Go down

How's my hair?

5 - 16%
7 - 22%
6 - 19%
3 - 9%
3 - 9%
8 - 25%
 
Total Votes: 32
 
LoneVeritas
LoneVeritas
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 1138
Registration date : 2010-06-29
Location : Narnia

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 2:32 am
UPDATED 2/20/11

Current stuff I know about so don't criticize me for these anymore:
1. Effect rape.
2. repetitive.
3. Too fast.
4. Find better effects
5. Reserved

UPDATE 2/20/11
Someone asked for the swf. version of this so here are the links.
SET THE QUALITY TO LOW!!!

Part 1 http://www.truploader.com/view/015890

Part 2 http://www.truploader.com/view/041156


Why two parts? At the time, PART 1 was getting laggy and I didn't know how to reduce it at the time. So I made another flash document. In other words, another .swf. Tolerable if you ask me. :/
A lot smoother at some parts, but laggy as hell on others.

YOUTUBE VERSION!!!


COPY AND PASTED DESCRIPTION FROM YOUTUBE BECAUSE I'M TOO LAZY TO MAKE ANOTHER! :3
"Well this is what I've been working on. Hopefully this will light a flare in my somewhat dead channel (attention not for egotistical purposes).
I started back in October, procrastinated for about 2 months, and had a sudden burst of motivation to animate for the last week lol.
This is my second animation (with the exception of Jellawl ... which shouldn't even count .. trust me, it doesn't) wielding the awesome powers of Flash.

Just some background knowledge before you comment:
1. Mukuro is the guy with blue hair. He uses illusions that usually have to do with fire, so those random volcanic eruptions disappear like illusions, hence why they aren't leaving any landmarks behind. Yet ... they do damage ... Same goes for all his other illusions throughout the video.

2. Hibari is the guy with the black hair. He wields tofas empowered by "cloud flames" which is basically purple fire that has a tendency to expand or duplicate. I gave him cloud slashes that extend out of his tofas to make things more interesting, rather than seeing Hibari always try to attack Mukuro straight-on.

Despite already adding it in the credits. Thank you Thespritas."

Nao then. Constructive criticism. Simply saying, "ZOMG, THIS SUCKS" ain't helping anyone. :/
This animation won Animation Of The Week on June/16




Last edited by ShadowmanX125 on 2/20/2011, 2:08 pm; edited 6 times in total

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Yghjhj10
xKAreloadedx
xKAreloadedx
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 28
Number of posts : 1522
Registration date : 2010-07-20
Location : I forgot...

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 3:04 am
Alright, first things first.

Good Job :)

I like watching something that is different from your average animations. The intro especially, was epically done. Again, good job on that Very Happy
I like that you tried to be original and the music sync was pretty awsome, however i feel that as i got more and more into the movie, it got repetitive. Like the camera moving around the characters, it looks nice but two or three times are too many, in my opinion anyway. Another thing were the camera shakes, i felt that the shaking was so intense at some points that it got difficult to keep up with all of the action.

Overall 7.5/10
good:
Original, nice camera angles, music sync was awsome
improve on:
the shakyness of the camera, some scenes seem repetitive.

that was my review, hope it helps.
LoneVeritas
LoneVeritas
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 1138
Registration date : 2010-06-29
Location : Narnia

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 3:23 am
Indeed, it did help. Thankies. :3

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Yghjhj10
Mistah_Jayden
Mistah_Jayden
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 30
Number of posts : 2010
Registration date : 2009-04-06
Location : New York City

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 9:55 am
It's pretty awesome.
But as said it got repetitive and you need to work on the fighting choreography
The whole 3D thing was well done. But some of the effects really sucked balls.
Sometimes I kinda got confused to what was going on as well.

But when you get better your animations will kick ass I like your style.

Good shit you homo Very Happy
NS01
NS01
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 27
Number of posts : 6082
Registration date : 2009-09-07
Location : UK england

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 9:57 am
Sexy hair.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

"On my business card, I am a corporate president. In my mind, I am a game developer. But in my heart, I am a gamer." - Satoru Iwata 1959-2015
LoneVeritas
LoneVeritas
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 1138
Registration date : 2010-06-29
Location : Narnia

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 10:30 am
@Mistah_Jayden wrote:It's pretty awesome.
But as said it got repetitive and you need to work on the fighting choreography
The whole 3D thing was well done. But some of the effects really sucked balls.
Sometimes I kinda got confused to what was going on as well.

But when you get better your animations will kick ass I like your style.

Good shit you homo Very Happy
Alrighty, bad effects. Repeition. Check, thank you. :3
NintendoStar01 wrote:Sexy hair.
Indeed.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Yghjhj10
darkdragon581
darkdragon581
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 2994
Registration date : 2009-12-05
Location : Austin, Minnesota

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 2:22 pm
biggest effect rape EVAH
Toxic
Toxic
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 108
Number of posts : 5139
Registration date : 2010-10-03
Location : Guess

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 2:31 pm
Alright I enjoyed the flash. I noticed that the black screen was kinda off at one point. The scene felt a little reppetive a lot and it kinda made me yawn once. The ending was very good and not like your clifthangers. I would have prefered a better song for the 2nd scene but that just me.

4/5 O:
Ping
Ping
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 20161
Registration date : 2010-09-15
Location : Madison Wisconsin

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 5:02 pm
If some noobass fool comes in and starts posting about how he thinks this animation had 3D in it, I'mma beat the crap out of him.


Parts were a bit too fast but it overall, it had a LOT of action. I love this. I won't be able to do a review now. Maybe tonight.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Ping10
@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
Revler
Revler
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 23
Number of posts : 794
Registration date : 2010-12-21
Location : In a box

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 5:23 pm
I think I was the one who gave you motivation, with my progress check.

This was mad sexy, buttttt at times, I couldn't tell what was going on because the VCAM was moved violently.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Spoiler:
Hibari vs Mukuro Derp_luigi_by_leocartoon1yt-d4un39g Thanks leo for the derp luigi Very Happy
LoneVeritas
LoneVeritas
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 1138
Registration date : 2010-06-29
Location : Narnia

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 5:44 pm
@Revler wrote:I think I was the one who gave you motivation, with my progress check.

This was mad sexy, buttttt at times, I couldn't tell what was going on because the VCAM was moved violently.
To be honest ... no. T_T

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Yghjhj10
Revler
Revler
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 23
Number of posts : 794
Registration date : 2010-12-21
Location : In a box

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 6:21 pm
>:C I am dissapoint

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Spoiler:
Hibari vs Mukuro Derp_luigi_by_leocartoon1yt-d4un39g Thanks leo for the derp luigi Very Happy
Fallen Kittty-Night
Fallen Kittty-Night
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 24
Number of posts : 679
Registration date : 2010-12-19
Location : British Virgin Islands

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 6:39 pm
This had 3D in it. Now someone kick my ass. ;D

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Spritasbanner
LoneVeritas
LoneVeritas
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 1138
Registration date : 2010-06-29
Location : Narnia

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 10:23 pm
who added "GAY"? D: <

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Yghjhj10
darkdragon581
darkdragon581
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 2994
Registration date : 2009-12-05
Location : Austin, Minnesota

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/16/2011, 11:07 pm
i did, if you have a problem

Hibari vs Mukuro Images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ9OcDZygjN_6u5WGwRMhf7hogDBdDmqnPq8H93p5wp3DISXzRNUg&t=1
LoneVeritas
LoneVeritas
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 1138
Registration date : 2010-06-29
Location : Narnia

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 1:14 am

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Yghjhj10
Face
Face
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 31
Number of posts : 13013
Registration date : 2010-04-29
Location : Returned-ed

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 7:17 am
@darkdragon581 wrote:biggest effect rape EVAH
I agree with this man you get a cool shadowman.next time not so much effects it was pretty to watch but halfway through I got lost in the vid.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Untitl15
NS01
NS01
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 27
Number of posts : 6082
Registration date : 2009-09-07
Location : UK england

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 7:57 am
Lol GAY.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

"On my business card, I am a corporate president. In my mind, I am a game developer. But in my heart, I am a gamer." - Satoru Iwata 1959-2015
LoneVeritas
LoneVeritas
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 1138
Registration date : 2010-06-29
Location : Narnia

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 9:06 am
Updated description. :/
Thanks guys by the way. :3

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Yghjhj10
Ping
Ping
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 20161
Registration date : 2010-09-15
Location : Madison Wisconsin

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 9:20 am
@Fallen Kittty-Night wrote:This had 3D in it. Now someone kick my ass. ;D



...


Hibari vs Mukuro DAMN-IT-IM-GOING-TO-KICK-YOUR-ASS

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Ping10
@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
Face
Face
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 31
Number of posts : 13013
Registration date : 2010-04-29
Location : Returned-ed

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 10:51 am
Pingboy wrote:If some noobass fool comes in and starts posting about how he thinks this animation had 3D in it, I'mma beat the crap out of him.
not saying that it is cause its not but, who made you the authority on 3d again?I say until you drop your so-called 3D enriched vids you shouldn't attack the new guys so much.remember not to long ago you one of them.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Untitl15
Ping
Ping
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 20161
Registration date : 2010-09-15
Location : Madison Wisconsin

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 11:54 am
madfacespriter wrote:
Pingboy wrote:If some noobass fool comes in and starts posting about how he thinks this animation had 3D in it, I'mma beat the crap out of him.
not saying that it is cause its not but, who made you the authority on 3d again?I say until you drop your so-called 3D enriched vids you shouldn't attack the new guys so much.remember not to long ago you one of them.
I wasn't serious.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Ping10
@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
Face
Face
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 31
Number of posts : 13013
Registration date : 2010-04-29
Location : Returned-ed

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 1:42 pm
Pingboy wrote:
madfacespriter wrote:
Pingboy wrote:If some noobass fool comes in and starts posting about how he thinks this animation had 3D in it, I'mma beat the crap out of him.
not saying that it is cause its not but, who made you the authority on 3d again?I say until you drop your so-called 3D enriched vids you shouldn't attack the new guys so much.remember not to long ago you one of them.
I wasn't serious.
still,Im dying in anticipation of your vids stop teasing and and give up that ass....I mean vid LOL

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Untitl15
Ping
Ping
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 25
Number of posts : 20161
Registration date : 2010-09-15
Location : Madison Wisconsin

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 2:47 pm
madfacespriter wrote:
Pingboy wrote:
madfacespriter wrote:
Pingboy wrote:If some noobass fool comes in and starts posting about how he thinks this animation had 3D in it, I'mma beat the crap out of him.
not saying that it is cause its not but, who made you the authority on 3d again?I say until you drop your so-called 3D enriched vids you shouldn't attack the new guys so much.remember not to long ago you one of them.
I wasn't serious.
still,Im dying in anticipation of your vids stop teasing and and give up that ass....I mean vid LOL

LOL!!! Don't worry.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Ping10
@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
Fallen Kittty-Night
Fallen Kittty-Night
Spritan
Spritan
Age : 24
Number of posts : 679
Registration date : 2010-12-19
Location : British Virgin Islands

Hibari vs Mukuro Empty Re: Hibari vs Mukuro

2/17/2011, 6:29 pm
Pingboy wrote:
@Fallen Kittty-Night wrote:This had 3D in it. Now someone kick my ass. ;D



...


Hibari vs Mukuro DAMN-IT-IM-GOING-TO-KICK-YOUR-ASS
Oh no! D;

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Hibari vs Mukuro Spritasbanner
Back to top
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum