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5/3/2012, 6:02 am
http://www.fileize.com/view/e017ca88-e93/

I really don't know if I'll continue this. I want to, but my ideas run slowly as hell. Tell me what you guys think, though.

Updated link.

http://www.fileize.com/view/13aac85e-f72/

Added sounds and some seconds. Still haven't added all of them, but this is kind of a preview of how it's going to be with the sounds.

So yes, again; opinion please.


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5/3/2012, 6:16 am
Cool trailer bro but i didn't like the music. And when you said anime fight i was expeting custom ANIME not sprite animation.

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5/3/2012, 6:18 am
@Blackleafe wrote:when you said anime fight i was expeting custom ANIME not sprite animation.
I don't get that? D:
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5/3/2012, 6:26 am
@Jemaster800 wrote:http://www.fileize.com/view/e017ca88-e93/

I really don't know if I'll continue this. I want to, but my ideas run slowly as hell. Tell me what you guys think, though.

@Jemaster800 wrote:

I really don't know if I'll continue this.

@Jemaster800 wrote:

I really don't know...

@Jemaster800 wrote:...don't know...


YOU BETTER FINISH THIS SHIT!!!! AND I WANT FOUR EPISODES!!!! AND A FULL LENGTH MOVIE!!!!



No but on a serious note, you definitely have an eye for musical to visual collaboration, I mean everything just meshed together into a brilliant piece of work.

More specifically the musical choice and sequencing in the beginning. Nice touch with choosing music we all should be fairly familiar with, and the way they cut at certain points in the music left me intrigued and wanting to see what scene would be shot next?

Now on to the character choice:
You were kind of helped out by the Jumpstars Roster, but you did a good job at selecting the characters with similar strengths and generally no OverPoweredness (I mean much could be said about Naruto's Ninetails Chakra, or Luffy's ability to just be badass), each hero has their strong points, and the fact that you chose characters we knew, we know their weak points as well. We'll just have to see how you exploit those if you choose to continue the workings.

Critique:
As I said before I loved the intro, it was brilliant loved the syncing and everything... HOWEVER, you produced something so epic and I felt a little hint of lackluster from your choice of font. I mean the intro is awesome, why not have the words be awesome as well? That being said I did find that the average font did compliment the spastic, and "exciting" flashes of black and white. So you can really go either way with that.

Uhh let's see, the effects were spectacular, nice usage, not overly spammed everywhere. I will say though that the chakra that Naruto and Sakura had didn't look, uhmm "Defined?" I don't know if that's the best word? They looked a bit blurry, and in the anime their chakra's are more definite and whispy in nature so if you touched up on that I'll shut my piehole about that xD!

All the fight's looked good, however, the little skirmish between Zoro, Luffy, Naruto, Sasuke and etc. (I think it was the first bit of action sequencing? They were moving up the hill?) It was over REALLY QUICK, I know you had to keep scenes at a certain length due to your awesome music/visual syncing, but all I saw was a flash of Luffy's hands, and some people laying down... Perhaps that was what you were going for?


In Conclusion:
Loved the intro, I've explained some of the iffy parts (Of which you had very few to begin with) and yea... I'll be watching this topic to see if you add anything new!!



Also I'm just a noob :3


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5/3/2012, 6:33 am
@N1nja wrote:
@Jemaster800 wrote:http://www.fileize.com/view/e017ca88-e93/

I really don't know if I'll continue this. I want to, but my ideas run slowly as hell. Tell me what you guys think, though.

@Jemaster800 wrote:

I really don't know if I'll continue this.

@Jemaster800 wrote:

I really don't know...

@Jemaster800 wrote:...don't know...


YOU BETTER FINISH THIS SHIT!!!! AND I WANT FOUR EPISODES!!!! AND A FULL LENGTH MOVIE!!!!



No but on a serious note, you definitely have an eye for musical to visual collaboration, I mean everything just meshed together into a brilliant piece of work.

More specifically the musical choice and sequencing in the beginning. Nice touch with choosing music we all should be fairly familiar with, and the way they cut at certain points in the music left me intrigued and wanting to see what scene would be shot next?

Now on to the character choice:
You were kind of helped out by the Jumpstars Roster, but you did a good job at selecting the characters with similar strengths and generally no OverPoweredness (I mean much could be said about Naruto's Ninetails Chakra, or Luffy's ability to just be badass), each hero has their strong points, and the fact that you chose characters we knew, we know their weak points as well. We'll just have to see how you exploit those if you choose to continue the workings.

Critique:
As I said before I loved the intro, it was brilliant loved the syncing and everything... HOWEVER, you produced something so epic and I felt a little hint of lackluster from your choice of font. I mean the intro is awesome, why not have the words be awesome as well? That being said I did find that the average font did compliment the spastic, and "exciting" flashes of black and white. So you can really go either way with that.

Uhh let's see, the effects were spectacular, nice usage, not overly spammed everywhere. I will say though that the chakra that Naruto and Sakura had didn't look, uhmm "Defined?" I don't know if that's the best word? They looked a bit blurry, and in the anime their chakra's are more definite and whispy in nature so if you touched up on that I'll shut my piehole about that xD!

All the fight's looked good, however, the little skirmish between Zoro, Luffy, Naruto, Sasuke and etc. (I think it was the first bit of action sequencing? They were moving up the hill?) It was over REALLY QUICK, I know you had to keep scenes at a certain length due to your awesome music/visual syncing, but all I saw was a flash of Luffy's hands, and some people laying down... Perhaps that was what you were going for?


In Conclusion:
Loved the intro, I've explained some of the iffy parts (Of which you had very few to begin with) and yea... I'll be watching this topic to see if you add anything new!!



Also I'm just a noob :3


Well, for the quick action sequence, that was only part of the introduction still. You know, before Lenalee appeared. And now I'm moving on to the actual action, which I hope will be also good. ._. But yeah, I'm still working on this.
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5/3/2012, 7:41 am
Don't quote all that to just post 5 small sentences, man.

But this is good.
Also the first thing that came to my mind when I read the title was Anime fight lol
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5/3/2012, 10:17 am
yea I thought it was gonna be some hand drawn anime with that title

but this is good too, luffy's pose looked weired to me thogh in the beginning.

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5/3/2012, 10:57 am
@Blackleafe wrote:Cool trailer bro but i didn't like the music. And when you said anime fight i was expeting custom ANIME not sprite animation.

and that's why he's on a spriting forum. to show us all his amazing anime skills on a spriting forum.

why. why are you so dumb sometimes?

anyways jem Y U ALWAYS GIVE UP ON AMAYZAH ANIAMTOINZ?!?! DISH IS SUPER AMAYZAAH

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5/3/2012, 11:07 am
I hate your choice of music. If you don't change it, I'll end up hating your animation, which would be bad because it clearly shows skill.

My main critique is that the intro is too long. It's not because it's longer than other intros, but because intros in general are too long, and no one seems to have noticed yet. I think it shows respect for the viewer to not make them sit through an introduction, to instead jump right into the action as quickly as possible, unless there's some kind of deep plot, in which case it's oftentimes better to start in medias res anyway.

Other things: I don't like when a sprite explosion covers the screen. It looks all ICKY and OMGPIXELS-IN-MY-FACE. If you want an explosion that covers the screen, I suggest drawing one yourself. Alternatively, have the explosion not cover the screen, but the movie quickly fades to white and everyone gets knocked skyways.

You might benefit from giving this movie a more descriptive title, perhaps something like, "Jump Superbrawl" which would let everyone know exactly what to expect, or something more creative like "Lenalee Battles EVERYONE".

Anyway, this is very good. Keep up the work.
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5/3/2012, 11:07 am
Yeah Jem... why ._.

Don't b like me man...

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5/3/2012, 12:05 pm
@Grognor wrote:I hate your choice of music. If you don't change it, I'll end up hating your animation, which would be bad because it clearly shows skill.

My main critique is that the intro is too long. It's not because it's longer than other intros, but because intros in general are too long, and no one seems to have noticed yet. I think it shows respect for the viewer to not make them sit through an introduction, to instead jump right into the action as quickly as possible, unless there's some kind of deep plot, in which case it's oftentimes better to start in medias res anyway.

Other things: I don't like when a sprite explosion covers the screen. It looks all ICKY and OMGPIXELS-IN-MY-FACE. If you want an explosion that covers the screen, I suggest drawing one yourself. Alternatively, have the explosion not cover the screen, but the movie quickly fades to white and everyone gets knocked skyways.

You might benefit from giving this movie a more descriptive title, perhaps something like, "Jump Superbrawl" which would let everyone know exactly what to expect, or something more creative like "Lenalee Battles EVERYONE".

Anyway, this is very good. Keep up the work.
(This advice might help you: "Never wait until you feel like doing something to do it.")

I fully agree. Also there is a little risk that you accidently put all cool moves to the intro instead of using then in battles. You might get up with 1 cool intro and borin animation.

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5/3/2012, 12:45 pm
@Blackleafe wrote:You might get up with 1 cool intro and borin animation.
That's what I'm afraid of ending up with. It's why I'm putting actual effort instead of just throwing sprites in there like some of my movies.

And thanks everyone else. Also, I know not everyone likes that kind of music Grognor, but to be honest, when I listened to that song, I started to imagine this animation. So you'll see why I chose this specific song.
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5/3/2012, 12:47 pm
I want to collab with this guy so badly.

Anyway ^-^"

I love that part with the trees. And what's the song called?


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5/3/2012, 1:38 pm
@NS01 wrote:I want to collab with this guy so badly.

Anyway ^-^"

I love that part with the trees. And what's the song called?


We should some day. :3
And thanks. It's called Bridges Burning by Foo Fighters.
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5/3/2012, 4:16 pm
If you guys prefer he can always be like me and make 1 animation every 3 monthes and some how improve a lot by the next time you make one. not saying i'm amazing but i improved a lot after not practicing lmao

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5/3/2012, 4:57 pm
>4/22/2012 6:14:28 PM Flutter Shy jesus ernandez (L)
>4/22/2012 6:14:35 PM jesus ernandez Flutter Shy I don't have any new shit.


Die painfully you dirty filthy whore

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5/3/2012, 5:15 pm
@Jellal wrote:>4/22/2012 6:14:28 PM Flutter Shy jesus ernandez (L)
>4/22/2012 6:14:35 PM jesus ernandez Flutter Shy I don't have any new shit.


Die painfully you dirty filthy whore
Dis' not new. I show u dis be4. No dyin plz xo.
But really, this isn't that new. It's been on Youtube for like a month. Or more, I don't know.
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5/3/2012, 5:21 pm
Oh snap. Really nice.

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5/3/2012, 6:15 pm
It was nice.

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5/3/2012, 6:18 pm
<3 is sexy

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5/3/2012, 7:50 pm
http://www.fileize.com/view/51ec63ee-2ea/ Yay or nay on the proggress?
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5/3/2012, 7:52 pm
@Jemaster800 wrote:http://www.fileize.com/view/51ec63ee-2ea/ Yay or nay on the proggress?
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5/3/2012, 9:36 pm
Yay.

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5/3/2012, 11:22 pm
It's dirty like your filthy lies your dirty whore

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5/4/2012, 5:41 am
@Jellal wrote:It's dirty like your filthy lies your dirty whore
Does that make it good, then? :C
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