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6/19/2012, 12:01 am
I've been trying my best to get it smooth looking, but I'm unsure how smooth it is...

Criticism is appreciated and I do apologize if I posted this topic in the wrong place.

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1340076440

I hope some of you enjoy it.

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6/19/2012, 1:16 am
When it raises its legs, there is a sudden blur on it before it stomps the ground.
Other than that, it looks fine.

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6/19/2012, 2:18 am
oowiii this is nice
the only thing I would need changing is the tile cracks i would make them abit smaller and color them white

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6/19/2012, 10:37 am
It should be in WIP animations, not Unfinished.

This is pretty good. It was really smooth. I like how at the end you moved the quills independently of the rest of the body. You should make the rock look better though, it's pretty bad. Partly because it looks bad and partly because the rock is a vector and the background and character are sprites and they just don't mix. Use a rock sprite instead o drawing one in Flash. The cracks look pretty bad as well.

I also despise you for using Sonic fab characters but that is unrelated.

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6/19/2012, 2:05 pm
blitzkrieg667 wrote:It should be in WIP animations, not Unfinished.

This is pretty good. It was really smooth. I like how at the end you moved the quills independently of the rest of the body. You should make the rock look better though, it's pretty bad. Partly because it looks bad and partly because the rock is a vector and the background and character are sprites and they just don't mix. Use a rock sprite instead o drawing one in Flash. The cracks look pretty bad as well.

I also despise you for using Sonic fab characters but that is unrelated.

Thanks for the info, although, I don't think this should be put in the W.I.P's area since I don't plan on adding onto this...

What in the world is a "Sonic Fab Character?" LOL
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6/19/2012, 2:59 pm
I like it, but the dust in the end looks terribad and unfitting.

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6/19/2012, 4:21 pm
@AaronKun wrote:I like it, but the dust in the end looks terribad and unfitting.
I know it is, it's called lazy smoke from a stickpage tutorial. lol
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6/19/2012, 8:34 pm
Love the flow this has.. someone who can interact the scenery with drawn stuff correctly..
Keep it up, love that we have more talented peeps joining.

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