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12/22/2010, 11:29 am
@Renny wrote:The new Broly is aight.
Cheers.

Need any improvements?
I say his left arm may need mending.
*edit* I moved his head a bit more to the right...

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12/22/2010, 4:54 pm
NintendoStar01 wrote:I have created this thread so I could post up my custom JUS sprites, basically I want your thoughts and opinions on the sprite itself, mostly points on how I could improve the sprite(s).

100% Custom Broly!
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My first custom Broly sprite, not bad huh? Razz
Kinda fun to make, made a few mistakes, but yeah I think it turned out quite good.
Should I make a sheet of this? What do you think?
I'm new to making custom sprites, so go easy on me Wink

There's alot wrong about the broly when it comes to the body. everything else is ok or decently done.
The muscles look sorta deformed and aren't as big as they should be. His torso looks all cramped up and the left hand probably needs to be reshaded.

other than that awesome job.
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12/22/2010, 5:01 pm
I sort of disagree with his muscles looking all deformed, his muscles are actually that big.
Take a look :)

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I agree with the torso being cramped up, I will work on that some more, also the left hand...I kinda rushed it there, my bad Razz

Thanks for the critique dude.

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12/22/2010, 5:06 pm
It is deformed lol Not size wise.
He has a huge bicep and triceps but the elbow part is too thin for the arm.
And if you were aiming for accuracy his muscles actually need to be bigger than what you have lol
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12/22/2010, 5:08 pm
@Mistah_Jayden wrote:It is deformed lol Not size wise.
He has a huge bicep and triceps but the elbow part is too thin for the arm.
And if you were aiming for accuracy his muscles actually need to be bigger than what you have lol


Oh I see.

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@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
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12/22/2010, 5:09 pm
I see, I thought you mean't the actual size of his arms lmao...

So I should start everything again? Sad


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12/22/2010, 5:17 pm
Nah not at all. I Can show you what I mean. Send the sprite to me and I'll make a mini tut on how to fix stuff like this for future references.

Everything is great you just need to touch his muscles up to give him the scary brolic roid rage steriods look he has lol
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12/22/2010, 5:18 pm
Look at this man. He can sprite anythng within 10 seconds. How can he-...?

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@darkdragon581 wrote:ping, i don't see you getting 'boodie' anytime soon, i don't care if your black, its most likely not going to happen
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12/22/2010, 5:18 pm
Lmao, thanks man! I really appreciate it!

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12/22/2010, 6:12 pm
@Mistah_Jayden wrote:Nah not at all. I Can show you what I mean. Send the sprite to me and I'll make a mini tut on how to fix stuff like this for future references.

Everything is great you just need to touch his muscles up to give him the scary brolic roid rage steriods look he has lol

LOl LSW and JUS Pr0?

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12/22/2010, 7:09 pm
LSW sii.

JUS....iunno xD
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12/22/2010, 8:10 pm
He is a liar. I'm just kidding.

I like his JUS. I guess his sprites are that good.

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12/22/2010, 8:13 pm
There should be in Sprite Challenges:

Challenge Jayden to make sprites.

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12/22/2010, 8:15 pm
Hell no. There are just some people who can't make sprites.

Maybe you can. But I'm not THAT good.

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12/22/2010, 10:42 pm
Ehh, Im really new to it so I suck Very Happy

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12/22/2010, 10:53 pm
So it really did take a while for you to finish a sprite, huh?

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12/22/2010, 11:04 pm
im making a jus style sprite now.but only ping knows what it is...
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12/23/2010, 9:36 am
I find it quite fun making JUS sprites, they're probably the easiest ones to customize.

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12/23/2010, 11:15 am
NintendoStar01 wrote:I find it quite fun making JUS sprites, they're probably the easiest ones to customize.

Jump Ultimate Star punk ):< It's hard animating JUS D:

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1/28/2011, 5:31 pm
NintendoStar01 wrote:I have created this thread so I could post up my custom JUS sprites, basically I want your thoughts and opinions on the sprite itself, mostly points on how I could improve the sprite(s).

100% Custom Broly!
Spoiler:
God Of War Kratos JUS (Update 17:39 GMT) - Page 2 Broly_11

My first custom Broly sprite, not bad huh? Razz
Kinda fun to make, made a few mistakes, but yeah I think it turned out quite good.
Should I make a sheet of this? What do you think?
I'm new to making custom sprites, so go easy on me Wink

Goku and Zoro Fusion (Potara earings)

Spoiler:
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I don't know how to make the image smaller so I put it as a spoiler.
This is my first custom sprite ever!
I'm going to use it for an animation, but I still need some pointers so I can improve it.

I am obscurely a mugen coder and have negligible to no sprite editing skill. I would be very pleased to have a completed version of your Broly, and if not infringing upon your time, would like to have his ordinary form, super saiyan form, legendary super saiyan form, and legendary super saiyan 3 form. Legendary super saiyan 3 would be the least important one.
Here are examples of my mugen works:
Son Goku: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rItqlKqrcp8
Prince Vegeta: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rEC7bm2wEQY
Uzumaki Naruto: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9F5_sj2JdR4
Kurosaki Ichigo: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3n9EAtbVXw

Thank you.
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1/28/2011, 5:52 pm
So far I have only made one sprite, that sprite lol. I'm just your average sprite beginner, I don't know about giving Broly attacks. But it's worth a shot Very Happy

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1/28/2011, 5:54 pm
Good luck NS.

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1/28/2011, 6:41 pm
If you're going to make a Broly sheet lemme know. I'll try to help out occasionally.
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1/28/2011, 11:27 pm
NintendoStar01 wrote:So far I have only made one sprite, that sprite lol. I'm just your average sprite beginner, I don't know about giving Broly attacks. But it's worth a shot Very Happy

Nice to know you might be willing to try. Thank you.
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1/29/2011, 12:07 am
dude thats pretty good but too good for a first timer in my opinion

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