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3/16/2012, 6:02 pm
http://www.truploader.com/view/205177
i had abunch of requests on da that i needed to do so i combined them. i wouldn't have uploaded it yet if it weren't for the fact that i needed some critique on it. i'm trying out a way of animating that's different than what i'm usually doing, and i'm using it for my battle Razz i've worked on this all day and it's still nowhere near done -_- actually it kinda is close, yet not. anyway i'm gonna add the effects and camera shakes later on. cnc please :3

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i tinted the reflections, but now that i look at it it still looks kinda like it's alpha'd. does it, or does it not? fail bowing and leapfrog ftw!!
http://www.truploader.com/view/130560


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3/16/2012, 7:31 pm
nice reflection and those kirby are goods
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3/16/2012, 7:53 pm
Nice Reflection

also i would kinda fix some entracnces when the characters float in

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3/16/2012, 8:12 pm
nice job on the reflection and animation Razz, i want my own kirbeh nao :c... but keep it up bro :)

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3/16/2012, 8:47 pm
@inmortalkid wrote:nice reflection and those kirby are goods
gratzi man. there was barely anything on the black one and the dark green one though.
@Luigiman364 wrote:Nice Reflection

also i would kinda fix some entracnces when the characters float in
for the first floating entrance he uses wind so imma put that effect in later on, and the green one i'm trying to find some way to make light work for him to come in. when he goes it he's just flat out flying. and thank bro!
@Ray*~*Ler wrote:nice job on the reflection and animation Razz, i want my own kirbeh nao :c... but keep it up bro :)
thank you. and do eeet! just make him like, extremely original so there won't be any haters.
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3/16/2012, 9:10 pm
Not bad, that dual wielding sword kirby caught my eye :) In any case just like Luigiman said take your time and try to fix their entrances. It looks pretty good tho...makes me wanna use Kirbacus now lol
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3/16/2012, 9:26 pm
thanks man. his sheet doesn't have alot of double swords but it's still good. dude i would love to use kirbacus after awhile if that's fine with you Very Happy even if i can't though you need to pull him out.

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3/16/2012, 11:25 pm
LeafKirby wrote:thanks man. his sheet doesn't have alot of double swords but it's still good. dude i would love to use kirbacus after awhile if that's fine with you Very Happy even if i can't though you need to pull him out.
Ahaha to be honest I completely forgot about him after I made him :lol: but yeah if you want the sheet I don't really mind. Want me to pm it to you? And yeah, I like sword characters if you couldn't tell lol I wouldn't mind using that guy in a fight with kirbacus Very Happy well, that's entirely up to you of course :)
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3/17/2012, 7:26 am
lol wow. but yeah, pm him to me and i'll see what i can do

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3/17/2012, 7:57 am
Looking great! It's fluid and nice to watch, and as far as character animation goes, it's good!

Like everyone else said, nice reflections! I want to say though, since you're using a white floor, why not try tinting the reflections white rather than alpha them? It'll make for a bit of a better looking reflection.

Can't wait to see more! =)
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3/17/2012, 9:09 am
tinting.......... holy crap that looked alot better! thanks man! Very Happy

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3/17/2012, 9:16 am
damn bro you just gave me a Idea for a char a kirby swordsmen........

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3/17/2012, 10:18 am
Thank BioMetalNeo on da. It's his guy Razz

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3/18/2012, 3:48 am
LeafKirby wrote:tinting.......... holy crap that looked alot better! thanks man! Very Happy

No problem! ^_^

And there you go, that does looks much better! No, I don't think it looks alpha'd (At least I don't see through the character's reflections anymore).

That last bit was pretty funny xD
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3/18/2012, 5:39 pm
As I recall when I ever I viewed your animations you seem to have the most unique music
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3/18/2012, 10:26 pm
@moke311 wrote:That last bit was pretty funny xD
ha, thanks : D
@SX8Leon wrote:As I recall when I ever I viewed your animations you seem to have the most unique music
thanks leon! i think it's just cause i'm too lazy to look for a different kind of song by someone other than the guy i usually use.
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3/19/2012, 12:16 am
Yo homes, dat was some bumpin shit bro - wtf am i saying

You good sir, have created an astounding piece of animated images - much better Very Happy

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