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2/17/2012, 4:46 pm
i wanted to get critique here too.
i'll upload random pictures that i draw in class out of boredom and pics that i do on the computer.

picture number one: yeah, i know yall are sick of them, and i kinda am too so this is the last kirby pic i'm gonna draw. i wanted a tablet, but my dad said that i probably won't get one for another few weeks, so i drew this with the line/oval/rectangle tool in flash 8. there's slight shading, but i got tired of that and used gradients :/
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Picture number two: I said that the next pic i drew wouldn't be kirby and it wasn't. i just never uploaded it >.> here's what i put up on dA. oh and i don't know what happened, but here, the background got f'd up. everywhere else there isn't a bg.
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Picture number three: A pikachu from the cover of the pokemon yellow cartridge! I had to draw the outline of the kid for an art class on Still-Framed. Still getting used to my tablet I guess...
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Picture number four: My Kirby FC Lilly's revamp
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2/17/2012, 4:56 pm
Gradients give no form to things so you lose points from that. It's a starting point but you have to define them further.

As for the pose.
I'd add more negative space between his arms and his body.
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2/17/2012, 5:50 pm
it looks pretty fast, dnt put ur art wrk in a spoiler Very Happy

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2/17/2012, 6:28 pm
Yeah, it's small so don't worry.

For bigger pictures you may want to spoiler them, though.
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2/17/2012, 6:51 pm
@Leo wrote:Gradients give no form to things so you lose points from that. It's a starting point but you have to define them further.
define the gradients on the hat, hair, and headphones or the cubes? i can't think of a way for the first three, but i think i got something for the cubes.
@ANIME SPRITER7.4 wrote:it looks pretty fast
what? i don't get that.
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2/17/2012, 6:55 pm
lets just say it looks cool, decent, nice, awesome dude get on with my speed i'm trying to use new vocabs for does over there<

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2/18/2012, 8:20 pm
On everything.

You never should make it seem like a gradient. It should seem like true shadows.
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2/21/2012, 8:19 pm
what happen Leaf no more art wrk, dnt let ur thread die dude lets see what u got

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2/21/2012, 8:34 pm
It's only been a couple of days... plus I have schoolwork to do that keeps me from drawing...

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2/21/2012, 8:36 pm
i kno its been a couple of days, well anyways arnt u in vacation

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2/21/2012, 8:40 pm
I still have a month until vacation.

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7/23/2012, 1:31 pm
updated the first post even though this technically did die when i said it wouldn't >.>

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4/1/2013, 12:29 am
triple post ftw. I did a horrible job with keeping this thread active .-. anyway, this is the first drawing i've done with my tablet that looks presentable:
http://squeakyleaf5.deviantart.com/art/Bob-362818832

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4/1/2013, 12:39 am
Does it really take you three posts to realize no one cares

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4/1/2013, 12:58 am
^ No, no, it's just you that doesn't care that much.

Btw leaf, you can do better than that D:

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4/1/2013, 7:06 pm
Sieghart wrote:Does it really take you three posts to realize no one cares
you care, otherwise you wouldn't be over here.
@Ping wrote:^ No, no, it's just you that doesn't care that much.

Btw leaf, you can do better than that D:
I know (._.) my excuse is that I was on a bus when I drew it.

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4/1/2013, 10:44 pm
Nigga! We ain't got time for drawing on buses!

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4/1/2013, 10:56 pm
The shading in the drawing reminds me of pillow shading...
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4/2/2013, 12:08 am
it's not. pillow shading is when you draw shadows following the contour without taking form or lighing in consideration.

oh, the colors sort of hurt my eyes (DANG that blue is too saturated)
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4/2/2013, 12:14 am
I would never pillow shade.

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4/4/2013, 10:36 pm
Wow leaf, I never knew you sucked this bad.

Try harder please.

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4/4/2013, 10:41 pm
he doesn't really suck.
he just needs to work on his stuff. saying he sucks is not helpful at all.
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4/4/2013, 11:01 pm
omg we're joking calm down leo

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4/4/2013, 11:17 pm
i'm not angry at all.
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4/5/2013, 2:47 pm
I'm so pissed, Joey, get out.

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