Metalmeat's Cruel Art

i got soo careless X3
sometimes i become a real artist and sometime i FAIL btw im not relly that good at bg sooo yeah

please dont tell me why arent these females inked and colour im planning on using them i just want to know what do you think?

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omg
those eyes on the bottom row
oh my freaking god

huh?what?do you....like? :bounce: :bounce:

Umm no.
They kind of look freakish for me.

i wanna know what is soo wrong with them

They are scary.

scary?
what?
how is that possible?they were suppose to be cute :3
not scary

kinda failed at that. jesus those things are huge. freakishly huge.

okay then i'll fix their eyes but not now here is emily looking animeish

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but im not done with her yet soo dont

DONE with her

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What's with the black mess on right side?

its...like.....some sort of shadowy darkness side you know what i mean?
if not just forget about it its just a background

please forget about emily's bg just look at her okay
aaanyways here is a new finished art of a girl named amy if you wanna know look at the "scary eyed girls" yes thats her the one on the top right the sleepy one

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im gonna make emily a chibi :3
but im still not finished

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soooooo am i gonna be posting like this i know someone will post about me replying 4 times :evil:

I like her hat.
It reminds me of a velociraptor.
But may I suggest something?
Your figures seem a bit off, try and draw them without the clothes first and then when your happy with it, draw the clothes over top. It seems to work for me.
This helps because sometimes we get confused with what is where when you just start off with clothes.

Oh wait, thats hair d:
Couldn't tell from the sketch XD

uuhhh could you tell what is like confusing in their body parts or clothing?
dont worry ill go with your advice

Well what I mean is sometimes when we start out with clothes, we forget to draw all of the curves that should be there. Like in the second picture, her hips are a little small for a grown women (I'm assuming shes an adult because of the breasts).
Like take this for example.

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First I drew this girl without any clothes so that I could get a good hold on the figure. Once I had it down to where I like it, I made a layer over and drew the clothes. If you lined those up you would see the same figure, just with clothes.
Hope I helped ;D

Thank you very much knux your advice is so useful :)

@metalmeat wrote:Thank you very much knux your advice is so useful :)

No problem man.
As long as you learn from it, and apply it, I'm happy [:

ugh
Knux beat me to it
you little

Hey metalmeat. If you need any help with the construction of the body, feel free to ask and I can make some stuff for ya (even though i am terrible LOL)

k thanks leo i'll see if there is anything i need to know.....you know what i made a guy named mecha claw if you could tell me if the look is okay(i mean the body parts):)

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I think your art is lacking some flow, man.
It looks good, but the body parts look like they are from a snowman.

So make your curves in the body parts a bit more offset from each other. That doesn't mean chaotic curves all over the place, just give 'em some flow, if you get what I mean.


Use some straights vs curves as well. Don't make everything curved or everything straight (unless it's a deliberate stylistic choice but it has to look very damn good). Make a balance with the two.

Sorry for my poor drawing skills.

And of course, all this stuff I'm talking about can be ignored, since we're all some rebel kids and like to break rules.

hmmmm i'll try with your advice thanks anyways leo