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6/6/2012, 2:13 pm
Hey everyone, long time no see.

This is an animation that I putted all I can do in it.

This is my last try if it isn't good in off, I give up. Sad

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1339004823
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/1ee3355a6b182249508ddabe68de6934

For this one, I used again Sonic advance 3 sprites and backgrounds, like almost everytime... I used a sun effect I found in a thread and sounds effects from TheSpritas, Google and anothers ones...


WARNING : No preloader.

First update and maybe the last one : http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/7fb9e16323523fdfb721a175cabc2188


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6/6/2012, 2:37 pm
What the fuck is with that red line? Really?

This is looking pretty smooth, however I can't tell much with only a few seconds of animation. It's pretty much dramatic stare>Crouch>Dash>end. Still, looking good so far.

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6/6/2012, 2:42 pm
Did you just stick that lens flare onto your camera?

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6/6/2012, 2:43 pm
Well about that red line, this is something to help me to align sprites this is a WIP I will delete it if I finish.

@NS01 wrote:Did you just stick that lens flare onto your camera?

What do you mean why "lens flare" ?
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6/6/2012, 2:52 pm
this is very good indeed, i like how smooth it is, there was only a thingy i didn´t like...it was sonic´s idle because it´s shadow´s and it doesn´t fit well but that doesn´t mean your animation was bad at all so don´t give up dude. also i like the sun effect, looks more realistic.
and ^ he used the red line to align sonic´s idle but that is useless because you can use onion skin dude... don´t leave sprites...WE NEED MORE PPL, NOT LESS

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6/6/2012, 3:03 pm
Saulgp wrote:this is very good indeed, i like how smooth it is, there was only a thingy i didn´t like...it was sonic´s idle because it´s shadow´s and it doesn´t fit well but that doesn´t mean your animation was bad at all so don´t give up dude. also i like the sun effect, looks more realistic.
and ^ he used the red line to align sonic´s idle but that is useless because you can use onion skin dude... don´t leave sprites...WE NEED MORE PPL, NOT LESS
what


I understand your opinion about Sonic's idle, I'll change it probably, I appreciate what you wrote.
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6/6/2012, 3:04 pm
the sun glare he means.

anyway, this is looking good so far, so keep it up! I want to see what happens next.

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6/6/2012, 3:30 pm
the glare doesn't move, which makes no sense

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6/6/2012, 4:51 pm
oh snap! dis shiz is sho smooth son! I really wanna see this finished....without that huge red line......I know you'll get rid of it though. and yeah...sonic's idle....not feeling it man....hope you change that too :3 also, you should move the sun glare....it's really bothering me

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6/7/2012, 9:51 am
About that sun flare, no I make 3 layers one for Vcam, one for the sun effect and one for the logo FRSM.

Yeah... I'll make more.

Edit : For the sun effect, I can't move it/rotate it, watch why on this screenshot.

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6/7/2012, 10:03 am
it seems pretty good, and don't give up....who'll battle with me when i'm bored?

and there really isn't much i can say expect from maybe making the bees float a bit....cause it doesn't make sense that they're just stand still

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6/7/2012, 11:01 am
@Tal wrote:it seems pretty good, and don't give up....who'll battle with me when i'm bored?

and there really isn't much i can say expect from maybe making the bees float a bit....cause it doesn't make sense that they're just stand still


Well if you wanna win easily Imma here Very Happy

And good idea for the bee I'll look for this. Serious

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6/7/2012, 11:28 am
After Effects CC Light Rays > Everything Very Happy

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6/7/2012, 11:46 am
Well I haven't made it in after effects and I don't really want to...
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6/7/2012, 12:34 pm
i think you should first work on the main animation and then polish the small things in the end.


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6/7/2012, 1:57 pm
@Tal wrote:i think you should first work on the main animation and then polish the small things in the end.


I'll do this
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6/7/2012, 8:11 pm
That was good yo' but the "sun effect" looks wrong like that.

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6/8/2012, 3:55 pm
@Marioluigi263 wrote:
Nobody can help me with this sun ?
it needs to be more like this... hope this helps...sure you´ll do it well

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6/8/2012, 11:41 pm
Using a line to align stuff. Might need to try that out... Genius stuff Very Happy

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6/9/2012, 9:46 am
I dont understand why you want to give up want to give up when you actually the ability to animate a good scene ?

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6/9/2012, 10:57 am
lol, sawniks got them fresh light up sneakers Very Happy

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6/9/2012, 11:01 am
NDS wrote:lol, sawniks got them fresh light up sneakers Very Happy

That apparently are able to tell how he's standing.
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6/14/2012, 12:05 pm
I like it. Lol.
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6/19/2012, 3:52 am
u are saying that u add the lens flare layer into your vcam?
Seems unnatural as it doesn't move.

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