- metalmeatSpritan
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/3/2012, 12:20 pm
i got soo careless X3
sometimes i become a real artist and sometime i FAIL btw im not relly that good at bg sooo yeah
sometimes i become a real artist and sometime i FAIL btw im not relly that good at bg sooo yeah
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/3/2012, 10:11 pm
- LeoModerator
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/3/2012, 10:28 pm
omg
those eyes on the bottom row
oh my freaking god
those eyes on the bottom row
oh my freaking god
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/3/2012, 10:51 pm
huh?what?do you....like? :bounce: :bounce:
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/4/2012, 12:10 am
Umm no.
They kind of look freakish for me.
They kind of look freakish for me.
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/4/2012, 6:21 am
i wanna know what is soo wrong with them
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/4/2012, 10:05 am
They are scary.
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/4/2012, 10:37 am
scary?
what?
how is that possible?they were suppose to be cute :3
not scary
what?
how is that possible?they were suppose to be cute :3
not scary

Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/4/2012, 10:49 am
kinda failed at that. jesus those things are huge. freakishly huge.

ADOPT A CHAO!!
(figuratively speaking of course)
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/6/2012, 4:34 am
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/6/2012, 6:49 am
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/6/2012, 6:53 am
What's with the black mess on right side?

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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/6/2012, 7:18 am
its...like.....some sort of shadowy darkness side you know what i mean?
if not just forget about it its just a background
if not just forget about it its just a background
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/6/2012, 7:47 pm
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/6/2012, 9:39 pm
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/7/2012, 7:55 pm
- KnuxSpritan
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/7/2012, 7:57 pm
I like her hat.
It reminds me of a velociraptor.
But may I suggest something?
Your figures seem a bit off, try and draw them without the clothes first and then when your happy with it, draw the clothes over top. It seems to work for me.
This helps because sometimes we get confused with what is where when you just start off with clothes.
Oh wait, thats hair d:
Couldn't tell from the sketch XD
It reminds me of a velociraptor.
But may I suggest something?
Your figures seem a bit off, try and draw them without the clothes first and then when your happy with it, draw the clothes over top. It seems to work for me.
This helps because sometimes we get confused with what is where when you just start off with clothes.
Oh wait, thats hair d:
Couldn't tell from the sketch XD
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/7/2012, 8:02 pm
uuhhh could you tell what is like confusing in their body parts or clothing?
dont worry ill go with your advice
dont worry ill go with your advice
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/7/2012, 8:12 pm
Well what I mean is sometimes when we start out with clothes, we forget to draw all of the curves that should be there. Like in the second picture, her hips are a little small for a grown women (I'm assuming shes an adult because of the breasts).
Like take this for example.
Hope I helped ;D
Like take this for example.
- Spoiler:
Hope I helped ;D
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/7/2012, 8:45 pm
Thank you very much knux your advice is so useful :)
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/7/2012, 9:03 pm
No problem man.@metalmeat wrote:Thank you very much knux your advice is so useful :)
As long as you learn from it, and apply it, I'm happy [:
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/8/2012, 9:27 am
ugh
Knux beat me to it
you little
Hey metalmeat. If you need any help with the construction of the body, feel free to ask and I can make some stuff for ya (even though i am terrible LOL)
Knux beat me to it
you little
Hey metalmeat. If you need any help with the construction of the body, feel free to ask and I can make some stuff for ya (even though i am terrible LOL)
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/8/2012, 11:09 am
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/8/2012, 11:59 am
I think your art is lacking some flow, man.
It looks good, but the body parts look like they are from a snowman.

So make your curves in the body parts a bit more offset from each other. That doesn't mean chaotic curves all over the place, just give 'em some flow, if you get what I mean.
Use some straights vs curves as well. Don't make everything curved or everything straight (unless it's a deliberate stylistic choice but it has to look very damn good). Make a balance with the two.

Sorry for my poor drawing skills.
And of course, all this stuff I'm talking about can be ignored, since we're all some rebel kids and like to break rules.
It looks good, but the body parts look like they are from a snowman.

So make your curves in the body parts a bit more offset from each other. That doesn't mean chaotic curves all over the place, just give 'em some flow, if you get what I mean.
Use some straights vs curves as well. Don't make everything curved or everything straight (unless it's a deliberate stylistic choice but it has to look very damn good). Make a balance with the two.

Sorry for my poor drawing skills.
And of course, all this stuff I'm talking about can be ignored, since we're all some rebel kids and like to break rules.
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Re: Metalmeat's Cruel Art
4/8/2012, 12:16 pm
hmmmm i'll try with your advice thanks anyways leo 

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