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9/13/2010, 1:54 am
I need some good ol fashioned critique ! right now im just getting into the world of kirby so this probally seems very simple but hopefully it will get better! Very Happy
anways before you ask i should clear some things up

1. It is not a hollow mask or anything of the sort, it is his skull :3
2. That is not a mini sword it is a knife
3. His basic backstory was that he was fed up with being a waddle dee and never standing any challenge to enemies so he made a deal with the proverbial devil and his body was filled with dammed souls from hell ( ties into his face being ripped off D:* yeah but anyways this grants him the ability to see into the distance and threw objects if you dont understand the distance thing here is an example * https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a1ABo7g9K40 2:10 to 2:35 * another aspect of this is that he gains basic knowledge from souls but he also gain their weakness's * EG afraid of heights or maybe dogs or whatever * but he dosent feel all of them at the same time its mostly completely random from what he feels or gains from them

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i havent come up with a name yet , so hopefully i can come up with one soon :3

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Btw first post here and glad to be a new member!
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9/13/2010, 2:07 am
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9/13/2010, 9:20 am
... LOL!
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9/13/2010, 9:27 am
@Mr Lange wrote:Kirby Oc  Ezwheels

ow man thats.......thats ow

oh yea can i use him in meh series as for a name i say spawn

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9/13/2010, 10:43 am
Another kirby FC. I never thought such an innocent character would be degraded to the new sonic. Well at least his games are still good.
And at least you didn't over power him. AT ALL actually.

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9/13/2010, 11:43 am
Woah sweet character!! Would we be able to use him when you finish? Very Happy
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9/13/2010, 12:32 pm
@Eric wrote:Another kirby FC. I never thought such an innocent character would be degraded to the new sonic. Well at least his games are still good.
And at least you didn't over power him. AT ALL actually.

nah custom sonics tend to look like total trash
oh yea KRA can i use star seeker as the name of meh series??? (say yes n u get a map to a pot of gold cheers )

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9/13/2010, 1:26 pm
oh gawd BLAME DS FOR THIS >: (

Whatever, well, it's the first time I see a Kirby with a piece of his face missing.
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9/13/2010, 2:47 pm
leocartoon1 wrote:oh gawd BLAME DS FOR THIS >: (

Whatever, well, it's the first time I see a Kirby with a piece of his face missing.

yea it is DS's fault, lol

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9/13/2010, 4:30 pm
sigh now i dnt wanna use kirby sprites anymore -_-

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9/13/2010, 4:31 pm
@D3Anims wrote:
@Eric wrote:Another kirby FC. I never thought such an innocent character would be degraded to the new sonic. Well at least his games are still good.
And at least you didn't over power him. AT ALL actually.

nah custom sonics tend to look like total trash
oh yea KRA can i use star seeker as the name of meh series??? (say yes n u get a map to a pot of gold cheers )
Uhh.. I guess. :) But you'd have to make it relate to the series somehow like.... making Kirby use the Star Rod or that the Star Rod is an all mighty weapon or something.
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9/13/2010, 4:36 pm
....so how is the lucario movie an example

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9/13/2010, 5:55 pm
@D3anims
Yes you can! i read up on your series and it really sounds interesting!
Spawn it has a nice ring to it

@Eric
Yeah kirbys looking to be a new sonic but you never know i only really saw a huge
increase in them when DS made his series

Thanks! i really didnt want a god mod kirby :3 btw im in total love with this site now!!

@KRAnimation
Yeah! im hoping to get some stuff done but because of school *grade ten provincial exams D:*
ive been cut down to one hour a day of my computer BUT i can go on it on the weekend !

@leocartoon1
Yes well at least he got his goal of making kirby famous! lol
i think i need to edit the face part to make it looks more of his skull rather then a mask :p

@5h0ck
the lucario movie is an example because when he uses the power of aura he sees like miles ahead
of him so thats kinda what my guy can do ... lol

IM IN TOTAL LOVE WITH THE SPRITAS!!!!!!!!!!!
also i was thinking of making like evertime he uses one of the souls it dissapears back to hell so to keep up his power *he uses the souls as like energy* he would have to kill people
... sound okay? im just trying to add on but i probally dont have to

so how does spawn sound??? as a name

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9/13/2010, 6:10 pm
I've seen Spawn somewhere else. Just need to remember. But it sounds good. Especially for a... skull lol

Also, the "he would have to kill people" to "keep up his power" is a pretty good idea.


LET'S KILL KIRBY derp derp derp
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9/13/2010, 6:16 pm
@KRAnimation wrote:
@D3Anims wrote:
@Eric wrote:Another kirby FC. I never thought such an innocent character would be degraded to the new sonic. Well at least his games are still good.
And at least you didn't over power him. AT ALL actually.

nah custom sonics tend to look like total trash
oh yea KRA can i use star seeker as the name of meh series??? (say yes n u get a map to a pot of gold cheers )
Uhh.. I guess. :) But you'd have to make it relate to the series somehow like.... making Kirby use the Star Rod or that the Star Rod is an all mighty weapon or something.

@EZWheels wrote:@D3anims
Yes you can! i read up on your series and it really sounds interesting!
Spawn it has a nice ring to it

@Eric
Yeah kirbys looking to be a new sonic but you never know i only really saw a huge
increase in them when DS made his series

Thanks! i really didnt want a god mod kirby :3 btw im in total love with this site now!!

@KRAnimation
Yeah! im hoping to get some stuff done but because of school *grade ten provincial exams D:*
ive been cut down to one hour a day of my computer BUT i can go on it on the weekend !

@leocartoon1
Yes well at least he got his goal of making kirby famous! lol
i think i need to edit the face part to make it looks more of his skull rather then a mask :p

@5h0ck
the lucario movie is an example because when he uses the power of aura he sees like miles ahead
of him so thats kinda what my guy can do ... lol

IM IN TOTAL LOVE WITH THE SPRITAS!!!!!!!!!!!
also i was thinking of making like evertime he uses one of the souls it dissapears back to hell so to keep up his power *he uses the souls as like energy* he would have to kill people
... sound okay? im just trying to add on but i probally dont have to

so how does spawn sound??? as a name

w00t now im back in the degradation of kirby sprites

@EZ: yay, n spawn sounds perfect

@ KRA: it will play a huge part in it (idk bout star rod yet but they will be looking for star seals sooner or later)
and as promised your map sir: Kirby Oc  Rainbow-pot-gold_~vl0011b089 now just find a rainbow n slide down

@leo: kurbi wont let him kil kirby >=( or will he scratch

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9/13/2010, 6:34 pm
Isn't spawn that superhero from hell?
and how about instead having to kill random people he takes the soul of his vanquished enemies...then in a vfuture ep one of the enemies souls he took tries to take control of him...screwing up his personal life.

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9/13/2010, 6:37 pm
:O that is like so much better then just random people!
yush! heres a little picture of mai boi spawn :3 Kirby Oc  Spawn9

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9/13/2010, 6:39 pm
I'm surprised that no one made any sprites of him..and if they have I havn't seen any

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9/13/2010, 6:49 pm
well here are some , google is my friend :p im constantly writing down these great ideas you guys have :3
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9/13/2010, 6:50 pm
Maybe i should give spawn a cape ! :3

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9/13/2010, 7:10 pm
I'm surprised I've never noticed that

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9/13/2010, 8:10 pm
@EZWheels wrote:Maybe i should give spawn a cape ! :3

nah capes are the #1 cause of death to many heros and villians alike, but if you do i suggest metaknights cape or hi-jump kirby cape. (meta you gotta recolor hi-jump cape is already red i think)

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9/13/2010, 8:40 pm
Sweet. Now I can buy anything I want, heh heh..

@EZWheels: Thanks dude. Very Happy


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9/13/2010, 8:55 pm
lol the cape was supposed to be a joke ( a bad one at that -_-) lol

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9/13/2010, 9:05 pm
oh..........

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