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on 11/23/2011, 3:37 am


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on 11/23/2011, 9:45 am
You're improving - I see you took what I said and got better.

I'll let other people review these, but the values on your drawings seem off, especially in the last one where they are all over the place.
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on 11/23/2011, 10:14 am
thanks leo
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on 11/23/2011, 10:22 am
For those who don't know, here's an article about values.


Just a heads up.
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on 11/23/2011, 11:06 am
The first one looks nice, don't really see anything wrong except that it looks like her arm just disappeared. I know its behind her back but still :\ And she's gonna get raped D:
The second one looks cool, i especially like his left....fin....thing
The last one does look kinda weird. It looks like his right limb doesn't even attack to his body, its like it just clips on like an action figure or something, probably just the angle though. His left body hair thing looks funky too, compared to the right side.

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on 11/23/2011, 11:30 am
thanks granadico
but about the girl i wouldnt even touch her if i were anyone who gets perverted and you know why lol
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on 11/23/2011, 5:05 pm
Well that is a big improvement.

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on 11/23/2011, 8:31 pm
thank you very much Very Happy
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on 11/27/2011, 7:22 am
i drew more stuff for everyone to know
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on 11/27/2011, 7:50 am
Well where are your new drawings.
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on 11/27/2011, 9:58 am
did you open the spoiler?
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on 11/27/2011, 10:02 am
But he just gave comment for those? (2nd comment in this topic) He opened and watched spoiler but you said: "i drew more stuff for everyone to know" and those are what Leo is looking for. Not these lol

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on 11/27/2011, 10:04 am
Ooops, my bad lol

Well you are definitely improving man. Your artwork is getting more and more solid.
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on 11/27/2011, 10:21 am
What do you mean by solid
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on 11/27/2011, 10:23 am
Like as in, they are very solid looking, seem to have volume, form.

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This was one of my big issues with your work. Now you are getting better at that.
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on 11/27/2011, 10:25 am
oh ok thanks :)
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on 11/27/2011, 3:13 pm
Nice improvement. ^^

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on 11/27/2011, 7:28 pm
Have you tried using the smudging tool? It'll create a more realistic shade.

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on 11/27/2011, 8:39 pm
no but the most tool that i use is the brush tool
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on 12/1/2011, 4:07 am
i took timmys words using the smudge tool and it works fine Very Happy,anyways two new art drawings
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on 12/1/2011, 9:36 pm
Dope.

The smudge tool is nice but can be hard to use to make good shading.

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on 12/1/2011, 9:59 pm
uhh i don't see anything hard from the smudge tool
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on 12/1/2011, 10:04 pm
Well just smudging it is not correct coloring and smoothing, you need to use it effectively to reflect light and what not correctly.

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on 12/1/2011, 10:59 pm
Amazing. Now your art doesn't look like shit anymore. You now make vicious looking monsters.

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on 12/1/2011, 11:15 pm
thank you very much Very Happy
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