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7/23/2012, 4:50 pm
You're all big meanies



Haven t made one of these babies since last year since my internet got cut off at home but i found a way to bring flash to my home and work on it there so I did, I forgot all those important steps I know how to skew a little and high def the sprites. But really this look bad at the first 2 secs but I decided to complete it and see how to make it better by bringing it here. and get my old tips back from the spritas. Its short but it is my first completed animation. I know that isnt a excuse but after it looked bad I got lazy.

Its at 30 fps, I did 2 frames for each pose lossness png to make it high def, V cam, other things and so on.

Oh and I have a question while in this animation I skimmed through the time line and found I could only go so far to about 17.4 secs does it continue when you animate that far or something else?

I skewed a few times dont know if they are right but you can see one of the skews clearly
NEED CRITIQUES!
Ok here it is(Its bad):
http://www.fileize.com/view/48cca5bc-84a/

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7/23/2012, 5:48 pm
Theres so much to Cnc...I cant asdfasdf :I

well u should restart the basic skewing tutorials

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7/23/2012, 6:39 pm
@Luigiman364 wrote:Theres so much to Cnc...I cant asdfasdf :I

well u should restart the basic skewing tutorials

What?

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7/23/2012, 7:22 pm
basically, i hope this is old, otherwise, it is hard to believe its in 30fps, there is no smoothness, maybe you should animate something different from sonic first!
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7/23/2012, 7:50 pm
LOLAASDDSFASFFAS! So much lolz in one animation.
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7/23/2012, 9:28 pm
@WaelAlzFlash wrote:basically, i hope this is old, otherwise, it is hard to believe its in 30fps, there is no smoothness, maybe you should animate something different from sonic first!

yeah no.

secondly. I'm not gonna touch this with a fifteen foot pole. or any pole for that matter. in otherwords, i'm not touching it.

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7/23/2012, 11:34 pm
I regret pressing the rewind button. ;__;
Music in stream plez.

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7/24/2012, 10:31 am
What kind of critiques are these ? Don't understand any of you. I already said it was bad tell me ways to make it better! WAYS

This is my first completed animation and i haven't animated for a year. Gosh. Give me things that will help. If only Ping was here he would actual support my reasons and give me ways to get better...

What is a stream anyway?


@Wael this isn't sonic its kirby
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7/24/2012, 11:22 am
i'll critique it for you bro. heavily. maybe. it'll definately be a critique though. give me five minutes.

critique- don't have a fire pillar going down as kirby's intro if he's not gonna be in one of his fire abilities. also, while he was spinning down, you should have that faster because it looks slow and awkward that way. again, kirby can't shoot fire from his mouth in normal mode. also, have the camera snap away before he opens his mouth again when you have it as a symbol. you could also have followed the fireball to the enemy, made it look less awkward. i don't know how to fix this, but when kirby fell on the birdy thingy it was too fast and i was confused about it for a second. when the squeaker pulls out a bomb and throws it, you should slow that symbol down, and add some comedy up in this shizz. when he fell the squeaker could've been all shocked and jumped back some before he threw it. the last mouse was too fast in general, just slow him down a bit. set le music to stream instead of event. when you click on the song, look down in properties where it says sync and switch it.
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7/24/2012, 11:44 am
@Leaf wrote:i'll critique it for you bro. heavily. maybe. it'll definately be a critique though. give me five minutes.

critique- don't have a fire pillar going down as kirby's intro if he's not gonna be in one of his fire abilities. also, while he was spinning down, you should have that faster because it looks slow and awkward that way. again, kirby can't shoot fire from his mouth in normal mode. also, have the camera snap away before he opens his mouth again when you have it as a symbol. you could also have followed the fireball to the enemy, made it look less awkward. i don't know how to fix this, but when kirby fell on the birdy thingy it was too fast and i was confused about it for a second. when the squeaker pulls out a bomb and throws it, you should slow that symbol down, and add some comedy up in this shizz. when he fell the squeaker could've been all shocked and jumped back some before he threw it. the last mouse was too fast in general, just slow him down a bit. set le music to stream instead of event. when you click on the song, look down in properties where it says sync and switch it.

Now thats a critique. Thanks dude Oh and anytips on to up the quality?

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7/24/2012, 11:49 am
for the music a guy told me to right click on it and change it to something. i'll see what it is in a minute. oh, and when you resize the vcam, make sure you hold down shift.
edit-set it to adcpm instead of default
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7/24/2012, 12:07 pm
oh god...my volume was on max when i played the animation Shocked

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7/24/2012, 12:25 pm
@Leaf wrote:for the music a guy told me to right click on it and change it to something. i'll see what it is in a minute. oh, and when you resize the vcam, make sure you hold down shift.
edit-set it to adcpm instead of default

Oh ok oh and when you say slow it down do you mean add more frames to each pose or what?

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7/24/2012, 12:40 pm
add frames per pose

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7/24/2012, 1:17 pm
@Leaf wrote:add frames per pose

Thanks man that was alot of help now my next animation will be better thanks to you


To everyone else critiques are still accepted, Im all ears Cool

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7/24/2012, 1:21 pm
I think I should say one word. Tutorial.
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7/25/2012, 6:16 pm
Well guys, you can't deny it's a shit-ton better than the crap he released before.

Unfortunately that isn't saying much but credit where credit is due :/

But you know what, I'm not even touching this one. There's just... so much wrong.

All I'm going to say is SET YOUR DAMN MUSIC TO STREAM. I don't want my ears being raped every single fucking time the animation loops. Jesus Christ.

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10/28/2013, 10:00 pm
I remembered how mean you guys were to me back in the day in almost all of my topics. > : (

(Yeah..just making a long over dued statement, this will be the last of my topics bumped before the move)

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10/28/2013, 10:03 pm
@Luigiman364 wrote:skewing tutorials
lmfao
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10/28/2013, 10:14 pm
the links dead....just sayin

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10/28/2013, 10:29 pm
Hooooooooooollllyyyyy Shhhhhiiiiiitttttttt...

I'm assuming you now know what was wrong with this?
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10/28/2013, 11:20 pm
@5h0ck wrote:the links dead....just sayin
No it isn't.

Get better net, plox.

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10/28/2013, 11:40 pm
wow.

I was a dick.

...well, i still am, but i'm better now.

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10/28/2013, 11:57 pm
@SXR123 wrote:I was a dick, but i'm better now.
 
 
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10/29/2013, 12:13 am
well, I am less of a dick than I was.

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