pillar going down as kirby's intro if he's not gonna be in one of his fire abilities. also, while he was spinning down, you should have that faster because it looks slow and awkward that way. again, kirby can't shoot fire from his mouth in normal mode. also, have the camera snap away before he opens his mouth again when you have it as a symbol. you could also have followed the fireball to the enemy, made it look less awkward. i don't know how to fix this, but when kirby fell on the birdy thingy it was too fast and i was confused about it for a second. when the squeaker pulls out a bomb and throws it, you should slow that symbol down, and add some comedy up in this shizz. when he fell the squeaker could've been all shocked and jumped back some before he threw it. the last mouse was too fast in general, just slow him down a bit. set le music to stream instead of event. when you click on the song, look down in properties where it says sync and switch it.
Now thats a critique. Thanks dude Oh and anytips on to up the quality?


Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 11:49 am
for the music a guy told me to right click on it and change it to something. i'll see what it is in a minute. oh, and when you resize the vcam, make sure you hold down shift.
edit-set it to adcpm instead of default
edit-set it to adcpm instead of default
- TalSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 3972
Registration date : 2011-08-20
Location : i dunno man...
Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 12:07 pm
oh god...my volume was on max when i played the animation

- YoshiSonicSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 1302
Registration date : 2010-11-05
Location : Earth
Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 12:25 pm
@Leaf wrote:for the music a guy told me to right click on it and change it to something. i'll see what it is in a minute. oh, and when you resize the vcam, make sure you hold down shift.
edit-set it to adcpm instead of default
Oh ok oh and when you say slow it down do you mean add more frames to each pose or what?


Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 12:40 pm
add frames per pose
Sword Gradients with Leaf c:


- YoshiSonicSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 1302
Registration date : 2010-11-05
Location : Earth
Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 1:17 pm
@Leaf wrote:add frames per pose
Thanks man that was alot of help now my next animation will be better thanks to you
To everyone else critiques are still accepted, Im all ears



- SuilenrocSpritan
- Age : 25
Number of posts : 307
Registration date : 2012-06-29
Location : Estate Of Mind
Re: First Completed Animation
7/24/2012, 1:21 pm
I think I should say one word. Tutorial.
- BlitznBurstSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 4898
Registration date : 2011-01-15
Location : Scotland
Re: First Completed Animation
7/25/2012, 6:16 pm
Well guys, you can't deny it's a shit-ton better than the crap he released before.
Unfortunately that isn't saying much but credit where credit is due :/
But you know what, I'm not even touching this one. There's just... so much wrong.
All I'm going to say is SET YOUR DAMN MUSIC TO STREAM. I don't want my ears being raped every single fucking time the animation loops. Jesus Christ.
Unfortunately that isn't saying much but credit where credit is due :/
But you know what, I'm not even touching this one. There's just... so much wrong.
All I'm going to say is SET YOUR DAMN MUSIC TO STREAM. I don't want my ears being raped every single fucking time the animation loops. Jesus Christ.

- YoshiSonicSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 1302
Registration date : 2010-11-05
Location : Earth
Re: First Completed Animation
10/28/2013, 10:00 pm
I remembered how mean you guys were to me back in the day in almost all of my topics. > : (
(Yeah..just making a long over dued statement, this will be the last of my topics bumped before the move)
(Yeah..just making a long over dued statement, this will be the last of my topics bumped before the move)


- v2Administrator
- Age : 24
Number of posts : 5600
Registration date : 2012-05-17
Location : your girls DMs
Re: First Completed Animation
10/28/2013, 10:03 pm

Re: First Completed Animation
10/28/2013, 10:14 pm
the links dead....just sayin

Re: First Completed Animation
10/28/2013, 10:29 pm
Hooooooooooollllyyyyy Shhhhhiiiiiitttttttt...
I'm assuming you now know what was wrong with this?
I'm assuming you now know what was wrong with this?
- YoshiSonicSpritan
- Age : 22
Number of posts : 1302
Registration date : 2010-11-05
Location : Earth
Re: First Completed Animation
10/28/2013, 11:20 pm


Re: First Completed Animation
10/28/2013, 11:40 pm
wow.
I was a dick.
...well, i still am, but i'm better now.
I was a dick.
...well, i still am, but i'm better now.

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Re: First Completed Animation
10/28/2013, 11:57 pm

Re: First Completed Animation
10/29/2013, 12:13 am
well, I am less of a dick than I was.

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