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on 3/5/2011, 11:58 am
Well I wanted to make a ninja vid to see if I could but half way through I ran out of ideas and more importantly just didn't like how it came out. critique to your hearts desire I thank you for all input but I don't think you could tell me anything I don't see and already know.the chars has no name.until I look up the Japanese name for "dog" (EDITED AGAIN) his name is "kuroi inu"(black dog) that what he's called and treated like.(back story if asked)

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(EDITED) oh and thanks to xKAreloadedx for the music,to me its the best part of the whole vid LOL


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on 3/5/2011, 12:35 pm
BLACK SASUKE : O
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I was enjoying that >:[

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on 3/5/2011, 12:42 pm
i enjoyed that too much.
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on 3/5/2011, 12:58 pm
Continue THIS nao!

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on 3/5/2011, 2:14 pm
some parts looked too jpg for my taste, and some parts looked way too unfiting (most of the effects), you were trying too hard to be cinematic and your animation was hurt by it
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on 3/5/2011, 3:52 pm
yea If you really look at it you can see exactly where I got bored

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on 3/5/2011, 4:39 pm
@darkdragon581 wrote:some parts looked too jpg for my taste, and some parts looked way too unfiting (most of the effects), you were trying too hard to be cinematic and your animation was hurt by it
Yeah, I believe that DD was 100% correct right here. You could have done a lot better if you just had fun with it, I saw a lot of improvement. Proud of you good sir. ^^

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on 3/5/2011, 6:17 pm
not agian all I see is a black screen =(

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on 3/5/2011, 6:29 pm
I feel like I gonna make a dedication to stryder hyru
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on 3/5/2011, 7:00 pm
I actually enjoyed this alot. There were some things I wanted to point out, but DD already covered it pretty much. This is a huge improvement, nice job dude......lol....black Sasuke......
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on 3/5/2011, 7:14 pm
I'll critique this tonight.

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@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
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on 3/5/2011, 9:20 pm
Pingboy wrote:I'll critique this tonight.
you've seen this long ago

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on 3/5/2011, 10:58 pm
uhmm...thx for the credit lol cheers

And man, this movie....HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL!!! lol
I like what you did with the fighting, that was pretty creative bro. If you take your time and continue working on this this would be a kick-ass movie Very Happy

Im glad im the first to say that I WAS ACTUALLY ENJOYING THAT :), and its kinda sad to see this go in the unfinished section...If you want, Ill help you with it. This'll give me a chance to practice my skills again Razz
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on 3/6/2011, 12:21 am
I won't critique this. It's really good though. You finished it.

6.5/10.

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on 3/6/2011, 5:47 am
MOTHERFLIPPIN' HUGE STAGE SIZE!

Well, I actually liked this, BUT DAMMIT YOU DROPPED IT.

Won't make a critique >:[
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on 3/6/2011, 10:38 am
the char idea is good but I just didn't like how this vid came out he needs to be more stealthy,to kill the enemy before they know what hit em.plus yea I used effects wrong.this vid is a fail but the char himself will be used again. Inu is an awesome char I need to do a vid to do him proper justice.

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on 3/6/2011, 2:33 pm
BLASUKE UCHEGRO!!!
nice, n lol i can see where boredum took over

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on 3/6/2011, 3:01 pm
i though he was a kirby frist because you could only see his head XD
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