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4/10/2011, 3:01 am
I'm seriously considering actually putting in a lot of work on this one :)

wha do you guys think?

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Tell Me which one you like the most and why if possible Very Happy







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4/10/2011, 5:26 am
The outline seems a bit cluttered up. Try cleaning it, and leaving it one pixel long.

You also should consider adding a face to your characters D:
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4/10/2011, 7:41 am
From what I can see, it's like Itatchi from Naruto holding somewhat a sword or a gun-sword. LOL

Oh and a little warning that no media evidence of this guy in 2 days and it'll be lockdown for this thread. (Unless the moderators say this one is ok.)

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4/10/2011, 7:46 am
This is custom, maaan.

Custom stuff don't get the same treatment.
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4/10/2011, 2:18 pm
leocartoon1 wrote:The outline seems a bit cluttered up. Try cleaning it, and leaving it one pixel long.

You also should consider adding a face to your characters D:
yeah, I see what you mean. I'm outa practice Razz

and I want to add a face but, idk...eveytime I try, it doesn't come out like I want it to :'(
@Yukimazan wrote:From what I can see, it's like Itatchi from Naruto holding somewhat a sword or a gun-sword. LOL

Oh and a little warning that no media evidence of this guy in 2 days and it'll be lockdown for this thread. (Unless the moderators say this one is ok.)
lol wow. It's actually a gun-lance, but it does look too much like a sword, I'm gonna have to change that up
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4/10/2011, 2:22 pm
What style are you putting into this one? Retro? Classic? 8-bit?


And, it looks...unique-ly abstract.

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4/10/2011, 2:28 pm
Pingboy wrote:What style are you putting into this one? Retro? Classic? 8-bit?


And, it looks...unique-ly abstract.
1. Hmm, I'm not sure yet...def not 8-bit lol, maybe classic??

2.What exactly do you mean? Is that a good thing or a bad thing. Do you mean you feel like he's not there lol
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4/10/2011, 2:37 pm
reminds me of nameless (king of fighters)
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4/10/2011, 2:37 pm
his hand on the sword looks big.
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4/10/2011, 2:41 pm
@darkdragon581 wrote:reminds me of nameless (king of fighters)
hmm...he kinda does look like him, but only the hair. Good thing you showed me though, I was about to give him a cape Razz
narutoall76 wrote:his hand on the sword looks big.
How? You can't even see his hand because tho weapon is blocking it
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4/10/2011, 2:42 pm
oh,the color looks like a skin color.on the top anyway.
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4/10/2011, 2:45 pm
narutoall76 wrote:oh,the color looks like a skin color.on the top anyway.
oh lol, nah thats part of the hilt of his weapon
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4/10/2011, 5:36 pm
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Pingboy wrote:What style are you putting into this one? Retro? Classic? 8-bit?


And, it looks...unique-ly abstract.
1. Hmm, I'm not sure yet...def not 8-bit lol, maybe classic??

2.What exactly do you mean? Is that a good thing or a bad thing. Do you mean you feel like he's not there lol
1. Looks quite classic.

2. Do I feel like he's not there?

nigga i aint blind. I do like the shading though. How does it a 3rd palette for his pants looks on him? Like, a 2nd shading?

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4/11/2011, 6:28 pm
Ok guys, update time

Tell Me which one you like the most and why if possible Very Happy

oh and I know he has no face but, thats only for now
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4/11/2011, 6:31 pm
stilll uh....still uh waitin' on the eyes

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4/11/2011, 6:33 pm
@Luigiman364 wrote:stilll uh....still uh waitin' on the eyes
yeah thats helpful :roll:
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4/11/2011, 6:39 pm
I think the right one looks more "designable" than the old and left one. And I like it too/

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4/11/2011, 8:23 pm
I too like the one on the right. the cap looks cool. also the scarf on da old/one on da right blocking his mouth just doesn't feel like it belongs there.
however I like the color cheme of the original more.

oh and heres a suggestion fo da face....u can remove that sliver of hair blocking his face....draw the face till satisfied....then put the hair to see if it will still look good.

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4/12/2011, 4:04 am
I have to agree with everyone. The one on the right is better. I like it mostly because its softer, the color scheme of it is softer, it doesn't hurt my eyes. It also feels more complete.

But, whatever you do, use the versions with colored lines. I don't know why, but I like your work more when you use those colored lines. Its like if there was anti-aliasing, but there isn't.
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4/18/2011, 11:16 am
As well as everyone else has said, I like the version furthest to the right. This is a lot more blending, and doesn't seem unnatural due to the outlining. You should show him with a background behind him. :3
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