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What should I add for Desti?

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6/12/2011, 8:29 pm
After my two weeks of holiday, I'm all back to school. Anyway, I need some advice, feedbacks or suggestions on my Desti sprite sheet so that I could make it better or fix just in case. I don't mind the criticizm, they have reasons after all.

Link:http://yukimazan.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3dsd9u

I also plan to change Desti's look by adding something to him, but that will have to wait.

So.........what should I do to make it better or more? Serious

Art: (I can quite a nice guy sometimes.) http://yukimazan.deviantart.com/favourites/#/d3i3bqk

Vid (I credit LK for this.):


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6/12/2011, 8:37 pm
Hey, that`s some very great sheet
Good work Yukimazan

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6/12/2011, 8:49 pm
@GEARichard wrote:Hey, that`s some very great sheet
Good work Yukimazan

Thanks dude. :) There are still sprites I haven't finish though but I appreciate your compliment.

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6/12/2011, 8:51 pm
@Yukimazan wrote:
Thanks dude. :) There are still sprites I haven't finish though but I appreciate your compliment.

I know it`s a Work In Progress
But is it going really well
I hope I sprite half as good as you do

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6/12/2011, 8:55 pm
Awesome what's it's name
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6/12/2011, 9:36 pm
You're BACK to school? O_o

and all i see is just a simple recolor

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6/12/2011, 9:55 pm
I agree, this is just a recolor with other effects and shit.
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6/12/2011, 10:45 pm
@GEARichard wrote:Hey, that`s some very great sheet
Good work Yukimazan

THAT'S WHAT YOU SAY TO A RECOLOR?! I AM DISAPPOINT. A person with a recolored sonic fan character comes here and says "Judge it" and you all would kick his ass back to the internet.
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6/12/2011, 11:36 pm
^^^^^^
But i likes desti, he's kurbi's best fwend next to samuel and xenoroxas D:

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6/12/2011, 11:51 pm
Recolor add some Misc like a hat or a hair

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6/12/2011, 11:54 pm
simple recolor, no art or demo, closed in 3 day, better hurry
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6/13/2011, 8:56 am
@darkdragon581 wrote:simple recolor, no art or demo, closed in 3 day, better hurry
xD idk why this made me crack up

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6/13/2011, 6:22 pm
GEARrichard: Well, practice makes perfect. :)

@SX8Leon wrote:Awesome what's it's name
His name is Desti. Able to use wormholes and teleport.

@Granadico wrote:You're BACK to school? O_o

and all i see is just a simple recolor
I live in Malaysia so my holidays kinda different. XD And yeah I know.

@Luigiman364 wrote:Recolor add some Misc like a hat or a hair
I thought of giving him something "mechanical" but I might need a little tutorial for hair spriting.

darkragon581: Very well then.

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6/13/2011, 9:05 pm
Okay well since I don't wanna have a plain simple Kirby OC, I'm gonna need your opinions when I post Desti's added look. Might be various, but I'll say a few of it.

Desti attatched with a laser cannon on his back. (Like the one on the robot in my avatar)

Desti with a Laser Kirby goggle.

Desti with robotic wings.

I'll post the sprite pics soon when I have time.

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6/13/2011, 9:36 pm
gah! i hate that vid! i have no suggestions Sad at the very least post the nonlaggy newgrounds one.
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6/14/2011, 10:23 pm
LeafKirby wrote:gah! i hate that vid! i have no suggestions Sad at the very least post the nonlaggy newgrounds one.

Youtube should be blamed if you ask me. :silent:

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6/15/2011, 7:08 am
I say Desti should have some type of marking on his face or robo gloves

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6/15/2011, 10:01 am
@D3Anims wrote:But i likes desti, he's kurbi's best fwend

WRONG SIR! he's leaf's best friend.

yuki- what happened to the teleporting bracelets that he was going to have?
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6/15/2011, 12:38 pm
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@D3Anims wrote:But i likes desti, he's kurbi's best fwend

WRONG SIR! he's leaf's best friend.
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6/15/2011, 1:46 pm
no fair! i don't have a drawing for that -~-

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6/15/2011, 3:31 pm
MUHAHAHA VICTORY S MINES

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6/15/2011, 6:00 pm
@D3Anims wrote:I say Desti should have some type of marking on his face or robo gloves

Robo gloves sounds fitting for Desti but I don't think there are much sprites for him. A mark might be good though.

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@D3Anims wrote:But i likes desti, he's kurbi's best fwend

WRONG SIR! he's leaf's best friend.

yuki- what happened to the teleporting bracelets that he was going to have?

The bracelets I tried to sprite for him doesn't seem to be good so I thought of throwing the plan out. At least the mark D3Anims said would replace it.

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@D3Anims wrote:But i likes desti, he's kurbi's best fwend

WRONG SIR! he's leaf's best friend.
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6/15/2011, 6:58 pm
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Ok so I got the wings with the mark as D3amins suggested. Tell me, which one is better?

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6/15/2011, 10:19 pm
I think the third, the second just looks like horns or something, and the first looks too bold

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6/15/2011, 11:21 pm
@Yukimazan wrote:Judge my sprite sheet R_wing10

Ok so I got the wings with the mark as D3amins suggested. Tell me, which one is better?

@Granadico wrote:I think the third, the second just looks like horns or something, and the first looks too bold

Yea the wings would be more original than a mark. But what you can/should do is keep the desti sheet the way it is and have the wings flickering as if those 3 sprites were a sequence and in flash just add the wings while you animate in a separate layer, kinda like how i think samuel and his vision rock is animated

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