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on 3/31/2012, 3:58 am
Hello spritas. I finally made my own art topic. I'll be posting stuff when i have time. You can leave requests but it's possible that i won't do them, but you can always try :I (Hint: If the request is about dbz,naruto,fairytail,bleach,beelzebub the more surely i'll make it) Here is my first picture. NATSU :3
I know the flames look more like magma but oh well.
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on 3/31/2012, 2:04 pm
you should make a color glow thingy on the arms for the orange thingy

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on 3/31/2012, 2:06 pm
Oh god??? Some1 actually found this topic? Lol thanks. I'll do that tommorow. It's time to go to sleep now.

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on 3/31/2012, 3:10 pm
Looks cool. His face looks a little weird though Razz

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on 3/31/2012, 3:20 pm
Yeah his face looks strange

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on 4/1/2012, 12:34 am
i know :S o tried tp fix it but idk what to do about it.

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on 4/2/2012, 2:51 pm
this is really good, i agree with NS and Revler the face needs more work and are you gonna leave it as it is or are you gonna put more details like the ankles. maybe same pants wrinkles like make it detailed like goku's pants you'll get what im saying if you dont then...idk

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on 4/2/2012, 3:54 pm
This is good but as others have said, the face is weird. Also you made a tangent on his hair making it look flat.

And umm, that fire doesn't look like fire at all. Speaking of fire, the shading is wrong since there's two lightsources around him, so the shadows should be in the middle instead of being on the right.
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on 4/3/2012, 7:18 am
mmm i agree but leo show me how to do fairytail fire on flash Razz

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on 4/3/2012, 10:30 am
Umm, draw a spiked flame and apply some filters to it?
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on 4/3/2012, 11:44 am
That's what i thought for a second but i tried to copy the fairy tails own flames.... And that's the result. Don't worry that's the last time i try to copy those flames : D

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on 4/5/2012, 1:09 pm
Hello guys. I was bored yesterday and i started this: Blackleafe's Drawings 5th picture. (Upd) Nimeta13
But it's a shitty doodle which i gave up today... well i put a bg so it wouldn't look so incomplite. I don't need any critic about it's flaws, coz it's A DOODLE and unfinished 1. Since i gave up with it i still thought you would like to waste few of your life seconds on checking this shit out.

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on 4/5/2012, 1:38 pm
@Blackleafe wrote:I don't need any critic about it's flaws, coz it's A DOODLE and unfinished 1.

Well boo hoo
Sometimes people ask for critique on tests which are just like doodles.
You should be open to critique on every single thing you post, whether it is a doodle, a single line or a goddamn masterpiece.
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on 4/5/2012, 3:40 pm
Dude, you still made this. Won't hurt to be criticized. I make small "songs" (demos) and wanna be critiqued so I know what to do better.

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on 4/6/2012, 12:29 am
Jees.. well fine then give critic if you want. I just don't want to hear "hey that's not finished, finish it" from some smart ass.

BDBstriker wrote:Dude, you still made this. Won't hurt to be criticized. I make small "songs" (demos) and wanna be critiqued so I know what to do better.

And i get your point, but when i wanna make "demos" it'll be different than just given up project.

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on 4/6/2012, 2:01 pm
This guy have a oddly punchable face. Am I the only one who has an urge to punch him in the face? I can't explain.......It's art I don't have to........yeah.......
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on 5/4/2012, 5:56 pm
I'm starting drawing manga on summer, and i have been practising drawing the characters. So here is the main character of Moonshard story: Rest of the main characters are coming as soon i as i get them rdy.
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on 5/4/2012, 6:06 pm
Looks nice man. I dont see any probs so far.
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on 5/5/2012, 12:59 am
nice job :)

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on 5/5/2012, 6:05 am
Ok Second character is ready.
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on 5/5/2012, 11:41 am
it would be cool if you animated them in flash
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on 5/5/2012, 11:47 am
@BlueShenron wrote:it would be cool if you animated them in flash

Yea maybe in future.


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on 5/6/2012, 11:22 am
Update!!! Yeye update. 3rd main character has been born.
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So from left to right there are Tsuki Aizawa, Kuroha Kinoshita and Amaya Yononaka.

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