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How is it, for my first fight?

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5/29/2012, 6:46 pm
this was my first my first sprite fight.... i lost motivation Sad cause the sounds
the F-U-C-K-I-N-G sounds ....
Well apart from the sfx tell me how i did it and how to improve plzzz
it´s finished. i need help like could someone give me cool hit sfx i can´t find any, apart from DBZ on Google Serious
well apart from this i added at least a song....

I know it gonna suck but enjoy :pale:
trust me, next time it´s going to be much betteeeeeeeeeeeerrr if you help me

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5/29/2012, 6:54 pm
It's impressive for a first. Good job. Although here's a little tip.
Due to the amount of lag at the part with the clouds, I'm assuming you added a blur filter to the background? Don't do that. Blur the clouds in Photoshop or something.
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5/29/2012, 7:04 pm
@Jemaster800 wrote:It's impressive for a first. Good job. Although here's a little tip.
Due to the amount of lag at the part with the clouds, I'm assuming you added a blur filter to the background? Don't do that. Blur the clouds in Photoshop or something.
ohhhh that was why it lagged... i thought it was DA B-KAM because started to give probs when i inserted it... Shocked
thnk u, but really, it sucks for a first sprite fight Crying or Very sad



WAT about the sfx aren´t they any good overthere ppl?

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5/29/2012, 7:09 pm
Not really. It's pretty damn good for a first.
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5/29/2012, 7:12 pm
...saw topic,got happy saw op got off taken watched vid not disappointed,cool

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5/29/2012, 7:12 pm
I agree actually, it is pretty good for your first, always keep track of where the floor is moving so that it doesn;t look unnatural, Im pretty sure I noticed the ground moving the opposite of the way it was supposed to be moving a couple of times.
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5/29/2012, 7:16 pm
@xKAreloadedx wrote:I agree actually, it is pretty good for your first, always keep track of where the floor is moving so that it doesn;t look unnatural, Im pretty sure I noticed the ground moving the opposite of the way it was supposed to be moving a couple of times.
MOG !!!! i´m sure i changed them all ....and know u say me thatttt.....FUCK.
There was a prob with AC how do you PlayAllSounds after StopAllSounds?

Thanks Face,Jem and Relo (^.^)

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5/29/2012, 7:18 pm
....that comment..........reading it made me strain alil

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5/29/2012, 7:25 pm
@Face wrote:....that comment..........reading it made me strain alil
ejemmm.... Should i ask why? or better not..

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5/29/2012, 7:32 pm
I agree. That was a really great fight for your first. Even though the text was kinda fast. I didn't pay too much attention to that anyways. just the fight. I can tell you this...it was better than my first animation, which was luigi vs sandbag. Ugh...I regret making that compared to now though....
but anyways, at the part where they were about to collide into each other, I think you should of moved the background with it. the ground was fine, though. The BG just kinda didn't fit well. You seem like a person that would remake this with much more style.......either that or I'm imaginating again...

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5/29/2012, 7:37 pm
Saulgp wrote:
@Face wrote:....that comment..........reading it made me strain alil
ejemmm.... Should i ask why? or better not..
one part your bad eng 2 parts me being a dick...no worries bro

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5/29/2012, 7:41 pm
@HavocTheGreenKirby wrote:I agree. That was a really great fight for your first. Even though the text was kinda fast. I didn't pay too much attention to that anyways. just the fight. I can tell you this...it was better than my first animation, which was luigi vs sandbag. Ugh...I regret making that compared to now though....
but anyways, at the part where they were about to collide into each other, I think you should of moved the background with it. the ground was fine, though. The BG just kinda didn't fit well. ......either that or I'm imaginating again...
thanx Havoc I came

@HavocTheGreenKirby wrote:You seem like a person that would remake this with much more style.
WTF!!!! are u a seer or something like that?

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5/29/2012, 7:45 pm
Saulgp wrote:
@HavocTheGreenKirby wrote:You seem like a person that would remake this with much more style.
WTF!!!! are u a seer or something like that?
I'm somewhat psychic, my friend : )

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5/29/2012, 7:48 pm
@HavocTheGreenKirby wrote:
Saulgp wrote:
@HavocTheGreenKirby wrote:You seem like a person that would remake this with much more style.
WTF!!!! are u a seer or something like that?
I'm somewhat psychic, my friend : )
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on topic plzz i need cool hit sfx

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5/30/2012, 6:18 am
Mmm pretty good for first. But god damit don't use dbz voice effects, at least turn off the volume.

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5/30/2012, 7:03 am
@Blackleafe wrote:Mmm pretty good for first. But god damit don't use dbz voice effects, at least turn off the volume.
thnx but did you read the part:
WAT about the sfx aren´t they any good overthere ppl?
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on topic plzz i need cool hit sfx
if you give me other sfx i won´t use the DBZ ones ORlly?

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5/30/2012, 7:21 am
OR you can just turn the volume ...

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5/30/2012, 4:34 pm
Nothing more to improve?
PD. i added a sondeo...

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6/2/2012, 8:56 pm
This was pretty good the only thing that bothered me was the actual fight itself. I hate to be some sort of Optard but the way they fought i felt like certain things shouldn't have happened like when they dashed towards each other and collided i feel the waves of collisions shouldn't have been done that way just for the fact they were using swords. The fight gave me more of feel that they were fighting with their bare hands rather then their swords at certain points. I also feel their should have been more sound effects then there actually were.

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6/2/2012, 9:28 pm
don't make me take back my vote bro,one piece is not DBZ .Teleporting,speed fighting IN THE AIR!! and such is not the way they fight.dude you seem to be a one piece fan you should know better then this crap. hit delete,watch some one piece movies and start over here Ill help.








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6/4/2012, 1:19 pm
I agree.

The fight was pretty damn good for your first animation however lacked originality. The teleport spam, DBZ sound effects and generic uninspired action didn't seem like One Piece.

However you do seem to have some good choreography in this. Not great, but good.

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6/4/2012, 2:54 pm
i didn't get shit of the talking in the start, but the animation is pretty good for a start, don't be harsh on yourself.

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6/4/2012, 4:01 pm
ok
Face: i know it´s not DBZ(i only got mad there)... next one will be much MOAR better and more OP style fighting
wait.... i just say that Laughing
Thank you to the others but yes most of it is DBZ fights Sad

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