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1/29/2011, 10:10 pm
yes,no lange,please,no.
you cant even see his face.
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1/30/2011, 12:01 am
Okay guys...(God im spriting alot today lol) updated again :)...gettin better and better (in my opinion) just keep critiquing XD
...and by the way, i like to draw the back profile of my characters first so....yeah :/ no face yet
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1/30/2011, 12:04 am
his head looks like a marshmallow :3
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1/30/2011, 12:07 am
@darkdragon581 wrote:his head looks like a marshmallow :3
a very well cooked marshmellow :3
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1/30/2011, 4:57 am
He looks pretty good.

But, you went and kept the pillow-shading on his hair and his jacket (or shirt, IDK). The pants look better now, but the sides look too symmetrical.

BTW, when you re-shade him again, try following these tutorials :
Mark's Pixel Art Tutorial (shading tutorial)
Kiwinuptuo's Shading Tutorial

I give it a 4/5 because of it's flaws. But its design is pretty nice.
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1/30/2011, 7:53 am
Those tutorials should come in handy Very Happy
Thanks Leo.

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1/30/2011, 8:59 am
leocartoon1 wrote:He looks pretty good.

But, you went and kept the pillow-shading on his hair and his jacket (or shirt, IDK). The pants look better now, but the sides look too symmetrical.

BTW, when you re-shade him again, try following these tutorials :
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Kiwinuptuo's Shading Tutorial

I give it a 4/5 because of it's flaws. But its design is pretty nice.
ok sweet, and btw now i see what you meant by pillow shading. I got u bro, when i come back from work, im going to fix all the little details XD cuz well....i want that 5/5 :face: and its good practice so.....yeah Serious
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1/30/2011, 4:22 pm
third update, small but critique is appreciated
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1/30/2011, 4:41 pm
It's now pretty good. It now looks as if the sun was placed in the top-right instead of being just in front of the character.

5/5.
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1/30/2011, 6:19 pm
leocartoon1 wrote:It's now pretty good. It now looks as if the sun was placed in the top-right instead of being just in front of the character.

5/5.
sweet, if u have any last advice, twould b awsum cuz once i settle down on his appearance, im gonna sheet him Cool my 2nd OC Very Happy
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1/30/2011, 6:46 pm
swordsmen are awesome I working on one (he's in my sig ) still need a voice for him......

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1/30/2011, 9:05 pm
The new one is pretty kick-a.

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@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
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1/30/2011, 10:40 pm
That looks pretty good. The shading in general is pillow shaded but thats not really a big deal.
Madfacespriter your icon......that LSW head doesn't go with that body bro....
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1/30/2011, 11:05 pm
@Mistah_Jayden wrote:That looks pretty good. The shading in general is pillow shaded but thats not really a big deal.
Madfacespriter your icon......that LSW head doesn't go with that body bro....
LOL I know this was scraped a long time ago

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1/30/2011, 11:31 pm
That's saaad lol.

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1/31/2011, 12:48 am
madfacespriter wrote:swordsmen are awesome I working on one (he's in my sig ) still need a voice for him......
i know right!! xD, one day tho...ill make a fighter
Pingboy wrote:The new one is pretty kick-a.
thanks :)
@Mistah_Jayden wrote:That looks pretty good. The shading in general is pillow shaded but thats not really a big deal.
thx lol i tried not to but....meh ill get the hang of it(thanks to Leo Very Happy )
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1/31/2011, 1:04 am
How long did I take you?

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1/31/2011, 5:40 am
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leocartoon1 wrote:It's now pretty good. It now looks as if the sun was placed in the top-right instead of being just in front of the character.

5/5.
sweet, if u have any last advice, twould b awsum cuz once i settle down on his appearance, im gonna sheet him Cool my 2nd OC Very Happy

Any last advice....

Well, I don't have none. I would say dithering but nevermind that, as it would make your sprite look full of unnecessary pixels and what not.

So, my last advice is... keep up the good work.
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1/31/2011, 10:00 am
still looks pillow-shaded. if you're having trouble shading, draw a sun, and try and imagine where the light would go and the shading would go.

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1/31/2011, 10:22 am
blitzkrieg667 wrote:still looks pillow-shaded. if you're having trouble shading, draw a sun, and try and imagine where the light would go and the shading would go.
Or he could look at some real jeans.

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1/31/2011, 12:07 pm
Pingboy wrote:How long did I take you?
about a couple of hours to come up with the base, and about 1 for the details and shading
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leocartoon1 wrote:It's now pretty good. It now looks as if the sun was placed in the top-right instead of being just in front of the character.

5/5.
sweet, if u have any last advice, twould b awsum cuz once i settle down on his appearance, im gonna sheet him Cool my 2nd OC Very Happy

Any last advice....

Well, I don't have none. I would say dithering but nevermind that, as it would make your sprite look full of unnecessary pixels and what not.

So, my last advice is... keep up the good work.
k cool, ill do that xD
blitzkrieg667 wrote:still looks pillow-shaded. if you're having trouble shading, draw a sun, and try and imagine where the light would go and the shading would go.
i did do that, the only thing thats really pillow shaded kinda are the pants and well, w.e im not gonna fret too much about that. If you imagine the sun as being on the top right you'll see that the shading is fairly well put.
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2/1/2011, 11:15 am
It's a bit pillow shaded. The pants. Coat too.

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2/1/2011, 11:30 am
Pillow-shaded; No defined light-source. You can't really tell where the light's coming from. the head is better, but the sprite in general is still pillow-shaded.

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2/1/2011, 12:10 pm
So in terms of a non-pillow shaded sprite, ALL of the pixels in the pants would have to be different shades?

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2/1/2011, 12:34 pm
What? I didn't say that.

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