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3/27/2012, 3:50 pm
lol it's the remake of the remake lol.

anyway guys i really listened to what you said and i started it again.
so now WE have a better script, this time we combined some ideas not from me only and from the other members, and this time we actually laughed from the script not like last time.
now it is not a random movie on the screen and it has a better built story and ideas.
i didn't mixed between vector and pixel also, for now there's no script and it's only a REALLY small intro and it's not finished yet.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/b4133f4ddfb727081278ea90218d86bd

tell me what to add/remove.

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3/27/2012, 3:53 pm
for the love of god. this is one million times better than what you had before. holy shit, it looks like effort actually went into this.

good job tal. the music was kind of weird, but that's all I can complain about.

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3/27/2012, 3:56 pm
lol i know it actually sounded a little gayish to me, i'm looking for some happy music, if you find anything good then tell me.

and thanks bro i hope i can just make it look good when the talking comes.

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3/27/2012, 5:01 pm
Hmm not bad Tal9x9
You're getting better. It seems like a cloud texture, really good.

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3/27/2012, 5:03 pm
Thanks guys!

it's really the first time i'm putting effort to something, yeah it's not funny it's kinda sad.

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3/28/2012, 12:58 am
Don't change the music. 8-bit music fits to that text. And yeh this is amazing update.

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3/28/2012, 2:29 am
also i just understood that it matches the animation like i like, well i'll just leave it, it's not like it's going to be played a lot.

btw i forgot to thank moke, he really inspired me to remake it and also how to make an animation look good.

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3/28/2012, 1:25 pm
As SXR said, a lot better. I saw some misalignements of sprites, and you should put a skip button, cuz I watched this 3 times and.... well you understood.

Please, keep it up.
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3/28/2012, 1:52 pm
CHIPTUNES

Only an intro but it looks good.
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3/28/2012, 2:20 pm
I have been addicted O.o what is this black sorcery ?????? GIMME LINK TO THAT MUSIC BEFORE I DO SOMETHING IRRESBONSIBLE!!!!!

@Leo i searched CHIPTUNES but i didn't found this : /

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3/28/2012, 2:32 pm
That's not the name of the song.
It's just that the song is a chiptune.
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3/28/2012, 2:33 pm
here's the link and i'm glad all of you like this:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/478137





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3/28/2012, 2:42 pm
Thanks. I don't know why i just get sudden urges to get songs i like.

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3/28/2012, 6:56 pm
Skip button, like now. Sexy progress, this looks like its gonna be nice.

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3/28/2012, 8:05 pm
the birdies caught my eye. they look like they should be flying forward in my opinion :I

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3/29/2012, 1:01 am
^ i thought about that but in real life you see them in this position....I DUNNO WHAT TO DO!

i finished the intro but there are many flaws i'll fix tonight cause then my new PC comes and i don't wanna back up every second.

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3/29/2012, 10:54 am
tal9x9 wrote:btw i forgot to thank moke, he really inspired me to remake it and also how to make an animation look good.

Wow, I'd never thought I'd be an inspiration for someone before. Thanks for the thanks! Wink

As for the movie itself, I agree with most everyone here in that it's a great improvement over your previous effort. The atmosphere and background is pretty, and I personally like your choice of music for this intro.

However, like Marioluigi said, some of the Toads are misaligned in the animation, making them seem a little shaky. One nitpicky thing I personally have with this is that the sunlight's color is different between the sky and Toad Town. I mean, you don't have to change that if you don't want to. The yellow light looks great on Toad Town. It's just that I prefer consistency if you know what I mean. Wink

Either way, it's looking pretty good so far! Can't wait to see more of this! ^_^
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3/29/2012, 2:37 pm
^ thanks dude!

i think you don't understand how amazing you are, and don't worry everyone i'm working on fixing more specific things and small flaws.

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