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3/24/2012, 12:57 pm
Yeah, I figured I wasn't gonna finish this ever so Imma just dump it here...

No need to CnC, I already basically know everything that is wrong with this, but if you feel you need to then go ahead.

SvsKCanceled

Oh, I forgot to add a preloader so whenever it ends the music will keep playing, my bad.
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3/24/2012, 1:06 pm
Soooo......much........ dialogue.
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3/24/2012, 1:11 pm
@XCFIRSTCLASS wrote:Soooo......much........ dialogue.

Yeah, I noticed that was probably one of the major problems...I wanted explain why they were fighting so I tried to give a little story but it ended up backfiring on me because I could not think of a more concise way to introduce the story. So script-writing is something I will definitely need to improve in...Any other flaws you notice?
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3/24/2012, 1:16 pm
I'm not worried about talking.... i'm worried about lack of bgm and sound effects. Also the video feels plank, i can't feel any power or speed in it.

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3/24/2012, 2:44 pm
What is the music! And i thought that was rather fun watching, you should've continued >:C

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3/24/2012, 3:04 pm
I liked it man, it was a good job. But I just noticed a few things:
The text: IMO I always add a glow or a textbox because it blends with the scenery.
I like how you do the fight, is like cinematic. However like Blackleafe said, it was kind of weak. I would tell that is because of the lack of V-Cam shaking, also using a hitspark helps.
And one last thing, is that you don't need to put that much blur, like the half of what you used. Just to give the fast effect. Hope this helps and keep it up.

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- xKAreloaded
- Leo (hopefully someday he'll accept)
- Dabestbrawler
- Exorz
- LightSpriter
- Leaf
- Eric
- SquirrelKidd
- NDS
- Patt (he doesn't animate anymore :'c)
- Pac-Boy (not even active)
- DestructionSeries (not even active)
- Mystah_Jayden (barely active)
- Face
- 5h0ck
- moke311
- Atomic
- Keezy

Everyone here, is considered (IMO), someone with great animation skills. So I want to battle them. Hopefully, it can happen someday.
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3/25/2012, 10:58 am
Hmm... Even if I wanted to finish this I really can't because I made this in Flash CS5.5 and I've reverted back to CS3...

But thanks about all the CnC and stuff, I was originally gonna quit sprite animations but I guess I will continue them for the time being.
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3/25/2012, 11:06 am
......I liked the music

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3/25/2012, 11:11 am
xRAPIDFIR3xPHO3NIXx wrote:Hmm... Even if I wanted to finish this I really can't because I made this in Flash CS5.5 and I've reverted back to CS3...

But thanks about all the CnC and stuff, I was originally gonna quit sprite animations but I guess I will continue them for the time being.
No problem man, also I never finish my stuff anyways lol

@Face wrote:......I liked the music
O_O Nothing else? XP

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Hitlist (not organized):
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- xKAreloaded
- Leo (hopefully someday he'll accept)
- Dabestbrawler
- Exorz
- LightSpriter
- Leaf
- Eric
- SquirrelKidd
- NDS
- Patt (he doesn't animate anymore :'c)
- Pac-Boy (not even active)
- DestructionSeries (not even active)
- Mystah_Jayden (barely active)
- Face
- 5h0ck
- moke311
- Atomic
- Keezy

Everyone here, is considered (IMO), someone with great animation skills. So I want to battle them. Hopefully, it can happen someday.
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3/25/2012, 11:17 am
not a big fan of sonic chars animations unless they are unique

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3/25/2012, 11:41 am
@Face wrote:not a big fan of sonic chars animations unless they are unique
Oh I see, but you're an awesome animator, you can give some CC. But is OK, I will make something that you would like with Sonic chars xD

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Hitlist (not organized):
Spoiler:

- xKAreloaded
- Leo (hopefully someday he'll accept)
- Dabestbrawler
- Exorz
- LightSpriter
- Leaf
- Eric
- SquirrelKidd
- NDS
- Patt (he doesn't animate anymore :'c)
- Pac-Boy (not even active)
- DestructionSeries (not even active)
- Mystah_Jayden (barely active)
- Face
- 5h0ck
- moke311
- Atomic
- Keezy

Everyone here, is considered (IMO), someone with great animation skills. So I want to battle them. Hopefully, it can happen someday.
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3/25/2012, 11:58 am
talkin bout da fight between me and you?
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3/25/2012, 12:04 pm
yoshifanatic2595 wrote:talkin bout da fight between me and you?
lolz how did yo--.. maybe..

Also:

xRAPIDFIR3xPHO3NIXx wrote:No need to CnC
Sorry xRAPIDFIR3xPHO3NiXx I didn't read that D:

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Hitlist (not organized):
Spoiler:

- xKAreloaded
- Leo (hopefully someday he'll accept)
- Dabestbrawler
- Exorz
- LightSpriter
- Leaf
- Eric
- SquirrelKidd
- NDS
- Patt (he doesn't animate anymore :'c)
- Pac-Boy (not even active)
- DestructionSeries (not even active)
- Mystah_Jayden (barely active)
- Face
- 5h0ck
- moke311
- Atomic
- Keezy

Everyone here, is considered (IMO), someone with great animation skills. So I want to battle them. Hopefully, it can happen someday.
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3/25/2012, 12:06 pm
@GEARichard wrote:
@Face wrote:not a big fan of sonic chars animations unless they are unique
Oh I see, but you're an awesome animator, you can give some CC. But is OK, I will make something that you would like with Sonic chars xD
if this was a w.i.p then I guess I would have given more but since its an unfinished.....

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3/25/2012, 12:19 pm
@Face wrote:if this was a w.i.p then I guess I would have given more but since its an unfinished.....
Yeah I know what do you mean, and since he didn't ask for it more. I feel dumb for that.

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Hitlist (not organized):
Spoiler:

- xKAreloaded
- Leo (hopefully someday he'll accept)
- Dabestbrawler
- Exorz
- LightSpriter
- Leaf
- Eric
- SquirrelKidd
- NDS
- Patt (he doesn't animate anymore :'c)
- Pac-Boy (not even active)
- DestructionSeries (not even active)
- Mystah_Jayden (barely active)
- Face
- 5h0ck
- moke311
- Atomic
- Keezy

Everyone here, is considered (IMO), someone with great animation skills. So I want to battle them. Hopefully, it can happen someday.
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3/25/2012, 12:30 pm
Hahaha it's alright. I think the next animation I make will be worthwhile and it's gonna make Face actually like sonic characters...well the ones in my animation, at least! >:)
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3/25/2012, 5:04 pm
xRAPIDFIR3xPHO3NIXx wrote:Hahaha it's alright. I think the next animation I make will be worthwhile and it's gonna make Face actually like sonic characters...well the ones in my animation, at least! >:)
that better be one hell of a vid

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