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4/12/2012, 8:51 am
Definitely some improvement.
I think the neck might be a bit too long and thin. The collar bone looks pretty crazy too lol Tone that down a bit.
But all in all it looks pretty good ;D
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4/12/2012, 8:53 am
Thanksh yoush vewy mush
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4/12/2012, 12:13 pm
Yeah it looks good.
Work on what Knux told ya. But it's good.

THEY GROW UP SO FAST :']
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4/12/2012, 5:53 pm
I like it.
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4/12/2012, 8:56 pm
thank you
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4/12/2012, 10:10 pm
I'm working on a new drawing here it is nothing but a sketch

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4/13/2012, 12:47 am
oh boy. That one has some problems :T
A lot of your proportions are off. All 3 character's heads are shaped pretty oddly...
The guy on the left is... really big. I think out of all of the his body is drawn the best though. The girl in the middles is pretty off too. her breasts are real wonky lookin, and her hips and waist don't flow together as they should. There shouldn't be just one dramatic curve down at her hips with her waist being straight. It needs to flow better. Her left ar also looks bent awkwardly. And the one on the right's breasts look better then the ones before, but they still aren't perfect. Her waist is too long so it throws off the rest of the body. A good rule of thumb is that the legs are half the size of the whole body, so try that. Her foot is bent in a way that isn't possible without injuring yourself too...
It looks like you rushed through this one. I understand that its a sketch, but you still need to make sure your getting the figures down. If you don't, the drawing won't look very good.
Just remember what we've taught you. Use references, take your time, etc.
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4/13/2012, 1:08 am
i didnt get what you were trying to say about the left girls arm but take a look...


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4/13/2012, 10:18 pm
forget about the last drawing i wont finish it but here is a new finished one

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4/14/2012, 12:24 am
Where is her other leg?
Also, her arms are way too long
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4/14/2012, 12:39 am
._. i so dont know what i do when im drawing knux could you give me tip of what to do when im drawing

btw she is like skipping so you cant see the other leg
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4/14/2012, 1:10 am
What to do when your drawing? wut.
uhmm.. if you mean how to tell if your proportions are right and all I have some tips for you.
If your arms are flat against your side your hand reaches down just below your waist.
Legs are generally about half the size of your body, or at least that is what looks the best.
For whatever drawing program your using, mirror your drawing. This will help you to see flaws in the proportions. If it looks normal flipped, it looks normal regularly too. You see, when you draw, you don't catch all of the imperfections because you've been staring at it so long. But when you flip it, its like seeing it for the first time again. So its much easier to tell.
Men have blockyer figures, women have a curvyer figure.
Women are shaped like hourglasses. (for the most part)
Start your sketches with basic lines and circles. Lines for limbs, circles for joints. Draw around those.
Pretty much all I can think of for now. Hope thats what you meant.
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4/14/2012, 1:38 am
thanks yes its what i meant :)
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4/14/2012, 7:26 am
alright i made another drawing of the last girl and im thinking its perfect but still want to make sure if there are no mistakes

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4/14/2012, 1:52 pm
Reminds me of this.
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But your arms need work. The fore arms are too long and theres too much curvature. Look at your own arm. Does it look that way? Also the fingers look a bit off too. The joints are messed up a lil
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4/14/2012, 7:30 pm
lol,good thing didn't finish it maybe i'll check for crossed arms image again to make sure
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4/14/2012, 7:53 pm
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is thish okayish
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4/14/2012, 9:40 pm
well your on the right track.
but the hands still look kinda awkward.. they look too... manly...? Not sure how to describe it, but something is going on there.
and the arms are still really puffy. Remember what I said, look at your own arm for awhile and try to replicate it.
And before I never mentioned the head, but its pretty off too. The chin is too pointy and the head overall, doesn't have much form to it. It looks like she has no cheeks. The hat is kinda awkward too.
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4/14/2012, 9:58 pm
knux i want you to tell me whats wrong with the hat i dont see what the problem is
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4/15/2012, 12:22 am
@metalmeat wrote:knux i want you to tell me whats wrong with the hat i dont see what the problem is
Well basically, I think its just too small at the bottom. I think it would look better if it was like, a huge thing just barely resting on her head, rather then being really tight, if you know what I mean. Kinda like this.
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Best example I could fine LOL.
But you see how the helmet is really big towards the bottom? How its not all tight around his head?
Ok, well I don't know whether its a helmet or a hat, which is also a problem. At a first glance I should be able to tell which is which. If it is a hat, it should look a bit like this
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Or something like that.
You see how its clearly a hat?
Study those pictures, and then redraw it.

Btw, another tip. You don't have to upload everything you draw. Do some sketches, practice a little. Trust me, if you do this, you'll thank yourself in the long run.
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4/15/2012, 5:53 am
Actually, doodle every chance you get.

You guys can see that I upload a lot of doodles (those who follow my tumblr know) but those aren't even all of them, I draw everytime, I'm always ready to open up any program and draw.
It seems meaningless at first but ideas may come out of those sketches.

Plus it's good to sit and learn something on your own then come back asking for feedback on your studies (like I do regularly when I'm struggling trying to learn anatomy) than posting everything as you do it. I don't really know why but it is.

i just also noticied that we have girls we have drawn as our avatars
lmfao
why i am laughing
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4/15/2012, 6:54 am
seriously i've noticed that i've been drawing girls the whole time and not even a chibi man
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4/15/2012, 9:40 am
Well it's not a bad thing to draw girls all the time. I know I always draw a girl, even if it's a little doodle of one.

But if you ONLY draw girls then it's bad. You have to branch out. Kids, men, everything is fair game. Even if just doodles and such.
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4/15/2012, 10:45 am
i drew dis monsta lookin rock detailed im noght gud wid details Sad DAMN!!!

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4/16/2012, 9:25 am
this is what i did ._.


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